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1、2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)(十三)
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Passage 1
In the countryside there are some children drop
2、ped out of school. The reasons of this are different. Some families are very poor to afford the education of their children. Some parents think useless for girls to attend school, so that their daughters lost the chance. Some children are unwilling to attend school for lack of interests in their stu
3、dies. In my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive an education, whether boys and girls. Besides, the government should take effect measures to guarantee children’s right of education because we will play important roles in developing our country in the future.
Passage 2
One day
4、 during the period of the Three Kingdoms (220- 265A.D.), Cao Cao led his soldiers to fight battle. On his way his soldiers were all feeling thirst, but there was no water near. Cao Cao got worried in his heart, as suddenly an idea occurred in his mind.
Then he let his order be past down:“There have
5、 plum trees ahead, and the plums in the trees are sweets and sour. We’ll get there in no time, and then you’ll be picking and eating it.” When the soldiers all had heard the command, they soon felt their mouths water.
Passage 3
Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road a
6、nd there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion.
Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps i
7、mprove the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.
So far there had been no conclusion o
8、ver the matter.
Passage 4
There are many people think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore,in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to get wor
9、se and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him, he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health, you will not be able to do what you want to do.But I would like to advise
10、you not to hurt yourself trying to make money. Instead, take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.
Passage 5
2015 Spring Festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need e
11、nough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.
I want to give them this card to express my thank and love. I hope that they will be abl
12、e to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their health.
Passage 6
Now I’d like to sharing with you a strange experience I had a month ago. It may sound funny, and it is true. After a day’s hard work I went to bed early
13、 than usual. It was about two o’clock and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out bed and went slowly downstairs. There had light in the living room. I listened careful. I could hear two men talking quietly. I thought two thieves have broken into my house. I was so frightening that I went bac
14、k upstairs and phoned the police. They were arrived quickly and opened the door. It turned out that I forgot to turn my TV on.
Passage 7
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and so
15、me foreigners often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.
We think that they have learned a lot by
16、taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here.
2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)(十三)答案
Passage 1
51. dro
17、pped →dropping52. of this →for this 53. very→ too 54. think∧it
55. lost→lose 56. interests→interest 57. 去掉 an 58. and→or
59. effect - effective 60. we → they
Passage 2
1.^a battle 2 thirst- thirsty 3 near- nearby 4 as- when
5 past- passed 6 have- are 7 in- on 8 it- them
9 had
18、去掉10. water- watering
Passage 3
Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of
over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated
the / this be has
di
19、scussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project
carry
because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve
problems Besides
the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea be
20、lieve that we can have another one
against
solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our
Why
city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.
So far there had been no conclusion over the matter.
has
Passage 4
1.people后加who或
21、者think改為thinking 2.had去掉 3.an改為a 4.Therefor改為Howver
5.miserably改為miserable 6.doctors后加were 7.million改為millions 8.at改為in
9.But改為So 10.which改為what
Passage 5
2015 Spring festival is coming now. I plan① buy something for my parents. What I want to give them ②back is a VIP
22、card for a health club ③but they need enough exercise. My father works ④hardly as a teacher, ⑤spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often ⑥buried herself in her books. Therefore, ⑦all of them should exercise more from now on.
I want to give them this card to express my ⑧tha
23、nk and love . I hope that they will be able to get ⑨relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care ⑩with their health
①buy→ to buy ②去掉back ③but → since / because ④hardly → hard
⑤spent → spending ⑥buried → buries ⑦all →
24、 both ⑧thank → thanks
⑨relaxing → relaxed ⑩with→ of
Passage 6
1.sharing改為share 2.and改為but 3.early改為earlier 4.out 后加of
5.had改為was 6.caeful改為carefully 7.have改為had 8.frightening改為frightened
9.were去掉 10.on改為off
Passage 7
1. before---ago 2. took---take 3. Gathering 4. interest后加in
5. my---our 6.when--since 7. activities 8. really--real
9. of去掉或者helpful--help 10. Much---more
內(nèi)容總結(jié)
(1)2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)(十三)
【專項突破】短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文