中考英語(yǔ)滿分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 九全 Unit 34 我們的變化課件

第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)九年級(jí)（全）九年級(jí)（全） Units 3-4我們的變化我們的變化寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 從云南近四年與我們的變化話題相關(guān)書(shū)從云南近四年與我們的變化話題相關(guān)書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類作文命題角度如下：面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類作文命題角度如下：1. 實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的目標(biāo)，心態(tài)的變化，如實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的目標(biāo)，心態(tài)的變化，如2012曲曲 靖珍惜眼下；靖珍惜眼下；2. 2011大理，成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷。大理，成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷。Example: mother was illTired Delicious but saltyNowCook mealUsed to beChange a lotTears in eyesGot hot waterWeak and shortCare about othersStronger and strongerLearn to understand寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/ 亮點(diǎn)句型速成亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型：常用句型：My teachers and classmates help me with my English. My English is good now.推薦句型：推薦句型： Thanks to my dear teachers and classmates, my English becomes much better now than before. With the help of (Under the help of) my teachers and classmates, my English has improved a lot now. I have made a great progress on my English with the help of (under the help of) my teachers and classmates.常用句型：常用句型：I liked playing computer games before. And I played it a lot.推薦句型：推薦句型： I was interested in playing computer games before, so I played it a lot. I used to be interested in playing computer games, so I always spent plenty of time on it.1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing.2. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates.3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years.4. I was fat and short before I came to the middle school.5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. 6. So I become taller and stronger than before.7. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier. 8. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are pleased with me.9. I am willing to care about others.典例剖析典例剖析（20112011大理大理）I Am Not a Child Any More提示：在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯！但這還提示：在陽(yáng)光雨露里，我已長(zhǎng)高、長(zhǎng)壯！但這還 不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、不是全部，長(zhǎng)大還應(yīng)包括什么？是關(guān)心、 幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、幫助同學(xué)？是體貼、理解父母？是感恩、 回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是回報(bào)親朋師長(zhǎng)？還是成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴成長(zhǎng)的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴 滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以滴，久久不能忘記。請(qǐng)以“I Am Not a Child Any More”為題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中為題記敘你在學(xué)習(xí)生活中 經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事，表明你已不再是一 個(gè)小孩。個(gè)小孩。要求：要求：1. 請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的題目，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短 文；文； 2. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60詞；詞； 3. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔；語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔； 4. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名， 否則以零分計(jì)。否則以零分計(jì)?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】1. 1. 對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去作比較，以此說(shuō)明自己對(duì)自己的現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去作比較，以此說(shuō)明自己 已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大；已經(jīng)長(zhǎng)大；2. 2. 寫(xiě)出自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事寫(xiě)出自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中經(jīng)歷的一件或兩件事 情，通過(guò)事例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)；情，通過(guò)事例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)；3. 3. 作以總結(jié)，再次突出主題；作以總結(jié)，再次突出主題；4. 4. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于6060；5. 5. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以 零分計(jì)。零分計(jì)?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】I Am Not a Child Any More I am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, 從從used to可可以看出作者在以看出作者在開(kāi)頭敘述的是開(kāi)頭敘述的是自己的過(guò)去，自己的過(guò)去，說(shuō)出變化；說(shuō)出變化；I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others.這句話是形容詞這句話是形容詞的比較級(jí)以及原級(jí)的比較級(jí)以及原級(jí)比較，可以看出小比較，可以看出小作者句型掌握的很作者句型掌握的很多，句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣；多，句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣； It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal.I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, though it tasted salty. 本句采本句采用了用了notuntil句型，句型，是文章的是文章的增分亮點(diǎn)。增分亮點(diǎn)。After supper, I found they were too tired. I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes she said， “Dear, you have grown up.”本句用了本句用了with結(jié)構(gòu)，表示伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)，表示伴隨的狀態(tài)，可以看的狀態(tài)，可以看出小作者豐富的出小作者豐富的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。 It was the first time that I had cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.