中考英語滿分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo) 九全 Unit 1314 保護環(huán)境、學(xué)校生活課件

第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫作指導(dǎo)九年級（全）九年級（全） Units 13-14保護環(huán)境保護環(huán)境寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖 從全國近五年環(huán)境保護相關(guān)話題書面表從全國近五年環(huán)境保護相關(guān)話題書面表達的命題來看，寫作角度如下：達的命題來看，寫作角度如下：1. 記敘一次環(huán)?；顒?。如：記敘一次環(huán)保活動。如：2014邵陽志愿者邵陽志愿者 活動，活動，2013襄陽介紹環(huán)?；顒樱幌尻柦榻B環(huán)?；顒?；2. 保護環(huán)境的措施。如：保護環(huán)境的措施。如：2014龍東保護水資龍東保護水資 源，源，2014賀州節(jié)約。賀州節(jié)約。Time:last weekSweep the groundPick up the rubbishPerson:classmatesClean the benchPlace:train stationVoluntary activityHope to improve our environmentTired but happyfeelingsActivities寫作范文詳見：寫作范文詳見： http:/ 亮點句型速成亮點句型速成常用句型：常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.推薦句型：推薦句型： If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.常用句型：常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.推薦句型：推薦句型： We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future. If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.1. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 2. Its our duty to protect our environment. 3. It is very important to take care of our environment. 4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees. 5. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees. 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 7. Trees are very helpful and important for us. 8. Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment. 9. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 10. Its necessary to save water.11. Recycling trash is also important.典例剖析典例剖析（20142014邵陽邵陽） 假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開展創(chuàng)建假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開展創(chuàng)建“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”，學(xué)校也提出了，學(xué)校也提出了“垃圾不落地，垃圾不落地，校園更美麗校園更美麗”的口號，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號召，的口號，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車站進行志愿者活動，貢上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車站進行志愿者活動，貢獻自己的一份力量。請把你所做的事寫一封電子獻自己的一份力量。請把你所做的事寫一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友郵件告訴你的好朋友Bob。PlaceTrain stationTimeFrom 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morningPeopleYou and some classmatesActivitiesClean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the groundFeelingA little tired but happy要求：要求： 1. 80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞 數(shù)；數(shù)； 2. 文章盡可能包括表格中所有信息，語言流文章盡可能包括表格中所有信息，語言流 暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔；暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔； 3. 文中不得使用你的真實姓名及校名。文中不得使用你的真實姓名及校名。Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week._【審題指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】細讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以細讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：下信息：1. 1. 文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”“”“垃圾不落地，校園更美麗垃圾不落地，校園更美麗”的活動中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車站進行志愿者的活動中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車站進行志愿者活動（包括時間、地點、人物、活動（包括時間、地點、人物、 活動、感受）?；顒印⒏惺埽?。2. 2. 本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫作時用第一人稱，本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫作時用第一人稱，其他人用第三人稱。其他人用第三人稱。 3. 3. 回憶事件通常用一般過去時，抒發(fā)個人情感回憶事件通常用一般過去時，抒發(fā)個人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時。語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，卷及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時。語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，語法正確。面整潔，語法正確。4. 4. 詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于8080詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。名?！痉段狞c評范文點評】Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. 開門見山地引出開門見山地引出事件；動詞的復(fù)事件；動詞的復(fù)合賓語結(jié)構(gòu)，合賓語結(jié)構(gòu)，make sth. adj.， make it cleaner and tidier “使使更清潔、更清潔、更整潔更整潔”，增加了，增加了文章的可讀性；文章的可讀性；First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.固定詞組固定詞組cleaned the benches，picked up the rubbish等的運等的運用彰顯小作者詞用彰顯小作者詞匯之豐富，也是匯之豐富，也是增分的亮點；增分的亮點；We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.點明主題并升華，點明主題并升華，a little tired but happy“有點累但有點累但是很高興是很高興”；make a contribution“為為做出貢做出貢獻獻”。彰顯了小作。彰顯了小作者詞語運用的嫻熟，者詞語運用的嫻熟，也給文章增色不少。也給文章增色不少。 Hope to write soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lei學(xué)校生活學(xué)校生活 寫作導(dǎo)圖寫作導(dǎo)圖 從云南近四年學(xué)校生活相關(guān)話題書面表達的從云南近四年學(xué)校生活相關(guān)話題書面表達的命題來看，此類作文命題角度主要集中在初中的命題來看，此類作文命題角度主要集中在初中的學(xué)習(xí)和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。學(xué)習(xí)和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。主要涉及的有主要涉及的有：2013云南、云南、2014昆明、昆明、2013云南、云南、2012德宏、德宏、2012普洱、普洱、2011昭通。昭通。Some wishsmake friends; get on well with; share happiness and sadness; help each otherRegretful things learn lots of knowledge; helpful; broaden ones eyes; read interesting booksHappy school daysA talk to myselfjoin in more outdoor activities; value school days; take exercise; a balanced diet; life in the future more and more beautifultoo much homework; no enough time; no outdoor activities; too many rules; quarrel with others 寫作范文詳見：寫作范文詳見： http:/ 亮點句型速成亮點句型速成常用句型：常用句型：The homework is too much. I have no outdoor activities.推薦句型：推薦句型： I cant join in many outdoor activities because of toomuch homework. There is so much homework that I dont have enough time to take part in outdoor activities.常用句型：常用句型：I have a happy school life.推薦句型：推薦句型： With these special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life. I have a happy school life which I will never forget. 常用句型：常用句型：I like playing football.推薦句型：推薦句型： I like playing football on the playground. I like playing football on the playground with great interest.常用句型：常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didnt pass the math exam again.推薦句型：推薦句型： I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam. How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.1. My favorite subject is physics.2. Its difficult but interesting.3. Last weeks talent show in our class was a great success.4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.5. It is easy for me to understand.6. Teenagers should be allowed to.7. There are a lot of rules at my school. 8. You have given me so much help that I will never forget.9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 10. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.11. Our school where are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful.典例剖析典例剖析（2013云南）云南）A Talk to Myself提示：提示： 在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有許多快在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中，你有許多快 樂，也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你樂，也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你 想對自己說點什么呢？請根據(jù)所給題目用想對自己說點什么呢？請根據(jù)所給題目用 英語寫一篇短文。英語寫一篇短文。要求：要求： 1. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù) 不少于不少于60個；個； 2. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以 零分計。零分計?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】1. 寫作的對象是寫作的對象是“我自己我自己”,行文用第一人稱。行文用第一人稱。2. 從三年中的快樂；三年中的遺憾；對自從三年中的快樂；三年中的遺憾；對自 己說的話及對未來生活的希望三個方面陳述。己說的話及對未來生活的希望三個方面陳述。3. 陳述陳述“我我”在學(xué)習(xí)生活中的快樂和遺憾時，用在學(xué)習(xí)生活中的快樂和遺憾時，用一一 般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；如果表達對未來充滿希望，則用般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；如果表達對未來充滿希望，則用 一般將來時態(tài)。一般將來時態(tài)。4. 短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學(xué)習(xí)和短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學(xué)習(xí)和 生活中的快樂和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己生活中的快樂和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己 說的話。說的話。5. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名?！痉段狞c評范文點評】A Talk to Myself How time flies! Im leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.How time flies！用一個感嘆句來感用一個感嘆句來感嘆時間的飛逝，給嘆時間的飛逝，給讀者留下了深刻印讀者留下了深刻印象，使得文章增加象，使得文章增加文采。文采。 Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life.not onlybut also使得句子通順使得句子通順連貫，使得文章句連貫，使得文章句式更加豐富，也顯式更加豐富，也顯示作者對連接詞的示作者對連接詞的掌握和運用水平；掌握和運用水平；賓語從句賓語從句how to do的使用使得顯示了的使用使得顯示了作者較高的語言表作者較高的語言表達能力。達能力。 However, Im also upset sometimes. I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know its not good for me. Ill try my best to join in more.however的運用的運用承上啟下，行文承上啟下，行文自然。自然。用固定短語用固定短語take part in，quite often，because of，too much彰顯作彰顯作者詞匯之豐富，者詞匯之豐富，是增分的一大亮是增分的一大亮點。點。 I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.使用主從復(fù)合句來使用主從復(fù)合句來總結(jié)全文，既使文章總結(jié)全文，既使文章句式豐富，又呼吁主句式豐富，又呼吁主題，相信自己以后的題，相信自己以后的生活會更好。生活會更好。