中考英語(yǔ)滿分特訓(xùn)方案 第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo) 九上 Unit 2 保護(hù)環(huán)境課件

九年級(jí)（上）九年級(jí)（上） Unit 2第二部分第二部分 高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)高頻話題寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)環(huán)境寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖寫(xiě)作導(dǎo)圖 從全國(guó)近五年環(huán)境保護(hù)相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命從全國(guó)近五年環(huán)境保護(hù)相關(guān)話題書(shū)面表達(dá)的命題來(lái)看，寫(xiě)作角度如下：題來(lái)看，寫(xiě)作角度如下： 1.記敘一次環(huán)?；顒?dòng)。如：記敘一次環(huán)?；顒?dòng)。如：2014邵陽(yáng)邵陽(yáng)志愿者活志愿者活動(dòng)，動(dòng)，2013襄陽(yáng)襄陽(yáng)介紹環(huán)?；顒?dòng)；介紹環(huán)?；顒?dòng)； 2. 保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施。如：保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施。如：2014龍東龍東保護(hù)水資源，保護(hù)水資源， 2014賀州賀州節(jié)約。節(jié)約。VoluntaryactivityPlace: train stationClean the benchesPerson: classmatesTime: last weekPick up the rubbishSweep the groundTired but happyHope to improveour environmentActivitiesFeelings寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)：寫(xiě)作范文詳見(jiàn)： http:/亮點(diǎn)句型速亮點(diǎn)句型速成成常用句型：常用句型：Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.推薦句型：推薦句型：If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.常用句型：常用句型：We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.We are supposed to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.推薦句型：推薦句型：If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future.1. We should not throw litter onto the ground. 2. Its our duty to protect our environment. 3. It is very important to take care of our environment. 4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees.5. We are supposed to plant more flowers and trees. 6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin. 7. Trees are very helpful and important for us. 8. Its everyones duty to love and protect the environment. 9. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. 10. Its necessary to save water.11. Recycling trash is also important.典例剖析典例剖析（20142014邵陽(yáng)邵陽(yáng)）假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建假設(shè)你叫王磊，目前，我市正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建“文明衛(wèi)生城市文明衛(wèi)生城市”，學(xué)校也提出了，學(xué)校也提出了“垃圾不落垃圾不落地，校園更美麗地，校園更美麗”的口號(hào)，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校的口號(hào)，為了積極響應(yīng)學(xué)校號(hào)召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者號(hào)召，上周你和幾位同學(xué)到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)，貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。請(qǐng)把你所做的事活動(dòng)，貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。請(qǐng)把你所做的事寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友寫(xiě)一封電子郵件告訴你的好朋友Bob。Place: Train station; Time: From 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning; People: You and some classmates;Activities: Clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground; Feeling: A little tired but happy.細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1. 文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)文章為電子郵件，要求向朋友講述在響應(yīng)“文明衛(wèi)文明衛(wèi) 生城市生城市”“”“垃圾不落地，校園更美麗垃圾不落地，校園更美麗”的活動(dòng)中，的活動(dòng)中，我和同學(xué)們一起到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)的事情我和同學(xué)們一起到火車(chē)站進(jìn)行志愿者活動(dòng)的事情（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、（包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、 活動(dòng)、感受）?；顒?dòng)、感受）。2. 本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng)，其他人本文描述自己的經(jīng)歷，寫(xiě)作時(shí)用第一人稱(chēng)，其他人用第三人稱(chēng)。用第三人稱(chēng)。3. 回憶事件通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感及感悟回憶事件通常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，抒發(fā)個(gè)人情感及感悟用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。做到語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。做到語(yǔ)句通順，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，語(yǔ)法正確。潔，語(yǔ)法正確。4. 詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于詞數(shù)應(yīng)不少于80詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。詞，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名?！緦忣}指導(dǎo)審題指導(dǎo)】Bob, Im writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier.開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地引開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地引出事件；出事件；動(dòng)詞的復(fù)合賓動(dòng)詞的復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，make sth. adj.， make it cleaner and tidier “使使更清潔、更清潔、更整潔更整潔”，增加，增加了文章的可讀性；了文章的可讀性；【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advised others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left. 固定詞組固定詞組cleaned the benches，picked up the rubbish等的等的運(yùn)用彰顯小作者詞運(yùn)用彰顯小作者詞匯之豐富，也是增匯之豐富，也是增分的亮點(diǎn)；分的亮點(diǎn)； We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city. Hope to write soon. Best wishes! Yours, Wang Lei點(diǎn)明主題并升華，點(diǎn)明主題并升華，a little tired but happy“有點(diǎn)累但有點(diǎn)累但是很高興是很高興”；make a contribu-tion “為為做出貢做出貢獻(xiàn)獻(xiàn)”。彰顯了小。彰顯了小作者詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用的作者詞語(yǔ)運(yùn)用的嫻熟，也給文章嫻熟，也給文章增色不少。增色不少。