2019-2020年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 書面表達(dá)瀏覽（2）.doc

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2019-2020年高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 書面表達(dá)瀏覽（2） 基礎(chǔ)寫作（共1小題，滿分15分） 你接受了一項(xiàng)寫作任務(wù)，寫一篇關(guān)于中英詩人的英語介紹。 著名詩人 時(shí)代 生平 成就 評(píng)價(jià) 李白 (701～762) 盛唐，唐朝浪漫 主義詩人 一生遭受逆境 他熱愛自然，向往自由；創(chuàng)作詩文千 余篇，其中30多首代代傳誦至今 被譽(yù)為中國(guó) 的“詩仙” 雪萊 (1792～1822) 工業(yè)革命時(shí)期， 英國(guó)浪漫主義 民主詩人 英年早逝 他不滿社會(huì)不平等；用詩歌頌勞動(dòng)階 級(jí)的歐洲第一人 被譽(yù)為“詩人 中的詩人” *珀西比希雪萊(Percy Bysshe Shelley) 【寫作要求】 1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容； 2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 【參考范文】基礎(chǔ)寫作 (One possible version) Li Bai, a romantic poet living in the prosperous period of China’s Tang Dynasty, is regarded as the “God of poetry” in China. All his life, though he went through a lot of setbacks, he showed his deep love for nature and eager wish for freedom and wrote about one thousand poems, of which more than thirty have been widely read and recited from generation to generation till today. pared with Li Bai, Percy Bysshe Shelley, a romantic democratic poet lived during the period of Great Britain’s Industrial Revolution. He was born over 1,000 years later than Li Bai and unfortunately died at an early age, but he also wrote many famous poems showing his dissatisfaction with the social inequality. And Shelley, considered as the “poet of poets”, became the first poet who sang for the working class in Europe. 【深圳市xx高考英語綜合能力測(cè)試題（3）】 讀寫任務(wù)（共l小題，滿分25分） 閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 Helping others can really make a difference to your own life. Youre always busy living your own life, but every now and then, take a break for a bit and help someone out. You will not regret doing this. Here are a few easy ideas how you can help others: Spend some time with one of your elderly relatives or neighbors. Help them clean up around the house or take them to a grocery store. Just sit with them and have a little chat, because sometimes the smallest acts mean the most. Teach a friend or a relative how to use a puter or get on the Internet: how to start a blog, how to upload photos to a drugstores website so they can be printed out, how to use an iPod and add music to iTunes. Its probably stuff you write about on your own blog anyway, so talk about it instead of writing about it, which will help you learn how to explain things verbally. Donate clothes that you no longer wear or other things that youre no longer using. Someone out there will benefit from the stuff you dont need any more. 【寫作內(nèi)容】 1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。 2．以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“助人為樂”的看法，內(nèi)容包括： (1)閱讀上文后你的感想； (2)以實(shí)例說明你的觀點(diǎn)； (3)你對(duì)“幫助別人，快樂自己”的體會(huì)或評(píng)價(jià)。 【寫作要求】 1．在作文中可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】讀寫任務(wù) (One possible version) The passage advises us to find some time to help others, such as doing the chores for our friends and relatives or teaching them how to use a puter. These little acts will improve their lives, as well as ours. 　For society as a whole, it is worth spending time doing charity work. And I think that what matters most is not how much we offer to people in need, but whether we are willing to give them a hand. Sometimes, a little help can make a big difference. I once helped an old woman fix her mosquito net. She said to me gently, “Thank you, little girl.” It didn’t seem like a big thing, but I was shocked when I was told that the old woman never spoke a word after her only son mitted suicide twenty years ago. 　As an old Chinese saying goes, “The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.” Happiness lies in giving help to others. 【廣東省深圳市xx高考英語第一次調(diào)研考試】 讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分） 閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。 By Jesse What a bad day today! Tom suddenly fell ill and was sent to hospital by my neighbors. The doctor said he has been suffering lung cancer and his life is in danger! Everybody was shocked and felt a pity for this good man. Tom, who is a famous writer about 40 years old, lives just next door. He is kind and worm-hearted and always ready to give a helping hand to others when in need, so he enjoys great popularity in our neighborhood. He often came to my house to tell me how to write stories and encourage me with his own experience. He told me he was born in a poor family. As a little boy, he had a dream to bee a famous writer. He overcame thousands of difficulties to have entered a university. After graduation, he began to publish story books, and up till now, he is very famous around the country. Unfortunately, when he was young, he just got into the habit of smoking and became a heavy smoker, which has ended up as an invisible killer of his health. 【寫作內(nèi)容】 1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。 2．以約120個(gè)詞就“Health and Cause”為題談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括： （1）鄰居們?yōu)闇犯械酵锵У脑蚴鞘裁矗? （2）你從湯姆身上學(xué)到了什么? （3）你對(duì)身體健康與事業(yè)的看法。 【寫作要求】 1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。 2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。 【參考范文】讀寫任務(wù)（共1小題，滿分25分） Health and Cause Tom, a kind and hardworking professional writer, suddenly fell ill, and was suffering from lung cancer due to the bad habit of smoking, which shocked his neighbors and made them feel sorry. All the neighbors felt it a pity for Tom because he is really a promising writer. He is so young and maybe it is just the beginning of his great career. Moreover, his great personality has gained their sincere respect. Unfortunately, the deadly cancer will stop him from his work. Tom has always been my good model, because he is so nice and outstanding in his career, but life was not easy for him on the way to being a successful writer. His strong will has helped him to have overe so many setbacks to realize his dream, and this is what I should learn from him. From Tom’s story, we understand better that physical health and career are both important. Anyway, health should e first, without which we can achieve nothing. But if a man is just strong in body but has no ambitions for career, his life will bee aimless and worthless. Therefore, we should have the right attitude towards career and health. 寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第二節(jié)：讀寫任務(wù) 一、評(píng)分原則 1、本試題總分為25分，分兩部分給分 ① 短文概括5分 ② 主題寫作 20分。 2、強(qiáng)調(diào)內(nèi)容健康，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，說服力強(qiáng)，表述清晰?？蓞⒄臻喿x材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 3、評(píng)分時(shí)，選根據(jù)文章語言的規(guī)范、內(nèi)容的合適及篇章的連貫性初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 4、語言規(guī)范：拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言規(guī)范的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 5、如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。 2. 以約120個(gè)詞就“Health and Cause”為題談?wù)勀愕南敕?，?nèi)容包括： 1）鄰居們?yōu)闇犯械酵锵У脑蚴鞘裁矗? 2）你從湯姆身上學(xué)到了什么？ 3）你對(duì)身體健康與事業(yè)的看法。 3、寫作要求： ① 歸納完整，表述清晰。 ② 觀點(diǎn)鮮明，說服力強(qiáng)。 三、各檔次的給分范圍和要求： 讀寫任務(wù)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 項(xiàng)目 分值 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 概 括 5　 按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息，沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。 4 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息，沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。 3 基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相關(guān)的信息，有個(gè)別句子抄自原文。語言結(jié)構(gòu)基本正確，行文比較規(guī)范。 2 不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含較多不相關(guān)的信息，有較多的抄襲。語言結(jié)構(gòu)不夠準(zhǔn)確，行文不夠規(guī)范。 0-1 沒有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相關(guān)的信息，大多數(shù)句子都抄自原文。語言結(jié)構(gòu)不準(zhǔn)確，行文不規(guī)范。 寫 作 18-20 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，內(nèi)容豐富。 詞匯豐富，用詞得當(dāng)。能有效運(yùn)用合適語言結(jié)構(gòu)，而且沒有（或極少）語法錯(cuò)誤。 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性好。 14-17 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或不相關(guān)。 詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許語法錯(cuò)誤。 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。 11-13 包含題目所給全部或絕大部分的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題比較明確，個(gè)別內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。 詞匯較豐富，有個(gè)別用詞錯(cuò)誤。較好地運(yùn)用了合適的語言結(jié)構(gòu)，有少許語法錯(cuò)誤。 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性較好。 7-10 包含題目所給的部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。主題基本明確，有些內(nèi)容不準(zhǔn)確或者不相關(guān)。 詞匯有限，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。語言結(jié)構(gòu)出現(xiàn)較多的語法錯(cuò)誤。 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性一般。 4-6 只包含題目所給的個(gè)別內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。多數(shù)內(nèi)容不相關(guān)或者不準(zhǔn)確。文章有些地方照抄源文。 詞匯貧乏，有較多的用詞錯(cuò)誤。大多數(shù)的句子出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的連貫性差。 1-3 只包含與題目所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞。主題不明確，文章基本照抄原文。 詞匯極其貧乏，基本不能正確用詞。幾乎沒有正確的句子。篇章結(jié)構(gòu)零亂。 0 以下幾種情況，給0分： 1）完全抄襲原文（或其它文章） 2）文不對(duì)題 3）只寫一些零散的單詞，完全沒有表達(dá)完整的內(nèi)容