2020高考英語新創(chuàng)新一輪復習 寫作 第五編 建模板—9類書信文體 考場“據題選衣學案（含解析）牛津譯林版.doc

第五編好作文是“仿”出來的。針對全國卷近幾年一直穩(wěn)定考查書信文體這一命題實際，我們對每一體裁精心架構寫作模板，循模板寫作，確保像模像樣、文正體范；迅速打開思路，縮短考場構思時間。寫作模板(一)良藥“甜”口，忠言“順”耳建議信題型技法 建議信是作者就有關問題進行分析并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關問題。建議信可以寫給個人，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法或觀點；也可以寫給某個組織或者機構，就改進其服務等提出建議或忠告。具體寫作結構為：典例悟法(2018北京高考書面表達)假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關信息。請給他回郵件，內容包括：1表示歡迎；2推薦他上哪所大學；3建議他做哪些準備工作。注意：1.詞數不少于50；2開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Jim， Yours，Li Hua滿分范文Dear Jim，Im so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest wele to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be pletely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like A Dream of Red Mansions while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.I sincerely hope your dream will e true and its my pleasure to show you around Beijing when that day es. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.Yours，Li Hua范文賞析(1)范文首段交代寫信目的并表示歡迎；第二段闡述建議他上北京大學的原因及需要做的準備工作；最后一段表達了自己的愿望。整篇文章一氣呵成、要點齊全且銜接流暢自然。(2)文中運用了如“unforgettable, be soaked in, profound, as for”等高級詞匯；句式方面的高級表達有：I would like to express my warmest wele .恰當運用了不定式作賓語；Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture恰當運用了現在分詞作狀語；one of the best universities in China作同位語；where you can be pletely soaked in恰當運用了定語從句； its my pleasure to show .中it用作形式主語。增分佳句1表達建議信寫信目的常用語I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我寫信給你一些建議/忠告。I am writing to express my views concerning .我寫信是要表達我關于的看法。You have asked for my advice about . and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.關于你向我征求意見，在此我盡力提出一些有用的建議。2表達建議常用語I think the most suitable .for you is .我認為對你來說最適合的是I would like to suggest that .我想建議Youd better ./Its better to .你最好/最好是As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.在我看來，采取如下行動是明智的。For one thing .; for another .一方面，另一方面If I were you, I would .如果我是你，我會I think it would be more beneficial if you could .我認為如果你能將會更有益。3表達希望常用語I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你會認真考慮我的建議。I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.我希望你會發(fā)現這些建議實用/有用/有幫助。I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.看到你在這一方面取得進步我會非常高興。熱點押題(2019長沙模擬)假定你是李華，你的好友王芳喜歡打排球，但老師和家長都極力勸她放棄打排球，全身心投入高考。為此，她非常糾結和郁悶。請你給她寫一封建議信，幫她解決這個困擾。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Wang Fang，I am sorry to hear that you are troubled by something. As you said in your letter, your teachers and parents suggest you give up playing volleyball because of the College Entrance Examination. But you dont want to do that. I think you dont need to worry a lot for this. Here are my suggestions.First of all, you should understand your teachers and parents，who just want the best for you.Second，I think you should reduce the time spent playing volleyball instead of giving it up.Third，you should arrange your time properly.As long as you can make a balance between your study and hobby，your teachers and parents will surely not object to it.I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua寫作模板(二)自信申請，心誠則靈申請信題型技法申請信有很多種，比如求職申請、加入某組織或活動的申請、報考申請、留學申請等。寫申請信的目的在于讓對方了解自己的經驗、能力、成就、愿望等，所以個人情況的介紹應該是申請信的核心內容，應盡可能向對方說明本人的長處，以便留下好印象，獲得面談的機會。由于此類題目常有較多的文字提示，寫作時除應注意格式上的要求外，也應注意審題全面，不能遺漏要點，并要注意人稱和時態(tài)的變化，避免出現邏輯混亂。具體寫作結構為：典例悟法(2018浙江高考應用文寫作)假定你是李華，你校英語協會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外中學生。請你寫信應聘，內容包括：1口語能力；2相關經驗；3應聘目的。注意：1.詞數80左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分范文Dear Sir/Madam，I have learned that the English Association of our school is now in need of some volunteers to meet the visiting foreign students and I want to apply for the position. Firstly, I can speak fluent English and I have little difficulty municating with foreigners. Secondly, I helped receive some visiting foreigners to our school last year. This experience is sure to enable me to do better this year. I also want to improve my spoken English and help them have a better understanding of Chinese culture.I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.Yours，Li Hua范文賞析(1)文章開門見山說明自己寫信的目的；然后詳述自己的優(yōu)勢以及目的，簡潔明了，不拖泥帶水；最后表達感謝和期盼。(2)運用了firstly .secondly 等語序標志詞，運用了一些較為地道的搭配，in need of, have difficulty doing sth.; enable sb.to do sth.; have a better understanding of .等，這些都使得這篇短文讀起來層次分明、連貫、順暢。增分佳句1表達申請信寫信目的常用語Im writing to apply for the position of .我寫信申請的職位。I am writing this letter to remend myself as a qualified candidate for .我寫信推薦自己為的合格人選。I am interested in .and wish to enter this significant program.我對感興趣，希望加入到這個重要項目中。I learned on your website that .我從你們的網站上得知2表達個人優(yōu)勢的常用語I won the first prize in .petition.我獲得了比賽的一等獎。As an outgoing .I get along well with my classmates.作為一名外向的我和同學們相處得很好。For one thing, I can help .For another thing, I can improve .一方面，我能幫助另一方面，我能提高My main specialty is .我的特長是3表達感謝，期盼回復的常用語If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at .如果你們認為我適合這份工作，請致電I will be grateful/Id appreciate it if you could .如果你能我將感激不盡。Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.感謝你考慮我的申請，期待與你見面。熱點押題假定你是李華，是一名高三學生。最近，你校將接待一批來自美國的交換生，學校現在征集寄宿家庭。你想申請成為寄宿家庭，請根據下面的寫作提綱，寫一封申請信。內容包括：1個人情況(年齡、性別、性格和愛好)；2英語水平；3家庭條件；4相關經歷。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Sir/Madam，I am Li Hua, an 18yearold girl from Senior Three.I hear some American students are ing to study in our school for two weeks.I am writing to apply for the opportunity to bee a host family.The following are my advantages.First, Im openminded and like to make new friends.Second, my parents speak English so fluently that they have no difficulty municating with native speakers.Third, we have a large apartment where there is an extra room for a guest.More importantly, last month we received two American students, through which we gained a lot of experience.I think it is a chance to improve my English and learn about new culture.Please give me a chance.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua寫作模板(三)以誠相邀，以禮相約邀請信題型技法邀請信是邀請收信人參加某項活動的書信。在寫作時，要注意邀請信的交際性，語氣要真摯，避免帶有不禮貌或強人所難的字眼。根據邀請信的性質可將其分為普通邀請信和正式邀請信。普通邀請信對內容和格式的要求都不高，只要說明活動的內容、時間、地點等即可。正式邀請信的措辭要正式、語氣要熱情有禮，態(tài)度要誠懇。邀請信的末尾都要表達希望對方參加或出席的愿望。具體寫作結構為：典例悟法(2018天津高考書面表達)假設你是晨光中學的機器人興趣小組組長李津，你的美國朋友Chris就讀于天津某國際學校，他曾在機器人技能競賽中獲獎。你打算邀請他加入你的團隊，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機器人技能競賽。請根據以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。(1)比賽的時間、地點；(2)邀請他的原因；(3)訓練計劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請他提出建議。注意：(1)詞數不少于100；(2)可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。參考詞匯：世界青少年機器人技能競賽the World Adolescent Robotics petition Dear Chris，I have good news to tell you. Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Jin滿分范文Dear Chris，I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics petition is to be held in Tianjin at the end of this July, which interests me greatly.On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the petition. I know you once participated in a robotics petition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. We are desperately in need of your help. So as the group leader, I sincerely invite you to join us. I am convinced that with our joint efforts we can undoubtedly get good results. Whats more, I will email you our training plan soon, hoping you can offer some constructive suggestions regarding it.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Jin范文賞析(1)文章開門見山交代比賽的時間和地點，隨后說明自己和同學組成團隊參賽并邀請Chris加入，并希望Chris對計劃提出建議，言簡意賅。(2)范文中使用了大量亮點詞匯，如interest作動詞， form a group, participate in, accumulate, desperately in need of, joint efforts, undoubtedly等。在句式方面，既有which引導的定語從句又有名詞性從句I am convinced that .和現在分詞作狀語 hoping you .等。增分佳句1發(fā)出邀請常用語I am writing to invite you to ./Im writing to tell you that there will be a .我寫信邀請你/我寫信告訴你有一個(場)I am very pleased to invite you to participate in .to be held in .我很高興邀請你參加在舉行的I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in .我想你要是能來參加那就太好了。2表達活動內容常用語Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.本次活動的一些細節(jié)內容如下。During the .we will have lots of activities which you will be interested in.First .Second .In addition .在期間我們將有很多你會感興趣的活動。第一第二另外I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities at the party.For one thing .For another .我相信你一定對聚會上的活動很感興趣。一方面另一方面3結尾部分常用語Would you please drop me a line to let me know whether you can e to .?請寫信告訴我是否你能來好嗎？If you are interested in it, please let me know and Ill send you more information.如果你感興趣，請告訴我，我給你發(fā)送更多的信息。My family and I would feel much honored if you could e.如果你能來，我和我的家人將會感到非常榮幸。I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.我想在那里見到你，請盡快告訴我你的決定。熱點押題假定你是李華，是學校英語俱樂部的負責人。請你根據下列要點給學校的外教Steve寫一封邀請信。1邀請Steve參加于周一晚上7點鐘在學校禮堂舉行的英語角活動；2請Steve介紹“美國夢(American Dream)”；3請Steve根據自己學漢語的經驗談談如何提高英語口語。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Steve，On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Corner next Monday.It will begin at seven oclock in the evening at the school hall.In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still dont have any knowledge about it.So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese.Could you share with us some experience on how to improve our oral English?We are all looking forward to seeing you then.Please inform us in advance if you cannot e.Yours sincerely，Li Hua寫作模板(四)真誠道謝，友誼長存感謝信題型技法感謝信是向幫助、關心和支持過自己的集體或個人表示感謝的信件。在收到別人的邀請、受到別人的表揚或幫助后，被邀請者、被表揚者或被幫助者往往需要寫一封感謝信。具體寫作結構為：典例悟法假定你是李華。最近，你剛結束在英國為期一個月的交流學習。學習期間，你和房東Mr.Wilson結下了深厚的友誼。請根據下面的寫作提綱，給Mr.Wilson寫一封電子郵件。內容包括：1表示感謝；2回顧他對你的照顧和幫助；3邀請他來中國游覽。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分范文Dear Mr.Wilson，How is everything going? Ive been back home now.Im writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable.How I miss the days we spent together! Thanks to your help, I got used to the lifestyle there soon.I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me.Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me.By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improved my spoken English.I hope we can keep in touch with and municate with each other in the future.It would be a great honor for me to invite you to e to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua范文賞析(1)文章開篇問候，真誠地表達感謝。隨后說明感謝的原因以及對方給予的具體幫助。最后表達希望，并邀請他來中國旅游。(2)范文中使用了大量亮點詞匯和句型，如gratitude是高級詞匯，體現了作者扎實的語言功底。句中使用了感嘆句和定語從句，大大提高了表達難度和寫作檔次。高級短語keep in touch with和municate with的正確使用為文章錦上添花；在It would be a great honor .句中it作形式主語，so that .引導目的狀語從句，都顯示了作者對復雜句式的運用能力，增加了文章得分的亮點。增分佳句1感謝信開頭部分常用語I am writing to express my thanks for .我寫信是為了表達我對的謝意。I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for .在信中我要為向你表達我誠摯的謝意。On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for .我謹代表我全家對表示真誠的感激。I am extremely grateful to you for .我非常感謝你Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping us to .非常感謝您為幫助我們所做的一切。2感謝信結尾常用語Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.沒什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶，我們會永遠牢記在心。Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you！/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次對你表示衷心的感謝。/對你的熱心幫助再次表示感謝。I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by .如果我有機會通過報答你的好意，我會非常高興。熱點押題假設你是李華，上周日不慎把書包遺失在操場上，里面有學生證、手機、錢包等物品，本校外教Mr. Smith撿到后上交給學校。請你用英語給他寫一封感謝信。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Mr. Smith, Im Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag. Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my students ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which were very important to me. Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the schools Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.Its such a great kindness that Im extremely grateful to you. You did set a good example to us. Yours, Li Hua寫作模板(五)誠懇致歉，你我歡顏道歉信題型技法道歉信通常是在因自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失并發(fā)覺的情況下，為了向對方表示歉意而寫的信件。具體寫作結構如下：典例悟法(2016全國卷書面表達)假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1表示歉意；2說明原因；3另約時間。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分范文Dear Bob，I am sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we will have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8：30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours，Li Hua范文賞析(1)文章開篇表明寫作意圖，表達歉意。隨后說明道歉的原因并解釋不能赴約的原因。“再次相約”部分，情節(jié)適當發(fā)揮，情真意切。(2)范文中使用了convenient, available等高級詞匯，并運用了較多的語法結構，如賓語從句that I cannot go to the bookstore .和that I have to attend .; so that .引導的目的狀語從句； If its convenient for you .為if引導的條件狀語從句； If not .狀語從句的省略等。這展示了作者對復雜句式較強的運用能力，增加了文章得分的亮點。增分佳句1道歉信開頭常用語I am writing this letter to apologize to you for .我寫這封信是因向你道歉。I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to/my failing .因為沒能我向你表達最真誠的歉意/悔意。I must apologize for any inconvenience it may have caused you.為此事可能給你帶來的任何不便，我深表歉意。I must make a sincere and humble apology to you for .我必須為真誠地向你道歉。I regret to inform you that I can not/am unable to .我遺憾地告知你我不能2道歉信結尾常用語Please allow me to say sorry again.請允許我再次道歉。Will you please accept my apology?請你接受我的道歉，好嗎？Please accept my sincere apology for .once more.請再次為接受我真誠的道歉。I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.我衷心希望你能寬容地接受我的道歉。Once again, Im sorry for my inconvenience caused.對于造成的任何不便我再次表示歉意。熱點押題假定你是李華，你從朋友Mike處借的一本書不慎遺失?，F在，請用英文給他寫一封道歉信，請求原諒。注意：1.詞數100左右；2開頭與結束語已給出，不計入總詞數。Dear Mike， Yours，Li Hua參考范文：Dear Mike，Im sorry to tell you that Ive lost your book that I borrowed from you.Now Im expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness.Actually, I put the book in my schoolbag after we met at school yesterday.But to my sorrow, it was stolen on my way home.I tried to get it back but failed.How angry and guilty I felt! This morning, I went to buy another book in some bookstores but it was very expensive.However, I promise that Ill tighten my belt these days to get you a pletely new one by the end of this month.Please forgive me and accept my sincere apology.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua寫作模板(六)禮貌求助，成功首步求助信題型技法寫英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困難，需要請求對方幫助。因此整篇文章應用一般現在時表達文意，當描述自己得到幫助后的進步時應用一般將來時。具體寫作結構如下：典例悟法(2016全國卷書面表達)假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分范文Dear Ms Jenkins，Im Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital pany during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, Im not sure about the words and format. Therefore, Im writing to ask for your help and professional advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. Id be most grateful if you could do me the favor.Im looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua范文賞析(1)文章開篇自我介紹并表明寫信意圖。隨后說明求助的具體內容(請對方幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式)。最后表達希望和感激。(2)范文中使用了大量亮點詞匯和句型，如therefore關系明確，因果適當，不但使上下文融會貫通，而且突出了寫信目的。Would you please do .？是請求別人幫助的句型，用得恰到好處，符合說話者的身份；過去分詞attached作定語，使句子更加簡練地道，增加了文章的可讀性。Would you mind doing .？不同的句式表達了相同的意思，避免了表達形式的單一化，語氣委婉。這是文章提檔次的句子。most grateful道出了作者希望得到幫助的迫切和感激之情，也展示了作者較高的語言運用能力。增分佳句1求助信開頭常用語My name is .Im writing to you for some help.我叫，我寫信是向你尋求一些幫助。Im writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我給你寫信想請你幫我一個忙。I have some difficulty in doing .which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做方面有困難，這很困擾我。所以我別無選擇只能向你求助。Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.面對如此多的困難，我不得不向你求助。2尋求幫助常用語I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想讓你給我介紹一些學習語法的好方法。I wonder how to deal with the problem.我想知道如何解決這個問題。3求助信結尾常用語Im sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的幫助下我會取得很大的進步。I will appreciate any of your help.我將非常感謝你的一切幫助。I would greatly appreciate your timely help.我將非常感激你及時的幫助。熱點押題假定你是高中生李華，你們學校要在3月10日舉辦英語配音比賽(dubbing contest)。你想參賽，但是不知道該選什么電影。你給筆友Peter寫一封郵件，請他給你推薦一部電影。內容包括：1主題是關于友誼； 2時間限定在4到5分鐘； 3每個節(jié)目最多6個角色。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Peter，How is everything going？I am writing to you, hoping to seek for help.Our school will hold an English dubbing contest on March 10th.I am eager to have a try.However, I dont know which film is suitable.As a movie fan, would you be so kind as to give me some remendations? According to the requirements, the theme should be about friendship.And each video may last 4 to 5 minutes.Whats more, there should not be more than six characters in each video.I would really appreciate it if you could do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Hua寫作模板(七)書信往來，快樂分享普通書信與電子郵件題型技法英文email和普通書信的寫法和格式大體相同，其開頭和結尾常常都會給出，正文根據作文要求分段把內容表達清楚即可。具體寫作結構如下：典例悟法(2017全國卷書面表達)假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學習漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內容包括：1時間和地點；2內容：學習唐詩；3課前準備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分范文Dear Leslie，I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems.Now Im writing to tell you the plan for the next class.Actually I am very fond of Tang poems.I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.We are to meet on Sunday morning in the Peoples Park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful.We will learn from 8：00 am to 10：00 am.Besides, I advise you to go to the library to borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.If you have any questions, please let me