名師指津高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第三部分 寫作 書面表達(dá)4 留言條課件
文體概述文體概述 留言條開篇須有稱呼語(yǔ),日期部分可寫在右留言條開篇須有稱呼語(yǔ),日期部分可寫在右上角,結(jié)尾須署姓名在正文的右下角;形式和內(nèi)上角,結(jié)尾須署姓名在正文的右下角;形式和內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)潔,明確無誤。留言條容簡(jiǎn)潔,明確無誤。留言條(也可稱為便條也可稱為便條)雖簡(jiǎn)單,雖簡(jiǎn)單,但中心務(wù)必突出,講清楚寫給誰、什么事、誰寫但中心務(wù)必突出,講清楚寫給誰、什么事、誰寫以及什么時(shí)候?qū)?。注意事?xiàng):以及什么時(shí)候?qū)?。注意事?xiàng):1. 人稱。人稱。以第一或第三人稱的形式給第二人稱寫以第一或第三人稱的形式給第二人稱寫留言條。留言條。2. 時(shí)態(tài)。時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)靈活運(yùn)用各種時(shí)態(tài),常用根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)靈活運(yùn)用各種時(shí)態(tài),常用過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)。常用語(yǔ)塊常用語(yǔ)塊1.直到下午直到下午5點(diǎn)才回來點(diǎn)才回來 _2. 把書還給圖書館把書還給圖書館 _3. 明早在咖啡屋見面明早在咖啡屋見面 _4. 有重要的事情要做有重要的事情要做 _5. 對(duì)對(duì)感到抱歉感到抱歉 _feel very sorry aboutwont be back until 5:00 p.m.return the book to the librarymeet at Coffee Room tomorrow morninghave something important to do/attend6. 告知他這個(gè)變化告知他這個(gè)變化 _7. 定別的時(shí)間見面定別的時(shí)間見面 _8. 以便以便 _9. 我們將要做我們將要做 _10. 非常感謝你的非常感謝你的 _thank you so much fortell him about this change / inform him of this changeset some other time for the meetingso thatwe are going to11. 你很體貼你很體貼 _12. 我們很高興能收到我們很高興能收到,但,但 _13. 外出購(gòu)物外出購(gòu)物 _14. 臥病在床臥病在床 _15. 離開離開去去 _leaveforit was thoughtful of youwe are delighted to receive, butbe out doing some shoppingbe ill in bed套用句式套用句式1.今天早上一個(gè)自稱劉彬的人打電話給你,但是今天早上一個(gè)自稱劉彬的人打電話給你,但是你不在。你不在。2. 他想在本周六早上他想在本周六早上9點(diǎn)在校門口與你見面。點(diǎn)在校門口與你見面。1. A Mr. Liu Bin called you this morning but you were not in.2. He wanted to meet you this coming Saturday, at 9:00 a.m. at the school gate.3. 如果不方便,你可以在晚上如果不方便,你可以在晚上8點(diǎn)到點(diǎn)到10點(diǎn)任何時(shí)間點(diǎn)任何時(shí)間打電話給他,號(hào)碼是打電話給他,號(hào)碼是12345678。4. 她要你回到家就回電話。她要你回到家就回電話。5. 最好來電告知。最好來電告知。4. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home.3. If it is not convenient for you, you are requested to ring him up at any time in the evening from 8:00 p.m. to 10:00 p.m. at 12345678.5. It is better for you to inform me of it.習(xí)作修改習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò),背經(jīng)典范文做短文改錯(cuò),背經(jīng)典范文)March 21Mrs. Wilson, I am going out shop, and wont be back until about 5:00 p.m. I have take with me the two book you asked me to return back to the City Library. shoppingtakenbooks In about one oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, said that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend. She felt very sorry about that, and said that you could set some other time for meeting. She wants you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan of this change.Li HuaAt saying but the wanted about 1. shop shopping因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)間o doing表示進(jìn)行某表示進(jìn)行某活動(dòng),為固定用法?;顒?dòng),為固定用法。2. take taken此處是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)此處是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)have done,故用,故用taken。3. book books根據(jù)前面的根據(jù)前面的two可知應(yīng)用復(fù)可知應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。數(shù)。4. 去掉去掉return后的后的back因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)閞eturn和和back有有重復(fù)意義。重復(fù)意義。5. In At表表“在幾點(diǎn)鐘在幾點(diǎn)鐘”用介詞用介詞at。6. said saying分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,say在此在此是非謂語(yǔ),且與邏輯主語(yǔ)是非謂語(yǔ),且與邏輯主語(yǔ)Tracy存在主動(dòng)關(guān)存在主動(dòng)關(guān)系,故用系,故用saying。7. and but此處存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系故用此處存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系故用but。此。此處處but本身無特殊意義,只是語(yǔ)法上的需要。本身無特殊意義,只是語(yǔ)法上的需要。8. 在在meeting前加前加the表示表示“雙方都知道的或雙方都知道的或心中明白的人或物心中明白的人或物”前須加定冠詞。前須加定冠詞。9. wants wanted根據(jù)上下文時(shí)態(tài)可知,根據(jù)上下文時(shí)態(tài)可知,want應(yīng)發(fā)生在過去的時(shí)間。應(yīng)發(fā)生在過去的時(shí)間。10. of about固定表達(dá)固定表達(dá)tell sb. about sth.意意為為“告知某人某事告知某人某事”。課堂練習(xí)課堂練習(xí) 假定你是李華,本已約好與假定你是李華,本已約好與Kelvin今天今天(4月月8日日)晚上一起看電影晚上一起看電影捉妖記捉妖記(Monster Hunt)。但你臨時(shí)有事,他打籃球未回,故給他寫留言條。但你臨時(shí)有事,他打籃球未回,故給他寫留言條。要點(diǎn)如下:要點(diǎn)如下:1. 臨時(shí)有事要做。臨時(shí)有事要做。2. 具體更改的見面時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。具體更改的見面時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)。3. 此事已告知誰。此事已告知誰。4. 見字告知。見字告知。注意:注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。April 8Hi Kelvin,Yours,Li Hua I am going to tell you that as I have something important to attend this evening, so I cant go to see the movie, Monster Hunt, with you this evening. And I have to change it to another place, the Wanda Cinema. We will meet together at 7:00 p.m. at the gate of the cinema tomorrow evening. I have already told your parents about this change when you were out to play basketball. If this change is not convenient to you, it is better for you to inform me of it so that we can set some other time for the movie.課外作業(yè)課外作業(yè) 假定你是李華,你到一個(gè)叫假定你是李華,你到一個(gè)叫Alex的同學(xué)家,叫他的同學(xué)家,叫他幫忙做一件事,碰巧他不在家。因此,你給他寫了幫忙做一件事,碰巧他不在家。因此,你給他寫了一張留言條,要點(diǎn)如下:一張留言條,要點(diǎn)如下: 1. 請(qǐng)他代你參加明天請(qǐng)他代你參加明天(3月月12日日)的植樹活動(dòng)。的植樹活動(dòng)。 2. 集合地點(diǎn),如何出發(fā)。集合地點(diǎn),如何出發(fā)。 3. 天氣情況。天氣情況。 4. 自備的東西。自備的東西。注意:注意:1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右。左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。使行文連貫。3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。March 11Dear Alex,Yours,Li Hua I would like to ask you for help. Would you please take the place of me to take part in the tree planting activity in the Peoples Park tomorrow? You know the school sports meeting has taken up much of my time and energy, and I need to adjust myself. You will get together at the school gate at 7 oclock, and set off by bike for the park. By the way, it is reported that it probably rains tomorrow, so do remember to take your raincoat along with you. Besides, you must bring your own lunch. A million thanks to you!