(湖南省專(zhuān)用)版高考英語(yǔ)二輪 三輪復(fù)習(xí) 模塊7書(shū)面表達(dá)課件 新人教版
專(zhuān)題一記敘文型書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題二 議論文型書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題三 說(shuō)明文型書(shū)面表達(dá)專(zhuān)題四 應(yīng)用文型書(shū)面表達(dá)模塊模塊 7 7書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá) 模塊模塊 7 7書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá) 考綱解讀模塊模塊 7 7 考綱解讀考綱解讀 書(shū)面表達(dá)是一個(gè)高度綜合性的題目,旨在考查考生書(shū)面表達(dá)是一個(gè)高度綜合性的題目,旨在考查考生的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力,看其是否能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)和的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)能力,看其是否能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)和掌握的技能進(jìn)行思想交流。該題要求考生根據(jù)所給圖表、掌握的技能進(jìn)行思想交流。該題要求考生根據(jù)所給圖表、提綱等,應(yīng)用所學(xué)知識(shí)將所提示的信息組成行文連貫、提綱等,應(yīng)用所學(xué)知識(shí)將所提示的信息組成行文連貫、文理暢通、語(yǔ)言得體的文章。它不但要求考生有豐富的文理暢通、語(yǔ)言得體的文章。它不但要求考生有豐富的語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)法知識(shí),而且要有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)法知識(shí),而且要有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力,是一種復(fù)合型的題型。維能力,是一種復(fù)合型的題型。命題分析模塊模塊 7 7 命題分析命題分析 從近幾年全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題看,高考書(shū)從近幾年全國(guó)高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)試題看,高考書(shū)面表達(dá)表現(xiàn)出下面的命題特點(diǎn):面表達(dá)表現(xiàn)出下面的命題特點(diǎn): 1 1格局:格局:“提示型、半開(kāi)放式提示型、半開(kāi)放式”寫(xiě)作寫(xiě)作 20102010年各省市的書(shū)面表達(dá)題基本都屬于提示型寫(xiě)年各省市的書(shū)面表達(dá)題基本都屬于提示型寫(xiě)作,寫(xiě)作要求明確,提示簡(jiǎn)明,完全摒棄原有的純粹作,寫(xiě)作要求明確,提示簡(jiǎn)明,完全摒棄原有的純粹“翻譯型翻譯型”命題,不再禁錮同學(xué)們的思維空間。題目命題,不再禁錮同學(xué)們的思維空間。題目設(shè)置一般都提供圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱等情景。試題設(shè)置設(shè)置一般都提供圖畫(huà)、圖表、提綱等情景。試題設(shè)置模塊模塊 7 7 命題分析命題分析 均為半開(kāi)放式,給考生一定提示的同時(shí),也提供了更均為半開(kāi)放式,給考生一定提示的同時(shí),也提供了更為寬廣的思維空間,使優(yōu)秀考生有自由發(fā)揮的余地,為寬廣的思維空間,使優(yōu)秀考生有自由發(fā)揮的余地,這樣更能全面和客觀地考查考生的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。要這樣更能全面和客觀地考查考生的書(shū)面表達(dá)能力。要寫(xiě)出一篇好的文章,考生不僅要精確地表達(dá)所給信息,寫(xiě)出一篇好的文章,考生不僅要精確地表達(dá)所給信息,更加重要的是在自由發(fā)揮部分,要有自己獨(dú)到的見(jiàn)解,更加重要的是在自由發(fā)揮部分,要有自己獨(dú)到的見(jiàn)解,要言之有物,言之有理,充分體現(xiàn)出思維的廣度和深要言之有物,言之有理,充分體現(xiàn)出思維的廣度和深度。度。模塊模塊 7 7 命題分析命題分析 2 2體裁:應(yīng)用文獨(dú)占鰲頭體裁:應(yīng)用文獨(dú)占鰲頭 今年的高考書(shū)面表達(dá)處處體現(xiàn)了新課改對(duì)高考今年的高考書(shū)面表達(dá)處處體現(xiàn)了新課改對(duì)高考“體體現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的交際性、實(shí)用性和應(yīng)用性,提高考生的綜現(xiàn)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的交際性、實(shí)用性和應(yīng)用性,提高考生的綜合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力合語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力”的要求。依然沿襲以往的風(fēng)格,強(qiáng)調(diào)的要求。依然沿襲以往的風(fēng)格,強(qiáng)調(diào)寫(xiě)作的目的性和實(shí)用性。應(yīng)用文仍是主打體裁。寫(xiě)作的目的性和實(shí)用性。應(yīng)用文仍是主打體裁。模塊模塊 7 7 命題分析命題分析 3 3理念:源于生活,高于生活理念:源于生活,高于生活 2010 2010年高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活,寫(xiě)作話題年高考書(shū)面表達(dá)題貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活,寫(xiě)作話題真實(shí),同學(xué)們有話可寫(xiě)。書(shū)面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高,每真實(shí),同學(xué)們有話可寫(xiě)。書(shū)面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高,每一份試卷都符合同學(xué)們認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷;題目設(shè)一份試卷都符合同學(xué)們認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷;題目設(shè)計(jì)關(guān)注同學(xué)們成長(zhǎng),注意培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們良好的道德品質(zhì)和健計(jì)關(guān)注同學(xué)們成長(zhǎng),注意培養(yǎng)同學(xué)們良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格全的人格( (如江西卷和北京卷等如江西卷和北京卷等) );另外,所涉及話題關(guān)注;另外,所涉及話題關(guān)注社會(huì),富有新時(shí)代特色,能喚起同學(xué)們強(qiáng)烈的主人翁意識(shí)社會(huì),富有新時(shí)代特色,能喚起同學(xué)們強(qiáng)烈的主人翁意識(shí)和責(zé)任感和責(zé)任感( (如福建卷的節(jié)水、廣東卷基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作的戒煙問(wèn)題如福建卷的節(jié)水、廣東卷基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作的戒煙問(wèn)題) )。這種貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚(yáng)個(gè)性、關(guān)注環(huán)境的設(shè)題理這種貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚(yáng)個(gè)性、關(guān)注環(huán)境的設(shè)題理念仍將是近幾年高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的基本思路。念仍將是近幾年高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的基本思路。應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛模塊模塊 7 7 應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛 1 1火眼金睛細(xì)審題火眼金睛細(xì)審題 審題是高質(zhì)量書(shū)面表達(dá)的前提。第一要審文體。高考書(shū)審題是高質(zhì)量書(shū)面表達(dá)的前提。第一要審文體。高考書(shū)面表達(dá)體裁主要有記敘文、說(shuō)明文、應(yīng)用文和議論文等。所面表達(dá)體裁主要有記敘文、說(shuō)明文、應(yīng)用文和議論文等。所以考生首先要準(zhǔn)確確定文體。然后審格式。近幾年高考書(shū)面以考生首先要準(zhǔn)確確定文體。然后審格式。近幾年高考書(shū)面表達(dá)的格式以書(shū)信、求職信、通知和看圖作文等為最多,考表達(dá)的格式以書(shū)信、求職信、通知和看圖作文等為最多,考生對(duì)這些文體格式都應(yīng)有明確的認(rèn)識(shí),并熟練掌握。另外在生對(duì)這些文體格式都應(yīng)有明確的認(rèn)識(shí),并熟練掌握。另外在開(kāi)始構(gòu)思之前,一定要認(rèn)真閱讀寫(xiě)作要求中的所有信息,確開(kāi)始構(gòu)思之前,一定要認(rèn)真閱讀寫(xiě)作要求中的所有信息,確定好基本時(shí)態(tài)。特別要注意人稱(chēng)的使用,因?yàn)楦呖紩?shū)面表達(dá)定好基本時(shí)態(tài)。特別要注意人稱(chēng)的使用,因?yàn)楦呖紩?shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)明確規(guī)定,人稱(chēng)錯(cuò)誤要扣除所得分?jǐn)?shù)的三分之一。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)明確規(guī)定,人稱(chēng)錯(cuò)誤要扣除所得分?jǐn)?shù)的三分之一。模塊模塊 7 7 應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛 2 2列出要點(diǎn)免遺漏列出要點(diǎn)免遺漏 高考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一是要點(diǎn)齊全,漏掉要點(diǎn)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一是要點(diǎn)齊全,漏掉要點(diǎn)要相應(yīng)地扣分。細(xì)讀所提供的信息和要求后,最好把需要相應(yīng)地扣分。細(xì)讀所提供的信息和要求后,最好把需要表達(dá)的全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)在草稿紙上,并標(biāo)上序號(hào),以要表達(dá)的全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)在草稿紙上,并標(biāo)上序號(hào),以免遺漏要點(diǎn)。列要點(diǎn)時(shí),假如所給提示是圖表,要從圖免遺漏要點(diǎn)。列要點(diǎn)時(shí),假如所給提示是圖表,要從圖表中找出需要表達(dá)的信息要點(diǎn),特別是細(xì)節(jié),如事件背表中找出需要表達(dá)的信息要點(diǎn),特別是細(xì)節(jié),如事件背景、人物表情以及圖畫(huà)中的漢字等。倘若有生詞提示,景、人物表情以及圖畫(huà)中的漢字等。倘若有生詞提示,一定要用上。一定要用上。模塊模塊 7 7 應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛 3 3妙筆生花連成篇妙筆生花連成篇 一篇好的一篇好的WritingWriting,不僅要要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)規(guī)范,還,不僅要要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)規(guī)范,還需要有把這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)聯(lián)系起來(lái)的語(yǔ)篇銜接手段,即我們需要有把這些內(nèi)容有機(jī)聯(lián)系起來(lái)的語(yǔ)篇銜接手段,即我們常說(shuō)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、連接性副詞、以及一些介詞和短語(yǔ)。這些常說(shuō)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞、連接性副詞、以及一些介詞和短語(yǔ)。這些往往是好的往往是好的WritingWriting出彩的部分。因?yàn)檫@樣的銜接才能使出彩的部分。因?yàn)檫@樣的銜接才能使句子之間、段落之間有連貫性和整體性。句子之間、段落之間有連貫性和整體性。 模塊模塊 7 7 應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛應(yīng)試點(diǎn)睛 有不少同學(xué)認(rèn)為語(yǔ)篇連接手段是個(gè)很高層次的東有不少同學(xué)認(rèn)為語(yǔ)篇連接手段是個(gè)很高層次的東西,實(shí)際上,這些連接手段對(duì)于同學(xué)們來(lái)說(shuō)并不陌生,西,實(shí)際上,這些連接手段對(duì)于同學(xué)們來(lái)說(shuō)并不陌生,常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)篇連接手段有:常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)篇連接手段有: 表時(shí)間表時(shí)間/ /次序:次序:first, in first, in the first place, secondthe first place, second; 表并列表并列/ /遞進(jìn):遞進(jìn): too, too, alsoalso,as well as, in addition, furthermore; as well as, in addition, furthermore; 表表舉例:舉例:for example, for instancefor example, for instance;表總結(jié):;表總結(jié):as a as a result, in summary, in shortresult, in summary, in short等。等。題型探究模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 探究點(diǎn)一提綱型探究點(diǎn)一提綱型 提綱作文的形式是多樣的,常見(jiàn)的有書(shū)信、日記、通提綱作文的形式是多樣的,常見(jiàn)的有書(shū)信、日記、通知、發(fā)言稿、對(duì)某人或某物的介紹、歡迎詞等。提綱作文知、發(fā)言稿、對(duì)某人或某物的介紹、歡迎詞等。提綱作文的選材范圍很廣,內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單易懂,且多是考生熟悉的話題。的選材范圍很廣,內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單易懂,且多是考生熟悉的話題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題,把握中心,注意各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系,寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題,把握中心,注意各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間的聯(lián)系,且保證所給要點(diǎn)不遺漏。且保證所給要點(diǎn)不遺漏。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 具體說(shuō)來(lái),提綱式作文分為短文提示、要點(diǎn)提示和具體說(shuō)來(lái),提綱式作文分為短文提示、要點(diǎn)提示和表格提示。第一種是用漢語(yǔ)給出一段短文提示,要求根表格提示。第一種是用漢語(yǔ)給出一段短文提示,要求根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇100120100120詞左右的短文,所考查的形式靈詞左右的短文,所考查的形式靈活多樣,如人物介紹、地點(diǎn)介紹等。第二種是要點(diǎn)提示,活多樣,如人物介紹、地點(diǎn)介紹等。第二種是要點(diǎn)提示,這是比較常見(jiàn)的一種寫(xiě)作方式,此類(lèi)題目用漢語(yǔ)提綱列這是比較常見(jiàn)的一種寫(xiě)作方式,此類(lèi)題目用漢語(yǔ)提綱列舉幾個(gè)要點(diǎn),提出寫(xiě)作要求。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要首先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)確舉幾個(gè)要點(diǎn),提出寫(xiě)作要求。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要首先根據(jù)要點(diǎn)確定文章的中心思想,然后圍繞中心思想和要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)合理定文章的中心思想,然后圍繞中心思想和要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)合理和適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想。第三種是表格提示,出題人用表格的形和適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想。第三種是表格提示,出題人用表格的形式給出要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)作時(shí)我們首先要將表格中的要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成式給出要點(diǎn),寫(xiě)作時(shí)我們首先要將表格中的要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成一個(gè)個(gè)完整的句子,然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求,一個(gè)個(gè)完整的句子,然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求,把這些要點(diǎn)連句成文。把這些要點(diǎn)連句成文。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【典例典例】 20102010四川四川 假定你校將舉行一個(gè)成人假定你校將舉行一個(gè)成人儀式,你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容要儀式,你將作為代表在儀式上發(fā)言。請(qǐng)你按以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿。點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇英文發(fā)言稿。 1 1過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往;過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往; 2 2現(xiàn)在的感受和認(rèn)識(shí);現(xiàn)在的感受和認(rèn)識(shí); 3 3將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和措施。將來(lái)的目標(biāo)和措施。 參考詞匯:責(zé)任參考詞匯:責(zé)任responsibilityresponsibility模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 注意:注意: 1 1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100100左右;左右; 2 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫;可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫; 3 3發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好( (不計(jì)入總詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)數(shù)) )。Good morningGood morning,everyone!everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup”on becoming a grownup”_ Thank you for listening. Thank you for listening.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【思路點(diǎn)撥思路點(diǎn)撥】 第一步:確立文體:英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。第一步:確立文體:英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。 第二步:確立要點(diǎn):第二步:確立要點(diǎn):(1)(1)過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往過(guò)去對(duì)成年的向往 ;(2)(2)現(xiàn)在對(duì)已成年的感受和認(rèn)識(shí)現(xiàn)在對(duì)已成年的感受和認(rèn)識(shí) ;(3)(3)成年的我將來(lái)的目成年的我將來(lái)的目標(biāo)及措施。標(biāo)及措施。 第三步:注意事項(xiàng):寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)齊全,要包括規(guī)定第三步:注意事項(xiàng):寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)齊全,要包括規(guī)定的三方面內(nèi)容;注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。的三方面內(nèi)容;注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究【參考范文參考范文】 Good morning, everyone!Good morning, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grownup”becoming a grownup” As a child, I always hoped that I could grow As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now Im a grownup, but I find things do not go as I Im a grownup, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grownup not the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this, but also more responsibilities. only means this, but also more responsibilities. 模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究I hope to do more for my parents and society I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. enter a good university. Thank you for listening. Thank you for listening.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 探究點(diǎn)二圖畫(huà)型探究點(diǎn)二圖畫(huà)型 看圖作文也是常見(jiàn)的高考題型。其素材貼近學(xué)生生看圖作文也是常見(jiàn)的高考題型。其素材貼近學(xué)生生活。圖畫(huà)類(lèi)的書(shū)面表達(dá)一般都是考生所熟悉的場(chǎng)景,畫(huà)活。圖畫(huà)類(lèi)的書(shū)面表達(dá)一般都是考生所熟悉的場(chǎng)景,畫(huà)面生動(dòng)形象,具有趣味性,體現(xiàn)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)面生動(dòng)形象,具有趣味性,體現(xiàn)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)“生活化生活化”的特點(diǎn)。有時(shí)候還附帶有英語(yǔ)或漢語(yǔ)說(shuō)明,考生易獲得的特點(diǎn)。有時(shí)候還附帶有英語(yǔ)或漢語(yǔ)說(shuō)明,考生易獲得直觀信息,并能充分發(fā)揮自己的想象、觀察、推理判斷直觀信息,并能充分發(fā)揮自己的想象、觀察、推理判斷和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的能力。和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的能力。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 一般來(lái)說(shuō),看圖作文多以?shī)A敘夾議的形式出現(xiàn),即一般來(lái)說(shuō),看圖作文多以?shī)A敘夾議的形式出現(xiàn),即先闡述圖畫(huà)所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容,然后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。因此,先闡述圖畫(huà)所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容,然后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。因此,在具體的布局謀篇中要學(xué)會(huì)理解圖畫(huà),將每幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)在具體的布局謀篇中要學(xué)會(huì)理解圖畫(huà),將每幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容有機(jī)地聯(lián)系在一起,而不能斷章取義,誤解命題人的容有機(jī)地聯(lián)系在一起,而不能斷章取義,誤解命題人的意圖。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以先按照每幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容,列出簡(jiǎn)單的意圖。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以先按照每幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容,列出簡(jiǎn)單的提綱,然后再將圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容串聯(lián)起來(lái)。提綱,然后再將圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容串聯(lián)起來(lái)。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【典例】【典例】 20102010福建福建 假設(shè)你是李華,福建假設(shè)你是李華,福建省某中學(xué)高中學(xué)生,今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加省某中學(xué)高中學(xué)生,今年暑假將前往澳大利亞參加主題為主題為“WATER FOR LIFE”WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以參的交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以參訪代表的身份,根據(jù)以下圖片提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇訪代表的身份,根據(jù)以下圖片提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。發(fā)言稿。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究注意:注意:1 1根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容適當(dāng)展開(kāi),以使行文連貫;根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容適當(dāng)展開(kāi),以使行文連貫;2 2開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3 3文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;4 4詞數(shù):詞數(shù):120120左右。左右。參考詞匯:短缺參考詞匯:短缺shortageshortage;資源;資源resourceresource模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究LadiesLadies_ _andand_ _gentlemengentlemen, GoodGood_ _morningmorning. . ImIm_ _LiLi_ _HuaHua_ _fromfrom_ _FujianFujian,China.ItsChina.Its_ _mymy_ _greatgreat_ _honorhonor_ _toto_ _bebe_ _herehere_ _toto_ _saysay_ _somethingsomething_ _aboutabout_ _thethe_ _globalglobal_ _waterwater_ _shortageshortage_ _andand_ _waysways_ _ofof_ _dealingdealing_ _withwith_ _itit. ._ Thats all. Thank you. Thats all. Thank you.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究【參考范文參考范文】 LadiesLadies_ _andand_ _gentlemengentlemen, GoodGood_ _morning.Immorning.Im_ _LiLi_ _HuaHua_ _fromfrom_ _FujianFujian,China.ItsChina.Its_ _mymy_ _greatgreat_ _honorhonor_ _toto_ _bebe_ _herehere_ _toto_ _saysay_ _somethingsomething_ _aboutabout_ _thethe_ _globalglobal_ _waterwater_ _shortageshortage_ _andand_ _waysways_ _ofof_ _dealingdealing_ _withwith_ _it.it._ As we know, the global water shortage is As we know, the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and global warming, environmental pollution and the the everincreasingeverincreasing population. Therefore, population. Therefore, its high time we did something about it.its high time we did something about it.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to Firstly, an effective way, I think, is to reserve water in a scientific way for future reserve water in a scientific way for future use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed use. Secondly, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for to use the existing water resources, for example, turning sea water into fresh water. example, turning sea water into fresh water. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Thirdly, we must stop water pollution by law. Last but not least, its everyones Last but not least, its everyones responsibility to make good use of water, such responsibility to make good use of water, such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.as recycling and saving water in our daily life.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 In conclusion, people around the world In conclusion, people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.and explore potential ones scientifically. Thats all. Thank you. Thats all. Thank you.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 探究點(diǎn)三圖表型探究點(diǎn)三圖表型 圖表作文是高考英語(yǔ)作文考查較多的一種題型。圖表圖表作文是高考英語(yǔ)作文考查較多的一種題型。圖表類(lèi)作文有表格、餅形圖、曲線圖、折線圖等多種形式。要類(lèi)作文有表格、餅形圖、曲線圖、折線圖等多種形式。要求考生通過(guò)對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析,對(duì)前后變化、正求考生通過(guò)對(duì)數(shù)據(jù)、文字內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析,對(duì)前后變化、正反觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對(duì)比,或者對(duì)某產(chǎn)品進(jìn)行介紹,系統(tǒng)而準(zhǔn)確地反觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對(duì)比,或者對(duì)某產(chǎn)品進(jìn)行介紹,系統(tǒng)而準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出圖表所示內(nèi)容,并得出令人信服的結(jié)論,比如用來(lái)表達(dá)出圖表所示內(nèi)容,并得出令人信服的結(jié)論,比如用來(lái)說(shuō)明關(guān)于生產(chǎn)、銷(xiāo)售、發(fā)展進(jìn)程等項(xiàng)目的統(tǒng)計(jì)變化。從寫(xiě)說(shuō)明關(guān)于生產(chǎn)、銷(xiāo)售、發(fā)展進(jìn)程等項(xiàng)目的統(tǒng)計(jì)變化。從寫(xiě)作體裁看,主要有記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文,也可以是夾作體裁看,主要有記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文,也可以是夾敘夾議文。時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。敘夾議文。時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 寫(xiě)圖表作文時(shí),一定要理解圖表的內(nèi)容,弄清圖表寫(xiě)圖表作文時(shí),一定要理解圖表的內(nèi)容,弄清圖表中相關(guān)信息間的聯(lián)系。如:如果涉及數(shù)據(jù)的話,不能只中相關(guān)信息間的聯(lián)系。如:如果涉及數(shù)據(jù)的話,不能只是單純地列出數(shù)據(jù),那樣是枯燥無(wú)味的,應(yīng)該仔細(xì)分析是單純地列出數(shù)據(jù),那樣是枯燥無(wú)味的,應(yīng)該仔細(xì)分析數(shù)據(jù)之間有什么樣的聯(lián)系,比如有的數(shù)據(jù)之間可能存在數(shù)據(jù)之間有什么樣的聯(lián)系,比如有的數(shù)據(jù)之間可能存在倍數(shù)關(guān)系等;然后再分析這些數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明的問(wèn)題。另外,倍數(shù)關(guān)系等;然后再分析這些數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明的問(wèn)題。另外,寫(xiě)作時(shí)要處理好重點(diǎn)與次重點(diǎn)的關(guān)系,而不能沒(méi)有主題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要處理好重點(diǎn)與次重點(diǎn)的關(guān)系,而不能沒(méi)有主題。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 在具體的布局謀篇中可以采用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu):在具體的布局謀篇中可以采用三段式的結(jié)構(gòu): 第一段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,點(diǎn)明圖表要反映的主題。經(jīng)常第一段:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山,點(diǎn)明圖表要反映的主題。經(jīng)常使用的詞匯有:使用的詞匯有:table, chart, figure; describe, table, chart, figure; describe, tell, show, representtell, show, represent等,經(jīng)常用到的句型有:等,經(jīng)常用到的句型有:As is As is shown in the graphshown in the graph/As is shown in the /As is shown in the tabletable/It can be seen from the table that/It can be seen from the table thatIt It can be concluded from the graph thatcan be concluded from the graph that/Compared /Compared withwith/According to the survey, about/According to the survey, about模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 第二段:中間段落對(duì)圖表的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析,可采用分第二段:中間段落對(duì)圖表的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析,可采用分類(lèi)或?qū)Ρ葋?lái)表現(xiàn)主題,并闡明必要的理由。在敘述中要類(lèi)或?qū)Ρ葋?lái)表現(xiàn)主題,并闡明必要的理由。在敘述中要注意,切忌反復(fù)使用同一句型,忌反復(fù)出現(xiàn)圖表中的數(shù)注意,切忌反復(fù)使用同一句型,忌反復(fù)出現(xiàn)圖表中的數(shù)據(jù),因?yàn)檫@樣會(huì)使你的文章顯得毫無(wú)生氣。要注意改換據(jù),因?yàn)檫@樣會(huì)使你的文章顯得毫無(wú)生氣。要注意改換敘述的句式,注意使用不同的詞語(yǔ)及句式。在描述圖表敘述的句式,注意使用不同的詞語(yǔ)及句式。在描述圖表中的變化與發(fā)展趨勢(shì)時(shí)常用的短語(yǔ)和句型有:中的變化與發(fā)展趨勢(shì)時(shí)常用的短語(yǔ)和句型有: 快速上升:快速上升:rise, increase; go up; sharply; rise, increase; go up; sharply; rapidly; quickly; dramaticallyrapidly; quickly; dramatically 緩慢下降:緩慢下降:decrease; reduce; come down; decrease; reduce; come down; decline; drop; fall slowly/gradually decline; drop; fall slowly/gradually 模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 描述數(shù)據(jù)的時(shí)候可以用到下面這些表達(dá)或詞匯:描述數(shù)據(jù)的時(shí)候可以用到下面這些表達(dá)或詞匯: 轉(zhuǎn)折:轉(zhuǎn)折:while; but; on the contrary; howeverwhile; but; on the contrary; however 比較:比較:compared with/tocompared with/to 對(duì)比:對(duì)比:in contrast to; different from; in contrast to; different from; difference betweendifference between 類(lèi)似:類(lèi)似:similar to; as/the samesimilar to; as/the sameas; as; 遞進(jìn):遞進(jìn):more than; less thanmore than; less than 第三段:結(jié)尾對(duì)全文進(jìn)行小結(jié),經(jīng)常使用的詞語(yǔ)及第三段:結(jié)尾對(duì)全文進(jìn)行小結(jié),經(jīng)常使用的詞語(yǔ)及句式有:句式有:in a word, in short; generally speaking; in a word, in short; generally speaking; Its clear from theIts clear from thethatthat; Based on the Based on the description above, we can safely draw the description above, we can safely draw the conclusion thatconclusion that模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【典例典例】 20102010浙江六校聯(lián)考浙江六校聯(lián)考 假設(shè)你叫李華,假設(shè)你叫李華,你的美國(guó)筆友你的美國(guó)筆友JohnsonJohnson想和家人來(lái)中國(guó)定居,請(qǐng)你幫他在想和家人來(lái)中國(guó)定居,請(qǐng)你幫他在A A、B B兩個(gè)城市中做出選擇。下面的圖表是對(duì)這兩座城市兩個(gè)城市中做出選擇。下面的圖表是對(duì)這兩座城市在就業(yè)、娛樂(lè)和環(huán)境等方面所作的對(duì)比。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)該表在就業(yè)、娛樂(lè)和環(huán)境等方面所作的對(duì)比。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)該表提供的信息用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封電子郵件,提出你的建議并提供的信息用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封電子郵件,提出你的建議并說(shuō)明理由。說(shuō)明理由。 注意:注意: 1 1圖表左邊的數(shù)字說(shuō)明人們對(duì)這兩個(gè)城市的喜愛(ài)程圖表左邊的數(shù)字說(shuō)明人們對(duì)這兩個(gè)城市的喜愛(ài)程度。度。 2 2詞數(shù)詞數(shù)l20l20左右。短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不左右。短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究Dear JohnsonDear Johnson, Im so glad to learn that you and your Im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in family are coming to settle down in China._China._ Yours Yours, Li Li HuaHua模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究【參考范文參考范文】 Dear JohnsonDear Johnson, Im so glad to learn that you and your Im so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China. family are coming to settle down in China. After a careful study of the information about After a careful study of the information about the two cities, I suggest you choose to live the two cities, I suggest you choose to live in City Ain City AFirst of all, City A is a more First of all, City A is a more popular city to live in. The environment in popular city to live in. The environment in City A is better than that in City B and the City A is better than that in City B and the climate there is very pleasant. Besides, thereclimate there is very pleasant. Besides, there模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 are many places for entertainment where you can are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time. As for the enjoy yourselves in your spare time. As for the employment, though the job opportunities are not employment, though the job opportunities are not so good as in City B, yet I dont think its a so good as in City B, yet I dont think its a problem for you as a teacher of English.problem for you as a teacher of English. This is only my suggestion and its up to This is only my suggestion and its up to you to decide. Hope to hear from you again.you to decide. Hope to hear from you again. Yours Yours, Li Li HuaHua模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 探究點(diǎn)四開(kāi)放式作文探究點(diǎn)四開(kāi)放式作文 開(kāi)放式作文不等同于一般的提綱作文,因?yàn)樗幌裉衢_(kāi)放式作文不等同于一般的提綱作文,因?yàn)樗幌裉峋V作文那樣所給的要點(diǎn)很全面,寫(xiě)作時(shí)按照一定的綱作文那樣所給的要點(diǎn)很全面,寫(xiě)作時(shí)按照一定的“框框框框”進(jìn)行發(fā)揮即可,而要求考生憑借試卷上所提供的線索進(jìn)行發(fā)揮即可,而要求考生憑借試卷上所提供的線索( (包括包括文字提示和圖畫(huà)文字提示和圖畫(huà)) ),利用發(fā)散性思維,去合理地想象、推理,利用發(fā)散性思維,去合理地想象、推理,然后寫(xiě)出一篇合情合理的文章。由此可知,開(kāi)放性作文類(lèi)然后寫(xiě)出一篇合情合理的文章。由此可知,開(kāi)放性作文類(lèi)似于語(yǔ)文的材料作文,不僅考查考生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力、語(yǔ)似于語(yǔ)文的材料作文,不僅考查考生的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力、語(yǔ)言組織能力,而且還考查考生的想象力以及多角度分析問(wèn)言組織能力,而且還考查考生的想象力以及多角度分析問(wèn)題和解決問(wèn)題的能力。開(kāi)放性作文是英語(yǔ)高考寫(xiě)作中難度題和解決問(wèn)題的能力。開(kāi)放性作文是英語(yǔ)高考寫(xiě)作中難度最大的一類(lèi)。最大的一類(lèi)。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【典例典例】 20102010北京北京 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示,寫(xiě)一請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示,寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于5050。 In your spoken English class In your spoken English class,your teacher your teacher shows you the following shows you the following picture.Youpicture.You are asked are asked to describe the picture and explain how you to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.understand it.模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究_模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 【思路點(diǎn)撥思路點(diǎn)撥】 1 1三分之一描寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):陽(yáng)光,樓三分之一描寫(xiě)要點(diǎn):陽(yáng)光,樓( (很靠近很靠近) ),彎曲的樹(shù)。,彎曲的樹(shù)。(the sun, two apartments/flats (the sun, two apartments/flats closelylocatedcloselylocated, , the winding/twisted tree)the winding/twisted tree) 2 2三分之二議論著眼立意:三分之二議論著眼立意: (1) (1)人生角度:在成長(zhǎng)的道路上人生角度:在成長(zhǎng)的道路上( (樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)) ),有曲折,有曲折,有困難有困難( (建筑的阻擋,彎曲建筑的阻擋,彎曲) ),但是只要向著光明和希望,但是只要向著光明和希望( (太太陽(yáng)陽(yáng)) )去努力拼搏,堅(jiān)持不懈,還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功去努力拼搏,堅(jiān)持不懈,還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功( (樹(shù)在樓的夾縫中長(zhǎng)高了,超出建筑樹(shù)在樓的夾縫中長(zhǎng)高了,超出建筑) )。 模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究 (2)(2)和諧角度:和諧角度: 城市的發(fā)展城市的發(fā)展( (建筑建筑) )和環(huán)境的可持和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展續(xù)發(fā)展( (樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)樹(shù)的成長(zhǎng)) )要協(xié)調(diào),要平衡,要協(xié)調(diào),要平衡,( (在陽(yáng)光下在陽(yáng)光下) )才能才能欣然共存;欣然共存; (3)(3)立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系:引導(dǎo)立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系:引導(dǎo)9090后要具有積極后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度,生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。的生活態(tài)度,生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。 扣住低碳生活的扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點(diǎn),城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必環(huán)保熱點(diǎn),城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。需。模塊模塊 7 7 題型探究題型探究【參考范文參考范文】 In the picture, between two In the picture, between two closelylocatedcloselylocated buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.we want as the tree in the picture does.專(zhuān)題一記敘文型專(zhuān)題一記敘文型 書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)面表達(dá) 專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 記敘文型書(shū)面表達(dá)記敘文型書(shū)面表達(dá) 專(zhuān)題導(dǎo)讀專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 專(zhuān)題導(dǎo)讀專(zhuān)題導(dǎo)讀 一般說(shuō)來(lái),英語(yǔ)記敘文和漢語(yǔ)的一樣,有六大一般說(shuō)來(lái),英語(yǔ)記敘文和漢語(yǔ)的一樣,有六大“要要素素”,即時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、原因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果。寫(xiě)記敘,即時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、原因、經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果。寫(xiě)記敘文時(shí),要注意兼顧這幾大要素。另外,記敘文還講究寫(xiě)作文時(shí),要注意兼顧這幾大要素。另外,記敘文還講究寫(xiě)作順序。一般來(lái)說(shuō),記敘文的寫(xiě)作順序主要包括順敘和倒敘順序。一般來(lái)說(shuō),記敘文的寫(xiě)作順序主要包括順敘和倒敘兩種。順敘是指按照事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展的先后順序進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。兩種。順敘是指按照事件發(fā)生、發(fā)展的先后順序進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。而倒敘則指將某些后發(fā)生的細(xì)節(jié),甚至是事件的最后結(jié)果而倒敘則指將某些后發(fā)生的細(xì)節(jié),甚至是事件的最后結(jié)果先提到前面敘述,這樣可以起到引人入勝的效果。因此,先提到前面敘述,這樣可以起到引人入勝的效果。因此,在記敘文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,一定要避免內(nèi)容空洞、平鋪直敘,在記敘文的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中,一定要避免內(nèi)容空洞、平鋪直敘,否則就很難給人留下深刻的印象,得分不高就在所難免。否則就很難給人留下深刻的印象,得分不高就在所難免。真題再現(xiàn)專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 真題再現(xiàn)真題再現(xiàn) 20102010北京北京 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)(1)班的學(xué)生班的學(xué)生李華,利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的李華,利用上周末的時(shí)間幫助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫(xiě)一篇英文周記,旅行。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫(xiě)一篇英文周記,敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過(guò)程。敘述你從準(zhǔn)備到送行的全過(guò)程。 注意:注意:1.1.周記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。周記的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。 2 2詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于6060。專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 真題再現(xiàn)真題再現(xiàn) Last weekend Last weekend,I helped my grandparents I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to prepare their trip to BeidaiheBeidaihe._._專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 真題再現(xiàn)真題再現(xiàn)One possible versionOne possible version: Last weekend, I helped my grandparents Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to prepare their trip to BeidaiheBeidaihe. On Saturday . On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in the weather in BeidaiheBeidaihe, and some hotel , and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a longfor my grandparents although there was a long專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 真題再現(xiàn)真題再現(xiàn)queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. journey. 專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè) ( (一一) ) 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三(1)(1)班的班長(zhǎng)李華,你們?nèi)嗤嗟陌嚅L(zhǎng)李華,你們?nèi)嗤瑢W(xué)在學(xué)在“五一節(jié)五一節(jié)”放假期間開(kāi)展了放假期間開(kāi)展了“體驗(yàn)一天低碳生活體驗(yàn)一天低碳生活”的活的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫(xiě)一篇英文短文,介動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序,寫(xiě)一篇英文短文,介紹同學(xué)們這一天的體驗(yàn)活動(dòng),向?qū)W校紹同學(xué)們這一天的體驗(yàn)活動(dòng),向?qū)W校“英語(yǔ)園地英語(yǔ)園地”投稿。短投稿。短文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。詞數(shù)不少于文的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。詞數(shù)不少于120120。 提示詞:提示詞:disposable chopsticksdisposable chopsticks一次性筷子一次性筷子專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè) A A LowcarbonLowcarbon Day Day The students in our class took part in an The students in our class took part in an activity of “Experience a activity of “Experience a LowcarbonLowcarbon Day” Day” during the Labor Dayduring the Labor Dayvacation.vacation._專(zhuān)題專(zhuān)題 一一 專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)專(zhuān)題預(yù)測(cè)One possible versionOne possible version: A A LowcarbonLowcarbon Day Day The students in our class took part in an The students in our class took part in an activity of “Experience a activity of “Experience a LowcarbonLowcarbon Day” during Day” during the Labor Day vacation. In the mornin