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1、單擊此處編輯母版標(biāo)題樣式,,單擊此處編輯母版文本樣式,,第二級(jí),,第三級(jí),,第四級(jí),,第五級(jí),,,*,高考英語(yǔ),基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作,,,Nov. 2006,,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)問(wèn)題,1、,句子結(jié)構(gòu),的錯(cuò)誤,,①,The heavy rain was not come for giving relief from drought（鈺霞）,,②,people noticed that,they cut plenty of trees for money is wrong,and,known,the importance of trees.(夢(mèng)輝）,,③,They were ever to cut down lar

2、ges number of trees, which they felt regretted now, and determined  to plant more trees, green the mountain, stop from the people let it happen again （詹子婉）,,④,People there decided to plant trees and make a forest, beautified the smooth hills, preventing the same kind disaster happening again. (鑰）

3、,,,2、實(shí)義詞的形式變化（時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)）,,,①,Recently western area,was raining,heavily after the long dry weather （蔡茵）,,,②,Recently it,has,a heavy rain in the west…(夢(mèng)輝）,,,3、意義表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤,,People didn’t realize that the heavy rain give relief from drought rather than floods.,,,4、不合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,They were hard to stop the flood.,,Th

4、ere has a heavy rain.,,5、題意理解錯(cuò)誤。,用條文式(1.2.3….),,1. There is but one China and Taiwan is a part of China.,,2. Taiwan, the biggest island, with a population of 22,000,000, lies to the southeast of Fujian Province.,,3. It is a very beautiful island.,,4. Riyuetan Pool and Mount Ali are very famous place

5、s of interest.,,5. Now, many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and many of them build factories and run shops.,,,,,5、用詞不當(dāng)：,,,…they,regarded,what they have done,,…the water disaster (flood),,,拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤或筆誤,,…,which,destroied,the farmland,,…trees were,importance,for the

6、ir living environment,,They,regreted,cutting down a lot of trees…,,…made up their mind,to planted,more trees and to,S,top the flood,happen,again.,,…a heavy rain came to the west,ern,of China,,…so they cut,ted,down the trees,,拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，卷面很花,,7、信息點(diǎn)組織不符合邏輯,,8、卷面不整潔,,優(yōu)點(diǎn)：經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的實(shí)踐，已經(jīng)有了5句話(huà)作文的意識(shí)，卷面更整潔，筆誤越來(lái)越少，句子

7、結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性有了明顯提高，速度更快。,,假設(shè)你最近參加了由某電視臺(tái)舉辦的中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽并獲獎(jiǎng)，該臺(tái)準(zhǔn)備組織獲,,獎(jiǎng)?wù)呷ケ本﹨⒓右淮斡⒄Z(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，下表是這次活動(dòng)的時(shí)間安排和活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。,,,,,,,,[,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,],,電視臺(tái)現(xiàn)就活動(dòng)時(shí)間和活動(dòng)內(nèi)容征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)按照以下要求以書(shū)信形式給予答復(fù)。,,1、選擇適合你的時(shí)間并說(shuō)明理由；,,2、解釋你只能參加其中的兩項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座和教外賓學(xué)中文），雖然你  認(rèn)為所有的活動(dòng)都很有意義；,,3、說(shuō)明你選擇的理由：聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座了解英美文化的信息；教外賓學(xué)中文因?yàn)?2008,北京奧運(yùn)讓越來(lái)越多的外賓想了解中國(guó)。,,,[,寫(xiě)作要求,],,1. 必須使

8、用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容,,2. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。,,,Dear Sir or Madame,,,I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.,活動(dòng)時(shí)間,7月15日-22日或 8月15日-22日,,活動(dòng)內(nèi)容,參加英語(yǔ)角 學(xué)唱英語(yǔ)歌曲,,聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座 表演英語(yǔ)短劇,,看英語(yǔ)電影 教外賓學(xué)中文,2007高考英語(yǔ),《考試說(shuō)明》,樣題,,題型特點(diǎn),1、寫(xiě)作題材貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。歷年題材都非常貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，可以預(yù)  料07年還會(huì)在這些范圍之內(nèi)。,,,2、寫(xiě)作的體裁主要是故事性描述和應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作兩

9、類(lèi)。,,,3、寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容具有半封閉性。寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容是被規(guī)定了的，學(xué)生必須將文章所規(guī)定的信息點(diǎn) 完整地表達(dá)出來(lái)，但對(duì)于語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的方式、信息組織的先后秩序、需要補(bǔ)充哪些信 息等，學(xué)生又有一定的自主構(gòu)思空間。,,,4、信息點(diǎn)多，但必須用5句話(huà)表達(dá)全部信息點(diǎn)。須使用復(fù)雜句來(lái)綜合多個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，而 且要兼顧句與句之間在語(yǔ)法上的銜接和語(yǔ)意上的連貫。,,,5、滿(mǎn)分15分，參考時(shí)間為10分鐘。,,,6、信息點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)方式多樣：,,能力要求,1、審題能力(包含全部信息）,,Ability to take in the information given,,2、信息組織能力：信息組合、排列。,,

10、Ability to analyze what is involved in the topic,,Ability to build up the frame of the composition,,,3、信息表達(dá)能力,Ability to express yourself,,①用詞的合理性 ②句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜度（,從句、分詞短語(yǔ)等）,,③語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用的正確性 ④信息內(nèi)容的完整性 ⑤句子之間的連貫性,,,4、規(guī)范整潔的書(shū)寫(xiě)能力:評(píng)分原則規(guī)定“如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差，以至影響,,交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次”,（正確的拼寫(xiě)詞匯和標(biāo)點(diǎn)）,,★,基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作評(píng)分模板,,語(yǔ)言,語(yǔ)法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確性

11、高，復(fù)雜性。,,詞匯使用好，只有少許錯(cuò)誤,8、7、6、5、4、3、2、1、0,內(nèi)容,信息內(nèi)容完整（不加減信息）,5、4、3、2、1、0,連貫,內(nèi)容連貫，且結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,2、1、0,,項(xiàng)目,句子,評(píng)分板,,,1,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,,2,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,,3,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,,4,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,

12、,5,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,連貫,0 0.5 1 1.5 2 2.5,,,2、,分析法,（以句子為單位）,【注】,多一個(gè)少一個(gè)句子扣一分；文不對(duì)題給零分。,1、,印象法,⊙,,推薦步驟,,認(rèn)真審題 ( Read the topic carefully),,歸納排列信息點(diǎn) (Find out the key points,organize,,the messages in 5 sentences,),,

13、草擬短語(yǔ)( Translate the phrases)確定短語(yǔ)和句型,Think of the words, phrases, sentence,,structures you may use in writing.,,,連詞成句(Make up sentences),Change the sentence structure where necessary;,,組句成篇（潤(rùn)色）,Add some conjunctions if needed.,,檢查修改 (adding and revising),,規(guī)范謄寫(xiě),,寫(xiě)作步驟,1,找準(zhǔn)主題，以防偏題(what),參加夏令營(yíng)。,體裁格式,2,明確

14、目的，更有針對(duì)性（why),電視臺(tái)邀請(qǐng)參加夏令營(yíng)，寫(xiě)信回復(fù)。,3,時(shí)間 (when),夏令營(yíng)還沒(méi)有開(kāi)始，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。,人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài),4,找準(zhǔn),信息點(diǎn),1、所寫(xiě)文章有哪些信息點(diǎn)？6項(xiàng)活動(dòng),,,2、怎樣怎么組合、排列信息點(diǎn)？,第1步,審題,,,1、,整合信息,（按邏輯順序整合成5個(gè)句子),,,① 很,高興有機(jī)會(huì)參加活動(dòng)(such activities as),,,②,選擇,7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日,并,說(shuō)明理由,,,③,只參加兩項(xiàng)－聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座和教外賓學(xué)中文，,雖然,所有活動(dòng)都很有意義,,,④,說(shuō)明選擇的理由：聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座了解英美文化的信息；教外賓學(xué)中文因?yàn)?2008,北京奧運(yùn)讓越來(lái)

15、越多的外賓想了解中國(guó)。（整合）,,,⑤,第2步,整合信息，,,譯成英語(yǔ)。,2、譯成英文詞語(yǔ)或句子,(在上面基礎(chǔ)上幻燈呈現(xiàn),句子所需的詞匯，短語(yǔ)和句型),,第3步,連詞成句。,,考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性和句子內(nèi)容的,連貫性,① 很高興能有機(jī)會(huì)參加活動(dòng)(such activities as),Thank you very much for arranging so many activities, such as attending English corner, having English lectures, seeing English films, learning English songs

16、, acting English plays and helping,,foreigners learn Chinese.,② 選擇一個(gè)時(shí)間,并,說(shuō)明理由； 7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日,,③ 只能參加兩項(xiàng)活動(dòng)－－聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)講座和教外賓學(xué)中文），,同時(shí),表示所有的活動(dòng)都很有意義；,I can only take part in two of them,,because I will have to spend some time in doing my research project.,I would like to listen to the lectures and help fo

17、reigners learn Chinese, （,組合）,④ 說(shuō)明你選擇的理由：了解英美文化的信息；讓越來(lái)越多的外賓想了解中國(guó)。,I will learn more about western culture, as more and more foreigners,,want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.,,第4步,連句成篇,,Dear Sir or Madam,,,I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp.,,,,①,Thank you very m

18、uch for,arranging so many activities, such as attending English corner, having English lectures, seeing English films, learning English songs, acting English plays and helping foreigners learn Chinese. ②,I am sure,all the activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③,But it’s a pity that,I can

19、only take part in two of them,,because,I will have to spend some time in doing my research project. ④I would like to listen to the lectures,,in which,I will learn more about western culture,,and,help foreigners learn Chinese,,as,more and more foreigners want to know about China and the 2008 Beijing

20、Olympic Games. ⑤,Due to the fact that,I will see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, I am going to attend the camp from August 15,th,to 22,nd,.,,,,Thank you very much.,,Yours truly,,,Li Ping,,Dear Sir or Madam,,,,I’m glad to be invited to the English summer ca

21、mp.,,,①Thank you very much for arranging so many,,activities, such as attending English corner, having,,English lectures, seeing English films, learning,,English songs, acting English plays and helping,,foreigners learn Chinese. ②I am sure all the,,activities will do a lot of good to us students. ③B

22、ut,,it’s a pity that I can only take part in two of them,,,because I will have to spend some time in doing my,,research project. ④I would like to listen to the,,lectures, in which I will learn more about western,,culture, and help foreigners learn Chinese, as more,,and more foreigners want to know a

23、bout China and,,the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.,,⑤ Due to the fact that I will see my grandparents in the country right after our school finishes in mid-July, I am going to attend the camp from August 15,th,to 22,nd,.,,Thank you very much.,,Yours truly,,,Li Ping,第①句順應(yīng)已給出的句中的glad心,,情，表示感謝安排這么多的活動(dòng)，,,具

24、有較好的連貫性。同時(shí)很自然地,,將活動(dòng)內(nèi)容做一介紹。,,第②句用簡(jiǎn)單句表達(dá)活動(dòng)的意義，,,語(yǔ)意上連貫，句式上沒(méi)有繼續(xù)用“,,長(zhǎng)”句，有變化。,,第③句用but轉(zhuǎn)折并用it’s a pity,,句型表示委婉的歉意，然后解釋原,,因。,,第④句用一個(gè)長(zhǎng)句子表達(dá)自己要參,,加的兩個(gè)項(xiàng)目，并解釋原因，解釋,,原因的第一句用定語(yǔ)從句，第二句,,用狀語(yǔ)從句，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)富于變化,,。,,第⑤句解釋參加的時(shí)間并給出解釋,,。之所以把時(shí)間放在后面，主要是,,考慮它與題目已經(jīng)給出的句子之間,,在語(yǔ)意上的連貫性不夠。,,點(diǎn)評(píng),,,Another possible version:,,,Dear Sir or Mad

25、ame,,,I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I’ve decided to go to Beijing for the English summer camp during the time from 15~22, July,because,I’ll have to stay with my parents for the rest of the summer vocation in America. I will choose two activities to take part in though all of the

26、m are meaningful and interesting,,which,are listening to English lectures and teaching foreigners Chinese. I think I can learn more about British and American literatures by attending the lectures and speeches.,And,the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing so many foreign friends will come to C

27、hina at that time. I want to let more and more foreigners know better about China.,,Thank you very much.,,Yours truly,,,Li Ping,,,,Let's try!,,課堂實(shí)踐,請(qǐng)根據(jù)情景說(shuō)明，用5個(gè)規(guī)范的句子描述全部所給的信息內(nèi)容。,,【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】,,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封便函給你的同學(xué)Sam，邀請(qǐng)他參加同學(xué)聚會(huì)。,聚會(huì)時(shí)間,：本周六（12月2日）下午6點(diǎn)30分。,聚會(huì)地點(diǎn),：張梅家（光明路25號(hào)）。,聚會(huì)地點(diǎn)路線圖,：按下圖所畫(huà)路線告訴Sam怎樣去張梅家。,,【寫(xiě)作要求】,,1、必須

28、使用5個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容,,2、將5個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文。,,注意：便函的格式已給出。,,November 27th, 2006,,Dear Sam,,,——————————————————————————————,,——————————————————————————————,,——————————————————————————————,,——————————————————————————————,,——————————————————————————————,,——————————————————————————————,,———————————————————————————

29、———,,Yours,,,Li Wen,,第1步：審題,1,主題 (what),,2,目的（why),,3,時(shí)間 (when),,4,任務(wù),,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封便函給你的同學(xué)Sam,邀請(qǐng)Sam參加同學(xué)聚會(huì),本周六（12月2日）下午6點(diǎn)30分，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。,告訴Sam聚會(huì)的地點(diǎn)和路線圖。,,1 本周六（12月2日）下午6點(diǎn)30分在張梅家同學(xué)聚會(huì),（將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、事情3信息組合）,。,,,2 張梅住光明路25號(hào)。,,,3,在學(xué)校門(mén)口坐第3路公共汽車(chē)，在第二個(gè)十字路口銀行對(duì)面下車(chē)。,,,4,下車(chē)后，向右轉(zhuǎn)，找到光明路。,,,5,沿光明路直接往前走，張梅家就在電影院對(duì)面。,第2步、整合信息、譯成英語(yǔ),將,

30、,怎,,樣,,去,,張,,梅,,家,,信,,息,,拆,,散,,,①,The students in our class are going to have a get-together in Zhang Mei’s home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon.,,②,She lives at No. 25 Guangming Road,and,it is not very difficult to find your way to her home,.,,③,Take a No. 3 Bus at the gate of our school,and,get of

31、f at the second crossing,where,you can see a bank across the street.,,④,,Then,turn right at the corner,and,you will find Guangming Road.,,⑤,Walk straight along the road,until,you see a cinema on the other side of the road,,which,is opposite to Zhang Mei’s home.,,第3步：連詞成句,,第4步 連句成篇,November 27th, 20

32、06,,Dear Sam,,,,①,The students in our class are going to have a get-together in Zhang Mei’s home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon.,②,She lives at No. 25 Guangming Road,and,it is not very difficult to find your way to her home.,③,,Take a No. 3 Bus at the gate of our school,and,get off at the second cr

33、ossing,where,you can see a bank across the street.,④,,Then,turn right at the corner,and,you will find Guangming Road.,⑤,Walk straight along the road,until,you see a cinema on the other side of the road,,which,is opposite to Zhang Mei’s home.,,,,Yours,,,Li Wen,,廣州市高三診斷性測(cè)試評(píng)分樣卷,,(得2 分),In general, we s

34、atisfied with the service of the travel center. (內(nèi)容,1分,) Expecialy, the guid treated us very kind-hearted and careful to take care of the old. (,內(nèi)容得,0.5分),In addition, the guid talked about the travel place was clear and livly, increased our knowledge. （內(nèi)容得,1分）,However, the food of the restaurant pr

35、ovide was not fit to us, we have to buy something food ourselves. （,2分）,I think you should introduce more excellent shopping center for us.,,連貫：2.5分,In general， Expecialy ， In addition， However， I think,,Total: 9 points,,努力方向,：,,,,1、積累句型特別是復(fù)合句的積累,,2、擴(kuò)大詞匯量,,3、加強(qiáng)練習(xí)，同時(shí)提高練習(xí)的質(zhì)量,,《,考綱詞匯,》,首字母,A,的單詞；,,2.《,

36、英語(yǔ)周報(bào),》,第,14,期基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作；,HOMEWORK,11.27.,,2004年廣東卷,,,假設(shè)你是下圖的李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫(huà)所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，描述昨天晚上鄰居看足球賽影響你學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并描寫(xiě)你隨后與鄰居交涉的過(guò)程(如：你向鄰居提出要求，對(duì)方向你表示歉意等。),,注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80—120,,2. 可以編寫(xiě)對(duì)話(huà)或其它敘述方式描寫(xiě)你與鄰居的交涉過(guò)程,,,2005年廣東卷,,,Michael是一名美國(guó)中學(xué)生，在學(xué)校里選修漢語(yǔ)。他利用暑,,假到中國(guó)進(jìn)修，希望進(jìn)一步了解中國(guó)文化。有一天，他看到下面,,有關(guān)成語(yǔ)的漫畫(huà)，不大明白其中的意思。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)把漫畫(huà)所表,,達(dá)的故事和寓意寫(xiě)成一段短文，

37、向他解釋。,,注意：1．詞數(shù)：在80—120詞之間；,,2．參考詞匯：bump into(撞上)，hoe(鋤頭),,2006年廣東卷,,,根據(jù)以下圖畫(huà)，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，描述今昔通訊方式的變化，以及這些變化給人們生活帶來(lái)的影響。,,注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右,,2．生詞：通訊： communicate (with sb．)vi.  communication n．,,互聯(lián)網(wǎng)：the Internet n.,,常用的過(guò)渡表達(dá)法,（過(guò)渡,詞）,,1 表增加 also,

38、and, and then, too,in addition,furthermore, moreover,again,,,2 表時(shí)間，順序 now, then, before, after, afterwards,earlier, later, immediately, soon. next, in a few days,gradually, suddenly, finally,,,3 表空間，順序 near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, beyond, above, below, to the right/left, aroundon o

39、ne side, outside,,4. 表示比較的： in the same way, just like( as),,5. 表示對(duì)照的：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, even though,,6. 表示目的的：for the reason, for this purpose, so that,,7. 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的：in fact, indeed, surely, certainly, without any doubt, above all, the most important,,8. 表示解釋說(shuō)明的： for example, in fact, in this case，actually,,,9. 表示總結(jié)的： finally, at last, in conclusion, as I have shown, in other words, in brief, as have been stated,,