中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 八上 Unit 810 制定計(jì)劃課件

第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)八年級(jí)（上）八年級(jí)（上） Units 8-10制定計(jì)劃制定計(jì)劃寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 從云南近四年制定計(jì)劃相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表從云南近四年制定計(jì)劃相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類(lèi)作文命題角度為學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，此類(lèi)作文命題角度為學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃、人生計(jì)劃、奮斗目標(biāo)或理想等長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的計(jì)劃、人生計(jì)劃、奮斗目標(biāo)或理想等長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的計(jì)劃以及表達(dá)某種愿望或期待。如：劃以及表達(dá)某種愿望或期待。如：2014云南。云南。Study Do well in the subjects, work hard, finish ones homework on time, be strict withPlan for the next yearDo as much exercise as I can, have a strong body, run, take a walk, sports, play basketball/ football, have a balance diet, dont stay upMake more friends, get on well with others, take part in after-class activities, play with, make colorful, share with each otherHealth Friends 寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/ 亮點(diǎn)句型速成亮點(diǎn)句型速成常用句型：常用句型：He wants to relax and learn something in the countryside.推薦句型：推薦句型： He wants to not only relax but also learn something in the countryside. He prefers to stay in the countryside for that he can relax and learn something there. He wishes to go to the countryside in order that/so that he can relax and learn something there.常用句型：常用句型：I have to do some research to make a plan.推薦句型：推薦句型： To work out a plan, I have to start with some research. In order to work out a plan, I have to start with some research. I have to start with some research if I want to work out a plan.1. The summer vacation is coming, and I prepare to visit my grandparents in the countryside.2. My classmates decided/made a decision to help the people in the old home.3. I hope/wish/want to go abroad for further study.4. He planned to go sightseeing.5. I am looking forward to seeing you this summer vacation. 6. To work out a plan, one has to start with some research. 7. I have arranged a one-day trip to Chongqing for you.8. We will climb the mountain if the weather is fine.9. Im going to take acting lessons.10. Lets make a plan for the coming vacation together.典例剖析典例剖析( (20142014云南云南) )My Plan for the Coming School Year提示：難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)以提示：難忘的初中生活即將結(jié)束，請(qǐng)以“My Plan for the Coming School Year”為題，用英為題，用英語(yǔ)語(yǔ) 寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愠踔薪Y(jié)束后一學(xué)年內(nèi)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勀愠踔薪Y(jié)束后一學(xué)年內(nèi) 的打算。的打算。要求：要求：1. 語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù) 不少于不少于60詞；詞； 2. 文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以 零分計(jì)。零分計(jì)?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：下信息：1. 仔細(xì)研讀所給書(shū)面表達(dá)的標(biāo)題及提示內(nèi)容，仔細(xì)研讀所給書(shū)面表達(dá)的標(biāo)題及提示內(nèi)容， 可知要求寫(xiě)出初中畢業(yè)后一學(xué)年內(nèi)的計(jì)劃?？芍髮?xiě)出初中畢業(yè)后一學(xué)年內(nèi)的計(jì)劃。 描述將來(lái)的計(jì)劃要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第描述將來(lái)的計(jì)劃要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，人稱(chēng)用第 一人稱(chēng)。一人稱(chēng)。2. 所寫(xiě)計(jì)劃內(nèi)容盡量豐富、全面，可以涉及所寫(xiě)計(jì)劃內(nèi)容盡量豐富、全面，可以涉及 學(xué)習(xí)、生活、交友等方面內(nèi)容，不要局限學(xué)習(xí)、生活、交友等方面內(nèi)容，不要局限 于某一點(diǎn)。于某一點(diǎn)。3. 根據(jù)內(nèi)容使用根據(jù)內(nèi)容使用“總總分分總總”式構(gòu)思，開(kāi)式構(gòu)思，開(kāi) 頭點(diǎn)明主題，中間分點(diǎn)談?wù)撚?jì)劃，最后表頭點(diǎn)明主題，中間分點(diǎn)談?wù)撚?jì)劃，最后表 決心，呼應(yīng)主題。力求做到語(yǔ)言流暢、結(jié)決心，呼應(yīng)主題。力求做到語(yǔ)言流暢、結(jié) 構(gòu)完整、層次分明。構(gòu)完整、層次分明?！痉段狞c(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】My Plan for the Coming School Year How time flies! I have finished my study in the junior high school and will start my new life in a new school. 用一個(gè)感嘆句來(lái)用一個(gè)感嘆句來(lái)感嘆時(shí)間的飛逝，感嘆時(shí)間的飛逝，給讀者留下了深刻給讀者留下了深刻的印象；并采用并的印象；并采用并列句開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直列句開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直接引出話題，奠定接引出話題，奠定了文章的語(yǔ)氣與基了文章的語(yǔ)氣與基調(diào)，指出了寫(xiě)作要調(diào)，指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。 Now Id like to share my plan with you. First, it is important to do well in all subjects, especially some new subjects. Ill work harder at them to improve my grades. 用短語(yǔ)用短語(yǔ)share with，take part in, make more friends彰顯彰顯作者詞匯之作者詞匯之豐富，是增豐富，是增分的一大亮分的一大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)。 Second, Ill try to take part in some after-class activities and make more friends. Third, to have a strong body, Ill try to do as much exercise as I can.使用句型使用句型it is+ adj.+to do及整段及整段使用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，使用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)，如如first, second, third使文章層次使文章層次分明，思維脈絡(luò)分明，思維脈絡(luò)清晰可見(jiàn)。清晰可見(jiàn)。 Im sure I can do better in the coming school year.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式to have及短語(yǔ)及短語(yǔ)as much exercise as I can，使句子強(qiáng)勁有力，使句子強(qiáng)勁有力，朗朗上口。朗朗上口。使用主從復(fù)合句來(lái)總結(jié)全使用主從復(fù)合句來(lái)總結(jié)全文，既使文章句式豐富，又文，既使文章句式豐富，又呼應(yīng)主題，確信自己會(huì)做得呼應(yīng)主題，確信自己會(huì)做得更好。更好。