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1、九年級(jí)（上）九年級(jí)（上） Unit 1第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)我們的變化我們的變化寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖 從云南近四年我們的變化相關(guān)話題書面表達(dá)的從云南近四年我們的變化相關(guān)話題書面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類作文命題角度如下：命題來(lái)看，此類作文命題角度如下： 1. 實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的目標(biāo)，心態(tài)的變化，如實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的目標(biāo)，心態(tài)的變化，如2012曲靖曲靖珍惜眼下；珍惜眼下； 2. 成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷，如成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷，如2011大理大理成長(zhǎng)。成長(zhǎng)。Change a lotStronger and strongerCook mealGot hot waterExample:mother was illUsed

2、 to beWeak and shortNowLearn to understandCare about otherDelicious but saltyCook mealTears in eyes寫作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/亮點(diǎn)句型速亮點(diǎn)句型速成成常用句型：常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now.推薦句型：推薦句型：Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much better

3、 now than before. With the help of my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now. I have made great progress in my English with the help of my teachers and classmates.常用句型：常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot.I was interested in playing computer games bef

4、ore, so I played it a lot.推薦句型：推薦句型：I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty of time on it.1.I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates.3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years.4. I was fat and

5、 short before I came to the middle school.5.Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. 6. So I become taller and stronger than before.7. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier. 8.My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are

6、both pleased with me.9. I am willing to care about others.典例剖析典例剖析（20112011大理大理）I Am Not a Child Any More提示：提示： 在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯！但這還不是在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯！但這還不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還體貼、理解父母？是感恩、回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是是成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以“I Am Not a Child Any More”為

7、題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活為題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一個(gè)小孩。中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一個(gè)小孩。要求：要求：1.請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的題目，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的題目，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；個(gè)；2. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；語(yǔ)言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分 計(jì)。計(jì)。1. 對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去作比較，以此說(shuō)明自己已經(jīng)對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去作比較，以此說(shuō)明自己已經(jīng) 長(zhǎng)大；長(zhǎng)大；2. 寫出自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事情，寫出自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事

8、情， 通過(guò)事例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)；通過(guò)事例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)；3. 加以總結(jié)，再次突出主題。加以總結(jié)，再次突出主題?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】I Am Not a Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and car

9、e about others.從從used to可以看可以看出作者在開頭敘述出作者在開頭敘述的是自己的過(guò)去，的是自己的過(guò)去，說(shuō)出變化；說(shuō)出變化；這句話是形容詞這句話是形容詞的原級(jí)比較，可以的原級(jí)比較，可以看出小作者句型掌看出小作者句型掌握得很多，句子結(jié)握得很多，句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；構(gòu)多樣； It was a Wednesday evening. WhenI went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hos

10、pital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired. 本句采用本句采用了了not.until句型，是文句型，是文章的增分亮章的增分亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said，“Dear, you have grown up.” It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.這是用了這是用了with結(jié)構(gòu)，表示伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)，表示伴隨的狀態(tài)，可以看的狀態(tài)，可以看出小作者豐富的出小作者豐富的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。