2020年中考英語考點專項突破題 專題40 書面表達二（含解析）

專題40 書面表達二一、浙江杭州第二節(jié)：書面表達56.假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的電子郵件。以下是郵件的一部分，請你閱讀后回復，詞數(shù)80左右。Subject:From: LindaTo: Li PingIm really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer. I can show him around the city! Please tell me something about him! How old is he? What does he look like? What kind of person is he and whats he interested in?Hope to hear from you soon.Love,LindaSubject:From: Li PingTo: LindaDear Linda,_Yours,Li Ping【答案】Dear Linda,Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome. Now let me tell you something about my brother. He is thirteen years old, easy-going and humorous-we get along really well. He loves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying local food.My brother is also cute. Hes of medium height with short straight black hair. He is good at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!Yours,Li Ping【解析】這篇作文要求我們對Linda的電子郵件進行回復。寫作前，應先閱讀Linda的來信，了解信中她想知道的事情，然后有針對性地給她進行介紹。審題可知，Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情況，她提出了三個問題，“他多大了”；“他是什么樣子的”；“他是怎樣的人以及他的興趣”，回信中應對Linda的這些提問進行回答，并根據(jù)表達的需要，補充一些細節(jié)內容，使文章更加充實、豐富。短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時、第三人稱來敘述，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應注意：首先內容應符合題目要求，并且敘述要注意層次和結構；其次應注意英語的表達問題，應符合英文句式的特點以及表達習慣，不能寫漢語式的英語?？梢院唵尉浣Y構為主，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜句式和結構，提升作文檔次。同時語句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。二、浙江衢州56.書面表達71. 假設你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內容給Seb回一封郵件。要求：1. 考生需按電子郵件格式完成整封郵件；2. 郵件中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等相關信息；3. 詞數(shù)：90100【答案】From: LiMingTo: SebSubject: Learning Chinese in QuzhouHi, Seb,Im so glad that youll come to live in my city.To improve Your Chinese quickly. You can go and take a course in a Chinese Language School. It can always help you to speak better and learn more.Then, try to experience life here in Quzhou. Of course. Ill take you around Quzhou. We can visit the Confucius Temple. Its the best way to understand our culture. And you can practice speaking Chinese at the same time. Its very helpful.Hope to see you soon!YoursLiMing【解析】本題是書信作文。假設你是Li Ming， 以下是你的南非筆友Seb發(fā)給你的一封電子郵件，請根據(jù)該郵件內容給Seb回一封郵件。注意電子郵件格式。時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認為閱讀材料，認真審題，確定主題，根據(jù)Seb的電子郵件，列出提綱。表達要條理清楚，語言規(guī)范。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤（時態(tài)、主謂一致等）。三、浙江湖州61.書面表達 5月18日是國際博物館日，下圖是你班同學參觀博物館的情況。請你結合調查結果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。注意：1. 詞數(shù)：80-100 (短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)) 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名。_【答案】Visiting museums has become one o f the most popular ways for us students to spend our spare time. According to the survey made in our class, almost all the students have been to museums, such as science museums, tea museums and film museums, etc.Among them, the science museum is our favorite.I've been to Huzhou Science Museum and Lu Yu Tea Museum. I like the tea museum very much, because I can learn about the histor and development of tea and watch the tea art performances there as well. What I'm interested in most is the show of beautiful tea sets, which has left a deep impression on me.Museums make it possible for us. 'students to learn knowledge and experience cultures at the same time. Why not visit more?【解析】這是一篇圖表，是同學參觀博物館的情況，結合調查結果、自己的參觀經(jīng)歷和感受，寫一份報告，并在英語課上匯報。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料注意人稱和時態(tài)的不同，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。四、浙江寧波 六、書面表達61.回顧初中三年。有許多事令人難忘。校英語報如Have Your Say欄目正面向九年級畢業(yè)生征文。假如你是李華，請你選擇其中一個話題, 并結合具體事例, 用英語寫一封信表達你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加此次征文活動。要點如下：say "thanks" to_say "sorry" to_1. be not good at.2. encourage me to3. make great progress4.1. argue with2. not talk to each other3. regret doing4.注意： (1) 短文必須包括你所選擇話題的所有要點, 并適當拓展； (2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名； (3) 詞數(shù):80-100,書信格式已給出； (4) 首句供參考Looking back on the past three years, Id like to say.Dear _,_ Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Alice,Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say thanks to you for helping me with my English.When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at English. I just hid behind my text book and never said anything in class. Once I did very badly in an English test, and I lost heart. However, you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me to be more active in class.Since then, I have worked harder and made great progress. I feel lucky to be your student.Thank you again. Wish you goal luck.Yours,Li Hua (100 words) Possible version 2:Dear Alan,Looking back on the past three years, I'd like to say sorry to you for arguing with you.When we were in Grade 8, we lost the chance to get the first prize in the football match. I never stopped complaining to you that it was you who missed the goal. But you shouted back that you were not the only reason. You walked off angrily. From then on, we didn't talk to each other.I have been regretting doing so. Soon we will graduate from our school. Let's forget about the past and become good friends again.Yours,Li Hua【解析】這個作文要求我們從題目中給出的兩個話題中選擇一個，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一封信表達你對某個人的謝意或歉意，參加學校英語報的一個征文活動。題目中利用表格的形式展示了兩個話題的主要結構，具體的內容需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進行補充，并用正確的英語表達出來。審題可知，這篇短文應以一般過去時、第一人稱和第二人稱為主來敘述。文章內容應包括：首先確定一個話題和人物；然后具體說明你感謝他或者向他道歉的原因，這是文章的主體部分，敘述應詳細，合情合理；最后再次重申自己的感謝或歉意，并表達祝愿。寫作時應注意：首先文章內容應完整、充實，注意分清段落和層次；其次需注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不能根據(jù)漢語思維逐詞翻譯。句式結構應完整，可以簡單句結構為基礎，穿插并列句、復合句以及其他復雜結構，提升文章檔次。同時語句直接使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、自然。五、金華，義烏，麗水七、書面表達61.某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“My School Life”為主題的征文活動。假設你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。內容要點參考詞匯SubjectsEnglish, Science,.Teachers/Classmateskind, helpful,.Activitiessports, hobbies,.注意：1. 文中必須包括表格中全部內容要點，可適當發(fā)揮，參考詞匯僅供選擇使用； 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名； 3. 詞數(shù)：80100; 4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。My School LifeIm Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. Id like to share my school life with you. _ _ _ 【答案】例文Possible version: Im Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. Id like to share my school life with you.We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think its getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful.Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.【解析】【分析】【高分句型一】I often play basketball with my classmates，which brings me lots of fun我經(jīng)常和我的同學打籃球，這給我?guī)砹撕芏鄻啡?。which引導非限定性定語從句。【高分句型二】So I often spend my free time reading in the school library所以我經(jīng)?；ㄎ业目臻e時間在學校圖書館閱讀。spenddoing sth花費做某事。這是一篇給材料作文。某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦以“My School Life”為主題的征文活動。假設你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。六、浙江溫州56.書面表達 最近，用手機APP買菜的人多了。手機菜場菜品豐富、洗凈配好、預約送菜上門外國朋友對此也很感興趣。請你以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇110詞左右的英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。A New Use of the Mobile Phone_【小詞典】acknowledge v.承認，認可 bone n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部cipher n. 標記 crowd n. 大眾 elect v. 選舉，推選franc n. 法國法郎 invisible ad. 不可見的 muscle n. 肌肉profound adj. 深刻的 radio telescope射電望遠鏡 reflect n. 反射signal n. 信號 stimulate v. 刺激 toe n. 腳趾【答案】A New Use of the Mobile PhonePreparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You ,an order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like. they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier. Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求以A New Use of the Mobile Phone為題，寫一篇英語短文介紹手機買菜帶來的便利，讓外國朋友了解中國人民生活中的這個新變化。首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤。七、 臺州七、書面表達（本題有1小題; 共計20分）76. 似如你是李華, 一個英國游學團要來你們學校, 學校需要一些志愿者, 你想成為其中的一員。請讀下面的招霧啟事, 寫一封應征郵件。Volunteers WantedSome students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We relooking for some volunteers to help us. "Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)? Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose? If you are interested, please email us at Andrewl63. com. 注意: （1）請回復招募啟事中所提及的兩個問題, 可適當發(fā)揮; （2）應征郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關信息; （3）詞數(shù): 80100; （4）郵件開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Andrew, Im Li Hua. 【分析】【高分句型一】In addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why I'm in good health此外，我對體育感興趣，這就是為什么我健康狀況良好which引導非限制性定語從句【高分句型二】I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture， so that British friends can understand China  better我計劃組織一次關于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的活動，讓英國朋友更好的了解中國plan to do sth計劃做某事；so that 引導目的狀語從句【答案】Dear Sir，My name is Li HuaI'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3 ，Grade 2I would like to become a volunteer for the  American students（點明目的）My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluentlyIn addition，I'm interested in sports，which is why  I'm in good health【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble，I often help them activelyI'm good at taking up with othersBesides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city（自我介紹）I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can  understand China better【高分句型二】（計劃的活動）I'm sure I can become friends with the English studentsLooking forward to your answers（愿望）Yours，Li Hua八、 紹興九、書面表達（共1小題，共計20分）18.學校是否有必要設立“無作業(yè)日”？對此，你在班中進行了調查。請你根據(jù)下表內容寫一篇短文在英語課上交流，并闡述你的觀點和理由。 OpinionsReasonsmost studentsYeshave free timefeel relaxedsome studentsNowaste timeget bad gradesI注意：短文必須包括表中所有內容,可適當增加細節(jié)；詞數(shù)：80-100；短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：無作業(yè)日Homework-free Day短文首句：I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results.【答案】 One possible version:     I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. Here are the results. Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like, such as reading their favorite books, going swimming and so on. They will also feel relaxed and join their friends in playing different games.    Some students, however, don't like it. They're afraid that they may waste time or even get bad grades. They prefer to do homework as usual.    In my view, Homework-free Day will certainly help a lot. I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills.【考點】材料作文 【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料類作文。著重通過調查對“無作業(yè)日"學生的看法：贊成與反對及理由。主要以第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時。寫作中應適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏切關系。 【點評】文章中使用了非常好的短語或句子會給文章增色。such as ，例如； Homework-free Day  ，無作業(yè)日；prefer to do sth.更喜歡做某事。  I've done a survey about whether it is necessary to have Homework-free Day. （介詞后接賓語從句）；Most students think it necessary to have Homework-free Day so that they will have more free time to do what they like.（賓語從句；不定式做主語和結果狀語從句）；  I can choose to watch some interesting English programs, which will help improve my listening and speaking skills. （非限制性定語從句）。 還運用了or， however 等使上下文銜接的更好。九、 嘉興、舟山六、書面表達(本題有1小題,共計15分)61. 假設你是李華。你在某英文網(wǎng)站上看到一則招募中國志愿者(volunteer)的廣告。請根據(jù)該廣告中所提供的兩個志愿者項目,選擇其中一個,結合自己的實際情況,給項目負責人寫一封電子郵件,表達你希望參加這個項目的愿望,并闡述理由。注意: (1)郵件中必須包含招募廣告中的信息,可適當發(fā)揮。 (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關的信息。 (3)詞數(shù): 80100。郵件的開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I want to be a volunteer. _Looking forward to your early reply! Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China I want to be a volunteerI'm willing to go to a small village in the west of China I know something about ChinaI will be glad to take part in the Project 1（寫明選擇） I have been good at English since I was a student【高分句型一】 I'm also willing to be a teacher to teach children English In my opinion，helping people in need is meaningful I can help people work on the farm because both my father and my mother are farmers I can do a lot of work on the farmAlso，I can visit the old people's home to help the old wash clothes and clean the house and so on（一一寫出原因） It's meanfuling for me to do something for others 【高分句型二】Looking forward to your early reply! Yours Li Hua十、長沙第三節(jié)書面表達55.假如你是李華，你們班輸了上周的籃球賽。Henry認為是他未能投進最后一球所造成的，有的隊友也因此而責怪他。請你寫一封英文郵件安慰他，談談你對此事的看法，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。要求：（1）80詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game 【答案】Dear Henry,I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】這是一篇給材料的書信作文。假如你是李華，就輸球事件安慰Henry，談談你對此事的看法，并就如何取得隊友的理解提出建議。人稱為第二人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。動筆前先要注意認真閱讀材料確定寫作內容；文章必須包括要點中所給的信息，但不要逐句翻譯，補充兩條個人的觀點并提出建議。注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當發(fā)揮使行文連貫，多種句式交叉使用來豐富文章的文采。高分句型一：What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. 重要的是你應該從比賽中吸取教訓，也要從錯誤中吸取教訓。What matters is that重要的是，that引導的是表語從句。as well as常用來連接兩個并列的成分，作“也，還”講。高分句型二：And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. 你可以保證你會不遺余力地提高你的技能。that引導的是賓語從句，spare no efforts to do sth.不遺余力做某事。高分句型三：If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one. 如果大家齊心協(xié)力，你們一定會贏得下一場比賽。此句是if引導的條件狀語從句；be sure to do sth. 必定做某事。十一、株洲第三節(jié) 情景作文 51.假定你是李華，準備參加“一帶一路”國家中學生英語演講比賽，主題為“現(xiàn)在引領未來”。請你寫一篇演講稿，包括以下內容：(1) 你最難忘的一個書包是怎么得來的？(2) 你喜歡它嗎？為什么？(3) 描述你將來的書包。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2) 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3) 文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。 【答案】I have a beautiful school bag. My grandma bought it for me last autumn as a birthday present. I like it very much. My bag is a blue one, and blue is my favourite colour. On the bag, you can see a little tiger, It's very lovely. There are many books in my bag, such as Chinese books, English books and others. And there is a nice pencil-box, too. Inside the bag, there is a small pocket. I often put some money and keys in it. When I study my lessons, the bag is always together with me. It is my close friend, I will take good care of it.In the future, the bag will better than now. It will be smaller and more useful. I hope bag will not so heavy. Though bag in the future will be small, they have big capacity. Bag should be cheap and fashion, too. As far as I am concerned, our own bag will just be opened by ourselves. How great bag !【解析】1、題干解讀：本文屬于材料作文，主要介紹你的書包以及你喜歡它的原因，最后暢想一下未來的書包是什么樣子的。2、例文點評：本文采用三段式，第一段講述你的書包的來歷，第二段講述你喜歡這個書包以及原因，第三段暢想一下未來的書包。3、高分亮點：單詞短語：There be，such as，too，take good care of, in the future,as far as I am concerned等。句型：How great bag中how引導的感嘆句?！军c睛】首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如There be，such as，take good care of, in the future, How great bag中how引導的感嘆句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，如too，as far as I am concerned；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)