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第六講書面表達第六講書面表達 【解析】(1)仔細審題，注意題目的具體要求，明確寫作要求，確立短文的體裁，要用的時態(tài)和格式。本題是講述網(wǎng)購的話題，介紹網(wǎng)購在日常生活中的利與弊，并闡述自己的觀點。時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時。(2)注意寫作要點。本書面表達是提示作文，所給提示的內(nèi)容一定要寫全面，根據(jù)表格中的兩個方面提示展開。不必根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容直接翻譯，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(3)連句成篇，注意語言的連貫和過渡。如寫作過程中適當(dāng)運用連詞，如and, so, but等，就會使文章過渡自然。還要注意單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點符號、大小寫等細節(jié)。專題訓(xùn)練11 書面表達(一)參考范文：Save Food and Eat Healthily Our government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it. To save food, we shouldnt waste any of our food._ We should eat up all the food. We shouldnt order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world dont have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldnt eat junk food but healthy food. Its good for our health to eat a balanced diet. Wed better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. Wed better eat at school or at home if we have time.專題訓(xùn)練12 書面表達(二) 參考范文：Our Life in the Future What will the life be like in the future? I think the world will be smaller and smaller because of the development of high technology. People can talk with each other with small mobile phones, from which people can see each other very clearly. Even they live very far from each other. I also think the environment will be cleaner and cleaner. People around the world are now realizing the serious environment problems. And they are trying their best to make the environment beautiful. I hope the life in the future will become more and more beautiful! 參考范文：The Teacher I Like Best Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school. She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc. Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out. Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.參考范文：A person I will never forget The person Ill never forget is my English teacher. Hes a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. Hes humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. Hes kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we dont know. He often tells us that its no use memorizing new words without understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.參考范文：My Hobby Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is collecting coins. I got my first coin on my 8th birthday from my grandpa. It was an old Chinese coin. I like it very much. I have been collecting coins for 7 years, and I have over 2,500 coins from different countries in different shapes till now. I store them in the boxes under the bed. My mother often said we had run out of room to store them. Collecting coins helps me learn a lot about different cultures and history. Last year, I donated some of my coins to charity for homeless children. I really think it is worth doing. A good hobby can influence people a lot. This is my hobby. What is yours?Thanks!