高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí) 寫(xiě)作專題講座 第十九講 圖表作文課件

題目要求題目要求(2012溫州模擬溫州模擬) 據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查顯示，有85.8%的中學(xué)生說(shuō)自己的中學(xué)生說(shuō)自己的字不好看，而他們又不想改善它，其理由有很大差別。請(qǐng)的字不好看，而他們又不想改善它，其理由有很大差別。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表看法。根據(jù)下圖內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表看法。注意：詞數(shù)注意：詞數(shù)100120(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting. _技法指導(dǎo)技法指導(dǎo) 圖表作文要求學(xué)生首先看懂圖表旨在展示的內(nèi)容，然圖表作文要求學(xué)生首先看懂圖表旨在展示的內(nèi)容，然后準(zhǔn)確清晰地進(jìn)行分析、描述和概括，最后得出合乎情理后準(zhǔn)確清晰地進(jìn)行分析、描述和概括，最后得出合乎情理的結(jié)論。寫(xiě)圖表作文的一般步驟如下：的結(jié)論。寫(xiě)圖表作文的一般步驟如下： 1開(kāi)頭部分：圖表作文的首段必須描寫(xiě)圖表，這里開(kāi)頭部分：圖表作文的首段必須描寫(xiě)圖表，這里應(yīng)該包括趨勢(shì)描寫(xiě)和數(shù)據(jù)支持。應(yīng)該包括趨勢(shì)描寫(xiě)和數(shù)據(jù)支持。 2主題段落：在這一部分，考生應(yīng)該根據(jù)圖表所提供主題段落：在這一部分，考生應(yīng)該根據(jù)圖表所提供的信息進(jìn)行分析，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。的信息進(jìn)行分析，闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)和理由。， 3結(jié)尾部分：考生可以總結(jié)全文，加深讀者的印象；結(jié)尾部分：考生可以總結(jié)全文，加深讀者的印象；也可以發(fā)出號(hào)召，喚起讀者的共鳴；還可以表示作者的信也可以發(fā)出號(hào)召，喚起讀者的共鳴；還可以表示作者的信念，增強(qiáng)文章的感染力；有時(shí)，也可以提出問(wèn)題，啟發(fā)讀念，增強(qiáng)文章的感染力；有時(shí)，也可以提出問(wèn)題，啟發(fā)讀者思考。者思考。 無(wú)論怎樣，考生都應(yīng)該注意既要做到與開(kāi)頭呼應(yīng)又要無(wú)論怎樣，考生都應(yīng)該注意既要做到與開(kāi)頭呼應(yīng)又要概括全文，使讀者有一個(gè)統(tǒng)一完整的概念。概括全文，使讀者有一個(gè)統(tǒng)一完整的概念。寫(xiě)圖表作文時(shí)，考生還應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面：寫(xiě)圖表作文時(shí)，考生還應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面： 1圖表往往提供大量數(shù)據(jù)，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察分析，從中選圖表往往提供大量數(shù)據(jù)，應(yīng)仔細(xì)觀察分析，從中選擇有效信息進(jìn)行描述。擇有效信息進(jìn)行描述。 2充分利用圖表中提供的文字或說(shuō)明。同樣，圖表中充分利用圖表中提供的文字或說(shuō)明。同樣，圖表中沒(méi)有的信息不能憑主觀想象任意捏造。沒(méi)有的信息不能憑主觀想象任意捏造。 3說(shuō)明、描述圖表時(shí)應(yīng)該注意動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，屬于過(guò)去發(fā)說(shuō)明、描述圖表時(shí)應(yīng)該注意動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，屬于過(guò)去發(fā)生的應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，屬于經(jīng)常發(fā)生的應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。生的應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，屬于經(jīng)常發(fā)生的應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 4句子結(jié)構(gòu)要力求有變化，不要總是一個(gè)句型。句子結(jié)構(gòu)要力求有變化，不要總是一個(gè)句型。第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文第一步構(gòu)建框架，清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃金模板黃金模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the _(圖表主題圖表主題). The first thing we notice is that _(圖表最大特點(diǎn)圖表最大特點(diǎn)). This means that as _， _(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明) We can see from the statistics given that _(圖表圖表細(xì)節(jié)一細(xì)節(jié)一). After _(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一變化細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一變化), the _(緊跟著的變化緊跟著的變化). The figures also tell us that _(圖圖表細(xì)節(jié)二表細(xì)節(jié)二). _(數(shù)據(jù)位置，如數(shù)據(jù)位置，如In the second column), we can see that _ accounts for _(進(jìn)一步描進(jìn)一步描述述) Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that _(結(jié)論結(jié)論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned, is that _(給出原因給出原因). /It is high time that we _(發(fā)出倡議發(fā)出倡議)第二步打造亮句，增色文章第二步打造亮句，增色文章1根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，大約根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，大約85.8%的中學(xué)生認(rèn)為他們的的中學(xué)生認(rèn)為他們的字不好看。字不好看。 A recent survey shows that about 85.8 percent of middle school students hold the idea that their handwriting is poor. According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. 2漂亮整潔的書(shū)法是有益的，尤其對(duì)中學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)。漂亮整潔的書(shū)法是有益的，尤其對(duì)中學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)。 Its beneficial for students, especially for middle school students, to have beautiful and neat handwriting. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. 第三步串句成文，保證流暢第三步串句成文，保證流暢 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting.， According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students dont want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless. The rest have other reasons. As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.(2011北京東城區(qū)模擬北京東城區(qū)模擬)近日，某報(bào)對(duì)我市幾所小學(xué)的學(xué)生近日，某報(bào)對(duì)我市幾所小學(xué)的學(xué)生展開(kāi)了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于展開(kāi)了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于“什么樣的人可以當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)什么樣的人可以當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)”的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖表寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阏J(rèn)據(jù)下面的圖表寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勀阏J(rèn)為什么樣的人可以當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)。為什么樣的人可以當(dāng)班長(zhǎng)。注意：注意：1開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60。 The primary school students have different opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor. _ _ _參考范文：參考范文： The primary school students have different opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor. We can see from the pie chart that about 4.41% of the students believe that those who have good relationship with others are likely to become a monitor. More students around 6%, however, think that the most important character of a monitor is having responsibility. Interestingly, there are about 11.04% considering that a monitor should have a good look while 11.75% of them suppose that teachers usually appoint their favourite students as monitors. The majority of students, about 67% believe that only when they do well in their studies can they have the chance to become a monitor. On the one hand, I think, being a monitor requires high grades in study so that you can set a good example to the fellow students. On the other hand, being responsible is of equal importance to studying well. You need to be a good assistant to your teacher to help deal with some daily affairs in class, and sometimes when the headteacher is away, you are to be in charge of the class.