高考英語一輪復習 寫作素能培養(yǎng) 第10講 揣摩圖畫內涵從容掌控圖畫作文課件 外研版

路漫漫其修遠兮路漫漫其修遠兮 吾將上下而求索吾將上下而求索走向高考走向高考 英語英語外研版外研版 高考總復習高考總復習寫作素能培養(yǎng)寫作素能培養(yǎng)第三部分第三部分第十講第十講揣摩圖畫內涵，從容掌控圖畫作文揣摩圖畫內涵，從容掌控圖畫作文第三部分第三部分圖畫類作文是材料作文的一種特殊形式，是一種變“畫”為文的作文方式。這種題型提供給考生的是圖畫，要求考生在看懂圖畫意思后寫作文，主要訓練和考查考生的觀察力、思考力、創(chuàng)造力和表達能力。 一、試題特征 1素材貼近生活。圖畫類的書面表達一般都是中學生所熟悉的場景，畫面生動形象，具有趣味性，體現(xiàn)高考書面表達“生活化”的特點。有時候還附帶有英語或漢語說明，考生易獲得直觀信息。2文體形式多樣。圖畫式作文主要有記敘文、說明文和議論文。二、寫作步驟1確定文章體裁。這類文章一般以記敘文、說明文和議論文為主。2確定人稱。如果以日記、回憶錄等形式來寫，一般采用第一人稱；如果是以講故事的形式來寫，則一般采用第三人稱。3確定時態(tài)。根據(jù)圖畫內容及所采用的文章體裁，確定文章所要用的時態(tài)。4合理、適度的聯(lián)想。這類文章的說明一般都要求考生進行適度的聯(lián)想和發(fā)揮，以便使上下文能更好地連貫起來。5虛實結合、詳略得當。對于圖畫中的內容，該詳細敘述描寫的，就必須要詳細、具體；可以一筆帶過的就一筆帶過。比如圖畫中所有的時間、數(shù)字或言論須一詞不漏地寫清楚，而有些過程或原因則可適當簡略。三、注意事項1看圖記敘文的寫作要注意把握寫作素材的時間、地點、人物，以及事件的敘述?？梢圆扇〉箶⒌姆绞?，也可按事件的發(fā)生順序進行描寫。2看圖議論文的寫作首先要認真閱讀圖畫，把握圖的意義，有時還要注意其隱含的觀點與意圖，并聯(lián)系生活實際進行思考與闡述。3看圖說明文的寫作要注意觀察圖畫材料，找出所有內容，然后按一定的順序有條理地闡述。說明文的敘述順序一般有三種：時間順序、空間順序和邏輯順序(比如按圖畫反映的數(shù)字大小進行敘述)。注意文章開頭與結尾的呼應。四、常用句式1用于描述圖畫或引入話題的句式As is described in the picture.As is shown in the picture，we can see clearly the relationship between.The sight reminds me of something in my daily life.2用于記敘事件經(jīng)過或分析現(xiàn)象的句式At first.then.five minutes later.finally/in the end/at last.開始時然后五分鐘后最后。Some were doing.，some were doing.and/while others were doing.一些人在做，一些人在做，而另一些人在做。.was/were doing.when sb./sth. did.當某事正在發(fā)生時突然又發(fā)生另一件事。More and more people have come to realize the importance of.越來越多的人已經(jīng)開始意識到的重要性。3用于發(fā)表議論或總結的句式If such measures were not taken，the problem of.would be more serious.如果不采取這樣的措施的話，的問題會更加嚴重。We can conclude from this picture that. 從這幅圖畫我們可以推斷。As has been stated above，we must.如上所述，我們必須?！镜淅考僭O你剛剛參加了一次”倫敦游學”活動，請根據(jù)以下五幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文匯報，在班內介紹你們游學的過程。注意：1.匯報的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))； 2.詞數(shù)不少于120。參考詞匯：大本鐘Big Ben倫敦眼London Eye住宿家庭homestay familyGood morning, everyone. It was a great honor to have been selected to go on a study tour in Britain._ _ Thats all. Thank you.解析：從這五幅圖看，應該這樣來組織文章：1.我們到達英國Heathrow Airport，受到熱情的歡迎；2.我們到了各自的homestay family，與他們一起吃飯、聊天；3.我們到Westminster College聽報告，了解大學的情況(圖中給出了大學的名稱和教授做報告的內容)；4.我們參觀了很多風景名勝，比如Big Ben和London Eye；5.在最后一天，我們參加了告別會(farewell party)，大家在一起唱歌、跳舞；6.表達感想和意義，總結全文，說明這次活動的收獲提高了英語水平，更好地了解了英國文化。優(yōu)美范文Good morning, everyone. It was a great honor to have been selected to go on a study tour in Britain.On the morning of March 27, the moment we stepped out of Heathrow Airport, we were surprised to find our homestay families waiting to pick us up. Later we went to different homestay families as scheduled, where we had typical English food and chatted happily. The next day, as was arranged beforehand, we went to Westminster College to attend a presentation about the school. A professor gave us a vivid and interesting introduction, from which we learned a lot about the college. The following days sped by when we visited so many famous tourist attractions such as Big Ben and London Eye, where we took many photos. On the last day we had a farewell party, at which students from China and Britain gave fantastic performances including singing and dancing. From the study tour, not only have we improved our speaking skills, but weve got a better understanding of British culture. Thats all. Thank you.點評：結構安排合理，層次分明，銜接自然。如：1.開頭適當發(fā)揮，增加到達的時間，這使得敘述更加真切；運用了the moment，later，the next day，the following days，on the last day，保證了文章的連貫性；2.范文用一個段落介紹五幅圖的內容，在倒數(shù)第二段中講述了自己的感受，這樣安排使得文章的結構更加緊湊。注意：1. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息。參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：boreIn the picture，_ _ _ 參考答案：In the picture ，we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor couldnt afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.解析：本題為看圖寫作，主要是古時候的一則成語“鑿壁偷光”。注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結構要恰當，同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應用文寫作對于內容的要求是要達到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。點評：文章第一段描述圖片，第一句中用到了動詞ing形式的非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語和with 的復合結構In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.圖中我們可以看見一個男孩穿著破舊的衣服坐在一個堆滿書的桌子旁邊。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一絲微弱的光亮從墻上的一個小洞穿過，他沉靜在自己的閱讀中。第二段第一句開始說這個圖片的主題。This is a wellknown story from ancient Chinese idiom.這是一個眾人周知的中國古代成語。第二句也是用了一個分詞結構表示伴隨狀語The boy, being poor couldnt afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbors house to read at night.這個貧窮的男孩甚至不能夠買得起一根蠟燭，于是他把墻鑿了一個洞，從他鄰居那里偷了一些光在夜晚閱讀。第二段最后一句用了一個no matter引導的讓步狀語從句。The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遺余力的獲取知識，并且不管有多么困難的情況從不輕易氣餒。第三段結束Of course, things are totally different today. 當然，現(xiàn)在可完全不同了。第二句是一個not but 結構以及賓語從句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是這個故事本身而是這個故事反映出來的東西才是重要的。俗語：Hard work pays off.功夫不負有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.我們應該不辭辛苦地通過學習來改進自己并且為未來做準備。