中考英語滿分特訓方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導 七下 Unit 56學校生活課件

七年級（下）七年級（下） Units 5-6第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫作指導高頻話題寫作指導學校生活學校生活從云南近四年學校生活相關(guān)話題書面表達的命從云南近四年學校生活相關(guān)話題書面表達的命題來看，此類作文命題角度主要集中在初中的學題來看，此類作文命題角度主要集中在初中的學習和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。主習和生活，以及校園中的人物事件等的描述。主要涉及的有：要涉及的有：2014云南云南、2014昆明昆明、2013云南云南、2012德宏州德宏州、2012普洱普洱、2011昭通昭通。寫作導圖寫作導圖A Talk to MyselfHappy school dayslearn lots of knowledge; helpful; broaden ones eyes; enrich; read interesting booksmake friends; friendly; happy; get on well with; share happiness and sadness; help each otherSome wishesJoin in more outdoor activities; colorful life; arrange time; value school days; take exercise; a balanced diet; life in the future more and more beautifultoo much homework; no enough time; no outdoor activities; too many rules; quarrel with othersA Talk to MyselfRegretfulthings寫作范文詳見：寫作范文詳見： http:/亮點句型速亮點句型速成成常用句型：常用句型：The homework is too much. I have no outdoor activities.There is so much homework that I dont have enough time to take part in outdoor activities.推薦句型：推薦句型：I cant join in many outdoor activities because of too much homework.常用句型：常用句型：I have a happy school life.I have a happy school life which I will never forget. 推薦句型：推薦句型：With these special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life.常用句型：常用句型：I like playing football.I like playing football on the playground with great interest.推薦句型：推薦句型：I like playing football on the playground.常用句型：常用句型：I feel very sad today, because I didnt pass the math exam again.How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.推薦句型：推薦句型：I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.1. My favorite subject is physics.2. Its difficult but interesting. 3. Last weeks talent show in our class was a great success.4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.5. It is easy for me to understand.6. Teenagers should be allowed to.7. There are a lot of rules at my school. 8. You have given me so much help that I will never forget.9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school, such as. 10. Our teachers have taught us a lot. They not only teach us how to learn, but also teach us how to be a useful person in society.11. Our school where are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful.寫作模板寫作模板A Talk to MyselfHow time flies! Im leaving school 多長多長時間時間. I really have 多少多少 to talk to myself.Luckily, my teachers are very 描述人物描述人物的特點的特點. They not only 老師教的知識老師教的知識 but also tell me 老師教的道理老師教的道理. And my classmates are 描述人物特點描述人物特點. We 總結(jié)所經(jīng)歷的事情總結(jié)所經(jīng)歷的事情 in our school life.However, Im also 遺憾遺憾 sometimes. I 遺遺憾沒有做的事情憾沒有做的事情 quite often because of 原因原因. I know對這件事的認識對這件事的認識for me. Ill 以后將會怎么以后將會怎么做做.I believe 對以后生活的希望對以后生活的希望.典例剖析典例剖析（20132013云南云南）A Talk to Myself提示：提示： 在初中三年的學習和生活中，你有許多快樂在初中三年的學習和生活中，你有許多快樂 ，也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你想對自己說點也有許多遺憾。在即將畢業(yè)之際，你想對自己說點什么呢？請根據(jù)所給題目用英語寫一篇短文。什么呢？請根據(jù)所給題目用英語寫一篇短文。要求：要求： 1. 1. 語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于于6060個；個； 2. 2. 文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。計。1. 寫作的對象是寫作的對象是“我自己我自己”,行文用第一人稱。行文用第一人稱。2. 從三年中的快樂；三年中的遺憾；對自從三年中的快樂；三年中的遺憾；對自 己說的話及對未來生活的希望三個方面陳述。己說的話及對未來生活的希望三個方面陳述。3. 陳述陳述“我我”在學習生活中的快樂和遺憾時，用在學習生活中的快樂和遺憾時，用 一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；如果表達對未來充滿希望，則一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)；如果表達對未來充滿希望，則 用一般將來時態(tài)。用一般將來時態(tài)。4. 短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學習和短文應(yīng)包括提示的全部信息：初中三年學習和 生活中的快樂和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己生活中的快樂和遺憾；在畢業(yè)之際，要給自己 說的話。說的話。5. 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。【審題指導審題指導】【范文點評范文點評】A Talk to Myself How time flies! Im leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to myself.How time flies！用一用一個感嘆句來感嘆時間個感嘆句來感嘆時間的飛逝，給讀者留下的飛逝，給讀者留下了深刻印象，使得文了深刻印象，使得文章增加了文采。章增加了文采。 Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life. not only.but also使得句子通順連貫，使得句子通順連貫，使得文章句式更加豐使得文章句式更加豐富，也顯示作者對連富，也顯示作者對連接詞的掌握和運用水接詞的掌握和運用水平；賓語從句平；賓語從句how to do的使用使得顯示了的使用使得顯示了作者較高的語言表達作者較高的語言表達能力。能力。 However, Im also upset sometimes.I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework. I know its not good for me. Ill try my best to join in more.however的運用承上的運用承上啟下，行文自然。啟下，行文自然。用固定短語用固定短語take part in，quite often，because of，too much彰顯作者詞彰顯作者詞匯之豐富，是增分的一大匯之豐富，是增分的一大亮點。亮點。 I believe that my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.使用主從復合句來使用主從復合句來總結(jié)全文，既使文章總結(jié)全文，既使文章句式豐富，又呼吁主句式豐富，又呼吁主題，相信自己以后的題，相信自己以后的生活會更好。生活會更好。