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1 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 2018 年高三一模作文匯編 1 黃浦區(qū) 2017 年已接近尾聲 還記得年初你為自己定下的小目標(biāo)嗎 不知你是否實(shí)現(xiàn)了你的小目標(biāo) 發(fā)一個(gè) 微信朋友圈來回顧一下吧 文中請(qǐng)不要出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名人名 你的朋友圈文字內(nèi)容需包括 1 你的 2017 年度小目標(biāo) 2 你為實(shí)現(xiàn)年度小目標(biāo)所作的努力 3 你實(shí)現(xiàn) 或沒有實(shí)現(xiàn) 年度小目標(biāo)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié) 范文 My new year s resolution for 2017 was that I should be able to communicate with foreign people in English To achieve this goal I had asked my English teacher for help According to her suggestions I made up a plan Firstly I started with simply reading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording Then I tried to learn phonetics and practice one syllable after another again and again I started with a single word then a phrase a sentence a paragraph and finally the whole passage After 3 month practice I was able to read an article fluently without making any mistakes in pronunciation I felt happy Next I practiced my listening By listening to a passage four times I required myself to take it down without spelling errors or any information blank Last but not least I installed an app called Shanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking It s like having conversations with a robot I had to understand what it said to me and answer its questions accordingly After practicing for almost 8 months I had my first talking session with an American teacher in our school I was proud of myself What I have learnt from this experience is something as a saying goes no pain no gain Though the process of learning could be dull and tiring it s worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal Even if I didn t it s still a valuable part of my life 閱卷作文 8 8 4 20 The wonderful year of 2017 is drawing to an end I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 2017 since staying healthy is crucial to ensuring my study thus better prepare myself for Gaokao To achieve my goal of keeping fit here are some efforts I ve taken throughout the year On the very first day of 2017 I downloaded a fitness app called Keep Following the fitness instructions the app offered I exercised every other night before I go to bed Also I did some research into the daily nutrition I need in order to stay healthy both physically and mentally after which I devised a moderate dieting plan Apart from the above I ve invited family members and friends to join me so that we can encourage each other and exchange fitness experience So far the record shown on my fitness app shows that I ve done well this year reaching a record high of 200 training times in total Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time I m glad I have stuck to my plan It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all of my energy and passion and most of all perseverance Some rules apply to study So I hope I will keep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2018 237 words 點(diǎn)評(píng) 1 文本結(jié)構(gòu)段落清晰 符合作文題目要求 1 第一段明確告知自己的年度小目標(biāo)是什么 2 第二段有總起句 段落中有清晰的標(biāo)記詞 如 also apart from 告知讀者自己所做的努力 且努力 的行為都非常具體 3 第三段對(duì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)的總結(jié)可以再和第二段的三個(gè)努力匹配些 a 借助科技的力量 app b 借助科學(xué)的 力量 did research into the daily nutrition c 組團(tuán)抗擊惰性 2 在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力比較強(qiáng)的基礎(chǔ)上 可以考慮文字的進(jìn)一步精煉 是否有 廢話 字?jǐn)?shù)建議不超過 200 此學(xué)生語(yǔ)言能力強(qiáng) 中等學(xué)生 160 左右即可 精練而準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)也是思維和表達(dá)功力的體現(xiàn) 7 8 4 19 Greeting from the end of 2017 It s now the time to conclude our yearly goals again On the new year s eve I set up two goals for the year to getter better grades and to lose weight and I m proud to announce that I ve accomplished the first one To realize the goals much effort has been put in throughout the year First of all I changed my attitudes towards 2 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 various subjects I ve spent more time on them as you might already know and try to find my own strength and weaknesses and strived hard to overcome my weak points In addition I ve found my own pace of studying which I regard as the most precious reward of this year s effort Secondly I began to take a more active part in sports this year I took every opportunity I have to exercise and take sports lessons at a gym near my apartment Though I haven t lose much weight I feel myself much healthier than ever before To conclude how I ve made these progress here comes my years motto no pains no gains No matter how hard it might be stick to the goal and never quit and never dream of shortcuts to success So if you want to achieve something just try hard no matter what the result might be you re surely going to benefit from the process Good luck everyone and I wish you a happy successful new year in 2018 241 words 點(diǎn)評(píng) 1 有讀者意識(shí) 明確知曉是在朋友圈發(fā)的年度總結(jié) 所以開頭結(jié)尾很應(yīng)景 2 段落結(jié)構(gòu)總體比較清晰 符合作文題目要求 1 第一段告知了自己的兩個(gè)年度目標(biāo) 2 第二段中有總體句 標(biāo)記詞 如 first of all in addition 方便讀者閱讀 但總體表達(dá)都比較含 糊 建議可以更加清晰化具體化 改變的行為不具體是因?yàn)槟繕?biāo)不具體導(dǎo)致的 特別是第二點(diǎn) 如果學(xué)生把目標(biāo)定位 今年我要參加多少節(jié)健身課 或者我要完成多少公里的跑步 那么行為可 以更具體 對(duì)是否可以達(dá)到自己年度目標(biāo)的檢測(cè)也可以更明確 3 第三段的經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié)與之前努力的匹配度不高 如果要寫 no pains no gains 那么第二段里應(yīng)該有 具體的自己在遭遇瓶頸或者難以堅(jiān)持的時(shí)候是如何咬牙堅(jiān)持下來的 4 Good luck 建議可以另起一段 3 文本字?jǐn)?shù)偏長(zhǎng) 7 6 3 16 At the beginning of this year I have made up my mind to achieve a goal That was I hoped that I could lose my weight With the passing by I have achieved my goal The following are some of my conclusion of this objective To reach my objective I worked out a series of plans To begin with I designed a healthy diet menu which excluded unhealthy foods that I was fond of before That s the basic of losing weight Secondly I went to park or sporting places regularly to do various sports As we all know the more exercise you do the more heats you will consume Last but not least I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life From this experience I conclude that once you have a goal you should stick to every hardship so that you may reach the mountain top The process may be full of difficulties and you are likely want to give up Go ahead and then you will find there is nothing can hit down you 191 words 點(diǎn)評(píng) 1 段落結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰 符合作文題目要求 2 第二段中的標(biāo)記詞 to begin with secondly last but not least 不恰當(dāng) 第三個(gè)努力的行為 I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life 的內(nèi)容不恰當(dāng) 部分與主題無關(guān) 如 enrich my life 3 第三段的總結(jié) too general 基本與第二段的努力行為沒有關(guān)系 根據(jù)第二段的內(nèi)容 經(jīng)驗(yàn)應(yīng)該是 管 住嘴 邁開腿 4 字?jǐn)?shù)偏多 建議 160 左右 5 6 2 13 At the end of 2017 I can t help thinking the aim what I have set about making a great profess in math before the 2017 come Math is a terrible for me to study well To study math well as I firmly believe only by practicing more can I gain a good mark In order to realize this aim I get up earlier everyday so that I can have more time to do the math exercise I ask teacher many questions about the math My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math I always feel nervous because I think it is very difficult for me to study math well But being encouraged by the parents and teacher I have confidence Finally I realized it I want to share my experience to the students which have the same problem as me Practice makes perfect If we want gain a good mark we should practice more 162 words 點(diǎn)評(píng) 3 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 1 涵蓋了作文題目要求的三個(gè)部分 2 第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理 做了三個(gè)努力 a 每天早起做數(shù)學(xué)題目 b 有問題勤問老師 c 心理焦 慮時(shí)向媽媽傾訴 要說我做了什么 而不是文中 My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math 3 由此 第三段的經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié)是 a practice makes perfect b 多向他人求助 4 4 1 9 The year of 2017 will be over I always think it is a year with my ambition I still rember the day which is the first of 2017 On that day I praied I could get higher scores in the test I made my plan to get close to the top of the rank For the sake of good marks what I must have is a serious attitude It was the most important things for me to insist the plan I decided to read books of English It was the most difficult subject for me I recited the words and vocabulary day by day And the reading is an another problem Because of the lack of vocabulary I couldn t understand the passage clearly I started reading the English lessons in every morning That s good day for me that I could never forget Although I still not get my plan I still want to get higher score in next exam It was my ambition I believe I can do it next year Even though the life is tough to me 179 words 點(diǎn)評(píng) 1 結(jié)構(gòu)性缺失 沒有 經(jīng)驗(yàn)總結(jié) 2 第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理 a 每天背多少單詞 b 每天早晨讀多少時(shí)間英語(yǔ) c 每周 或每?jī)芍芑?每個(gè)月 讀 1 本英語(yǔ)書 2 普陀區(qū) 學(xué)校圖書館優(yōu)美的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境和豐富的文獻(xiàn)資源為學(xué)生們綜合素質(zhì)的提升提供了良好的平臺(tái) 為了進(jìn)一步 提高圖書館的服務(wù)水平 圖書館現(xiàn)向?qū)W生們征集建議 假如你是李華 寫信給圖書館負(fù)責(zé)人對(duì)圖書館的 現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析 并就此提出一些實(shí)用性的改進(jìn)建議 Dear Sir In response to your collecting suggestions to further improve our school library s service quality I am writing to put forward my humble advice hoping to be of some value Our school library with beautiful environment and a wide range of books and reference materials serves as a golden platform to promote students overall ability However there are still some problems remaining unsolved The available seats are always tight some vacant ones are occupied by students with their personal stuff and to make things even worse some of them do not appear in the library at all Besides sometimes it is noisy because the discussion area is not separated which makes students while learning hard to concentrate Also the network in our lab doesn t work well that it s not easy to have access to it when we are collecting information online For the above situation I suggest an exclusive room should be appointed as a meeting room where students are allowed to discuss Moreover rules should be made about the usage of the seats that if one person leaves his seat over 20 minutes the seat can be available to others And if possible put some fund to update our existing network I would be so glad if my advice is adopted I appreciate your devotion to the construction of our library and may our library be better and better Sincerely yours Li Hua 3 徐匯區(qū) 俗話說 萬事開頭難 All things are difficult before they are easy 你是否同意這一說 法 請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文 內(nèi)容包括 4 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 1 你對(duì)這句俗語(yǔ)的理解 2 結(jié)合生活中一個(gè)具體事例加以說明 注意 請(qǐng)勿透露本人真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱 范文 1 上中一模最高分 20 分 As an old saying goes All things are difficult before they are easy The widespread notion reveals the truth that we are likely to encounter setbacks when we start to do something but if we face them with perseverance and determination we will find the rest of the work easier Personally I am strongly in favour of the proverb and my own experience can well serve as case in point When I was a Senior One student I made up my mind to set up a science fiction community in our school I thought it would be a piece of cake but the first few weeks following my decision turned out tough To my disappointment few students showed interest in the community Filled with the bitterness of failure I was almost going to give up but the bottom of my heart urged me to keep calm and go on After weeks of struggle and every possible means tried I managed to find several members and once we started to hold activities more students became interested and joined our community What can be learnt from my experience is that perseverance carries true weight in our pursuit of success Life is never like those fairy tales and we in reality all tend to meet frustrations and setbacks in our lives Tricky as the situation might seem in the beginning we must always bear in mind that Every cloud has a silver lining and our efforts won t go in vain Nevertheless if we give up halfway chances are that we ll never see the easiness following the difficulties and he who is easily beaten to the ground by hardship is certain to end up achieve nothing To sum up the saying All things are difficult before they are easy us a perfect reminder that things all seem tough at the beginning Faced with difficulties we should cheer up and work with perseverance Thus success is bound to be within arm s reach 9 9 2 334 words 范文 2 It is said that all things are difficult before they re easy I couldn t agree with it more Life is no plain sailing nothing can be achieved with ease unless you have the quality of devotion and perseverance Once I went fishing with my father Initially I was very excited and full of confidence figuring Fishing how hard can it be You just sit there and wait for the fish to bite It s a piece of cake However as you can guess I had sat there for almost one hour yet I got nothing Soon I was distraught and impatient Just when I was about to quit my father turned around and said Be focused and wait Having nothing else to do I did what he said I calmed myself down and re concentrated on the pole Two hours later I gained my reward The experience has indeed taught me something That is all things are difficult before they re easy As long as you devote yourself and hang on you ll succeed 范文 3 The old saying goes like all things are difficult before they are easy which suggests that the hardest time one needs go through is the beginning of a task As for me I simply hold the opposite opinion Personally I believe that it s always easy to make a resolution but hard to carry it out strictly Because of the common passion at the beginning efforts are willingly made Nevertheless it is perseverance that is needed to complete it The topic naturally reminds me of the days when I struggled for physical examination in which I need to get a high score to be addicted to my dreaming high school I make up my mind firmly three months before the exam that I would go jogging every night and kept on doing so for one month When the initial passion faded and the tiredness stroke me every evening I was so eager to take a breath from the exhausted training and almost gave up the plan It was the strong will power that kept me going on This unforgettable experience taught me the importance of perseverance which confirms me that things are especially difficult in the middle stage 范文 4 As the famous saying goes All things are different before they are easy From my perspective the proverb means that we re all inexperienced and might meet numerous frustrations before handling the task well There is no exception that we have to go through a certain period to familiarize ourselves with the practice during which the 5 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 perspective is most required Take myself as an example once I was assigned to deliver a speech on my English learning method Never had I got such experience before I was totally overwhelmed by the task Despite the shyness and lack in confidence I know it clear that the capability of expressing oneself to the public is of great importance in future work Therefore I started to practice trying to keep off nervousness I looked out for videos on TED to music the gesture of speakers and spoke aloud before my parents Thanks to these hardships I managed to give a satisfying speech One must be equipped with endurance and faithfulness during the course of exploration Few of us are born to be genius 4 楊浦區(qū) 馬拉松 marathon 比賽需要志愿者發(fā)放礦泉水 學(xué)校校慶需要招募引導(dǎo)員 請(qǐng)你從中選取一個(gè)感興 趣的志愿者崗位 寫信給負(fù)責(zé)老師完成報(bào)名 并在信中具體談?wù)勀愕睦碛?范文 1 Dear sir Hearing that the marathon match and school celebration need a lot of volunteers and guides I think I am qualified for the position of guides and it will be my great honor to do the job so I write to you to enter for the guide First I have a great sense of direction which enables me to lead actors and actress to arrive at their positions without difficulties It s very essential when the back of stage is crowded with people and different kinds of decorations and all the performers are hurrying to dress them up and get their needed things ready Second I have the experience of being a guide before and I knew how to deal with unexpected accidents and mistakes Such experience is helpful to calm myself down to arrange things in order Besides I am familiar with my schoolmates an d have great abilities to communicate with them which makes it possible for me to find the right person and talk to them to relieve their nerve for the performance According to all the abilities above I think I m suitable for the position and I really hope that you can give me a chance to use my power to add a touch to our School Celebration Thank you for reading my letter Yours sincerely Li Ping 范文 2 Dear Sir I ve learnt that our school is recruiting guides for the celebration of school anniversary and I m writing to give a self recommendation First of all an acute sense of direction and my familiarity with all the locations on campus put me an advantage Considering that some of our alumnus may take a long and tiresome journey to attend our celebration I am sure that my air of delight will sweep them off tiredness in no time Besides informing them of the change in recent years and sharing anecdotes about the school can remind them of their precious memories here so that they will no longer be shrouded in a sense of unfamiliarity Furthermore it is my outstanding communication skills and ability to articulate that distinguish me I wouldn t forget to leave them private space for nostalgia after fulfilling my obligations I would be greatly obliged if you would allow me this golden opportunity to enhance my social skills and to contribute to the as a volunteer Yours sincerely Li Ping 范文 3 Dear Sir I am writing to apply for the volunteer who gives mineral water to marathon runners Why i think am qualified for this position can be concluded in the following three aspects First and foremost i am an experienced choice both in marathon and in the work of volunteering Although i have never run a marathon before i have accompanied my uncle to attend this event for many times so i am quite familiar with the running route and some common knowledge of it Second i possess the knowledge of first aid and and have greater patience with people Once something happens i will be able to give a helping hand to the medical team to reduce risk to largest extent It s always advisable to make full preparations for fear of unexpected 6 16 A 優(yōu)質(zhì)教研 18821208936 WeChat amos4321 accidents As the job requires standing for a long time in the sunlight waiting for every participate to pass by patience is undoubtedly a must which is fortunately my merit Last but not least i have a strong and healthy body which enable me to stand the hot weather and the exhaust keeping helping the participants until the marathon is over I really respect the participants not only for their dogged perseverance but also for their huge courage to sign up for marathon i wish one day i could take part in the event as well But before that i feel like serving as a volunteer to contribute my own effort so as to show my respect Hope i will be your first choice Yours sincerely Li Ping 范文 4 Dear sir I ve heard that the coming marathon race needs volunteers to help give water to athletes I m interested in it and I hope I could be offered this position I have to admit that I m a huge fan of marathon But since I m not that suitable for such exhausting sport I can t enter the race myself So I want to join the volunteer team in order to get close to such an exciting event It would be a great experience if I were able to be chosen and to feel the heat of the race and the enthusiasm of the attendants Besides I do have experiences in volunteering during a marathon I did it several times in the past few years I know how to give the water without disturbing the athletes It s always better to have an experienced one instead of several freshmen who are not sure when and where to give the water I believe we will be in good cooperation So please consider my application and give me a chance to prove myself as an excellent volunteer I m looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely Li Ping 5 崇明區(qū) 明啟中學(xué)計(jì)劃在寒假的 2018 年 2 月 5 日至 2018 年 2 月 18 日 2018 年 2 月 16 日為中國(guó)春節(jié) 期間 組織一批學(xué)生到美國(guó)的結(jié)對(duì)學(xué)校 Jenison Public School 進(jìn)行為期兩周的交流學(xué)習(xí) 但具體的交流內(nèi)容還 在研討之中 現(xiàn)學(xué)校要求想要參加的學(xué)生自行向負(fù)責(zé)該項(xiàng)目的王老師寫申請(qǐng)書 并就交流的內(nèi)容提出建 議 然后再由學(xué)校商討確定交流學(xué)生的名單 假設(shè)你是該校學(xué)生李敏 想要參加該項(xiàng)目 給王老師寫申 請(qǐng)書 你的申請(qǐng)書需包括 想要參加該項(xiàng)目的愿望 想要參加該項(xiàng)目的理由 就交流內(nèi)容提出具體建議 注 文中不得提及你的真實(shí)姓名或?qū)W校 Dear Mr Wang I m Li Min Hearing that you are planning to organize a group of students to Jenison Pubilc School USA for academic exchange I would really like to apply for this opportu