2019-2020年高考英語寫作最后沖刺 訓(xùn)練、點(diǎn)評(píng)和猜題 01（含解析）.doc

2019-2020年高考英語寫作最后沖刺 訓(xùn)練、點(diǎn)評(píng)和猜題 01（含解析）為了營造一種“多讀書，讀好書”的良好氛圍，你班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)，要求以 “A good book can affect our life ” 為題作演講(詞數(shù)：120個(gè)詞左右)，向同學(xué)們介紹一本自己讀過的好書，并談?wù)勛约旱母形??！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】 這是一篇演講稿，寫作時(shí)要注意格式：稱呼語和結(jié)尾語；可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在120詞左右，不要太多或太少。特別注意最后要談自己的看法，這樣才能體現(xiàn)出文章的完整。除此之外，有下列重點(diǎn)需要考生認(rèn)真思考，加以解決：1.如何引出自己演講的話題；2.怎樣介紹自己讀過的一本好書；3.自己從這本書中感悟出了什么；4.如何深化你的演講主題，增強(qiáng)演講的鼓動(dòng)性?！緟⒖即鸢浮緽oys and girls, As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I have learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, lets read more good books! Thats all. Thank you!【范文評(píng)析】1.文章首句引用名人名言“As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.”引出話題“A good book can affect our life in one way or another.”，可謂事半功倍。此句運(yùn)用了時(shí)間狀語從句和動(dòng)名詞狀語作主語；2.向聽眾介紹自己讀過的一本好書時(shí)，用一個(gè)簡單句“My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.”恰到好處地打動(dòng)了聽眾的心靈。用一個(gè)復(fù)合句“It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.”介紹了書的主要內(nèi)容，為自己的感悟打下了伏筆。該句使用了how引導(dǎo)的表語從句；4.為了深化演講主題，作者用一個(gè)并列句“Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls.”來達(dá)到了目的。在本句中運(yùn)用了并列連詞not onlybut also結(jié)構(gòu)；文章的結(jié)尾“To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, lets read more good books!”非常具有演講的鼓動(dòng)性，該句將動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語和祈使句的巧妙結(jié)合起來，盡顯文章風(fēng)采。順便說一下，范文作者運(yùn)用了稱呼語“Boys and girls,”和結(jié)尾語“Thats all. Thank you!”，沒有忘記演講稿的格式。練習(xí)二閱讀使人充實(shí)，閱讀對(duì)于每個(gè)人的成長至關(guān)重要。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引言(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。 Reading makes a full manFrancis Bacon內(nèi)容要求：1.你對(duì)該引言的理解； 2.舉例說明； 3.恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.詞數(shù)：150左右；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；【思路點(diǎn)撥】 考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。題目已給出要求，要求考生引用名言，再對(duì)它加以詮釋，闡述自己的理解；然后再舉例說明閱讀可以使人充實(shí)的例子來闡述它；最后結(jié)合名言和自己的內(nèi)容來適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾?？忌鷳?yīng)注意語言的恰當(dāng)?shù)膽?yīng)用。對(duì)單詞、語法的掌握。除此之外，有下列重點(diǎn)需要考生認(rèn)真思考，加以解決：1.如何巧妙地引出話題；2.對(duì)該引言如何理解；3.怎樣舉例說明；4.結(jié)尾怎么做到恰到好處?！緟⒖即鸢浮緼s Francis bacon puts it, reading makes a full man. It is reading that guides us into a world of wonders and gives us a glimpse of what life is like. It is no exaggeration(夸張)to say that reading enriches the mind and shapes what we are today. My story of reading started when I was just a little girl and fairy tales like Snow White were the best lullabies(搖籃曲) that sent me to sweet dreams. As I grew up, what touched me most was the beauty of language, whether it was Secret Garden or My Friend Lu Xixi. The more I read, the more curious and eager I bee to explore the unknown. To put it simply, reading to me is more of a friend, a teacher and a soul-mate. Not only does reading bring me much joy but it also helps me get access to a broader world and greater minds. That is exactly what reading is all about.2.范文接著用一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句和一個(gè)復(fù)合句闡述對(duì)引言的理解，大大增加了文章的可讀性和深度。這個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句“It is reading that guides us into a world of wonders and gives us a glimpse of what life is like.”比較復(fù)雜：句子中動(dòng)名詞作主語，復(fù)雜句中套簡單句增加了文章的難易程度，充分彰顯了作者的語言功底。但是需要指出的是文中“exaggeration(夸張)”一詞對(duì)于大多數(shù)考生非常陌生，建議換成下列表達(dá)方法“We cannot say too much that reading enriches the mind and shapes what we are today.”；3.在舉例的過程中，作者更是運(yùn)用了豐富多彩的句型，為文章增加了亮點(diǎn)，使文章的表達(dá)更具有邏輯性，更富有條理性。比如：when, as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句“when I was just a little girl”“As I grew up”；that引導(dǎo)的定語從句“that sent me to sweet dreams”； what引導(dǎo)的主語從句以及whether引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句 “what touched me most was the beauty of language, whether it was Secret Garden or My Friend Lu Xixi.”；還有the more，the more的結(jié)構(gòu)；但是大多數(shù)考生可能不知道“l(fā)ullabies(搖籃曲)”怎么拼寫，建議換成這樣的表達(dá)方法“fairy tales, for example, Snow White, were just like best music that sent me to sweet dreams.”同樣可以起到異曲同工之效；4.結(jié)尾部分對(duì)文章進(jìn)行了總結(jié)并對(duì)主題作了進(jìn)一步的強(qiáng)調(diào)。Not only does reading bring me much joy but it also helps me get access to a broader world and greater minds這個(gè)句子not only.but also 連接兩個(gè)句子，第一個(gè)分句用部分倒裝；That is exactly what reading is all about.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用what引導(dǎo)的表語從句；最后需要指出的是：如果考生對(duì)“To put it simply”不太熟悉，那就干脆使用：In brief, In short, In a word等等。練習(xí)三在全國讀書月到來之際，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)圖中所示，用英文寫一篇短文，對(duì)現(xiàn)在中小學(xué)生的閱讀現(xiàn)象做個(gè)描述，并發(fā)表自己的看法。 pupils junior students senior students 注意：1.短文首段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)：120左右。Recently, a survey has been done on the readings among the students in different stages. _【思路點(diǎn)撥】 這是一篇圖畫類的寫作。圖畫類作文實(shí)際上就是要求考生根據(jù)自己的認(rèn)識(shí)水平，解讀畫面，將漫畫、照片或圖片中描述的內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)化成文字，按照要求和提示信息展開想象和議論。在寫作過程中，考生可根據(jù)圖片的寓意、內(nèi)容或情節(jié)線索，傳遞信息，表達(dá)自己的思想，揭示圖畫所反映的主題。注意本篇的寫作所用的基本時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在范疇的時(shí)態(tài)。除此之外，有下列重點(diǎn)需要考生認(rèn)真思考，加以解決： 1.因?yàn)槭锥我呀?jīng)給出，故只要考慮如何描述三幅圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容，并要加以恰當(dāng)?shù)淖h論； 2.如何圍繞圖畫所反映的主要問題(如高中生的問題)展開討論，發(fā)表自己的看法； 3.得出自己的結(jié)論?！緟⒖即鸢浮縍ecently, a survey has been done on the readings among the students in different stages. For the pupils, they prefer cartoons just because these books provide them with interesting characters. Junior students express their feelings directly by saying：“Love stories are our favorites.” Maybe dreams about life fill their minds. Unfortunately, burdened/ loaded with endless homework, senior students have to deal with all the textbooks. They hardly spare any time for some other readings besides the required famous literature. They are longing for more, though.As far as I am concerned, we should focus on the teens reading which should cover various materials. Despite heavy burdens, senior students should be involved in reading raging from economics, politics as well as literature. Besides, humors stories are popular in order to reduce the stress from exams.To sum up, balance should be kept between study and other sources of absorbing knowledge. 2.范文圍繞“青少年讀書的問題”談了自己的看法，并突出了對(duì)主要問題的看法“Despite heavy burdens, senior students should be involved in reading raging from economics, politics as well as literature. Besides, humors stories are popular in order to reduce the stress from exams.”與上文進(jìn)行呼應(yīng)。 3.最后得出自己的結(jié)論“To sum up, balance should be kept between study and other sources of absorbing knowledge.”，亮明了作者的觀點(diǎn)。 4.本文過度詞(句) “Unfortunately, As far as I am concerned，Besides, To sum up”及關(guān)聯(lián)詞“Despite heavy burdens，as well as literature”等的使用使得文章條理非常清晰。猜 題閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。It is reported in the Yangzi Evening Paper that the 23rd of this April is the first public book-reading day in Jiangsu. People are doing more: watching television, surfing the Web, listening to their iPods, talking on mobile phones, and texting their friends. But a new report released by the paper declares what people in Jiangsu are doing a lot less reading.The report paints a terrible picture of the dropping time of reading spent by people in Jiangsu over the past two decades. Among the findings:Only 50 percent of Jiangsunese between 13 and 21 read almost every day. Almost half of Jiangsunese between ages 25 and 35 never read books for pleasure. The average person between ages 15 and 35 spends more than 2 hours a day watching TV and 5 minutes reading.It is thought by many experts that this is a serious social problem. Jiangsu, a big province of education, economy and building industry, is losing its status because of poor reading.”【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容； 2.用約120個(gè)詞就“江蘇人(Jiangsunese)讀書越來越少” 談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括：(1)你認(rèn)為江蘇人讀書減少的原因是什么；(2)請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷或體會(huì)，列舉讀書的益處；(3)你建議人們閱讀什么類型的書。 【寫作要求】1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作大約在xx年首先出現(xiàn)在廣東試卷中，繼而xx年江蘇高考英語卷中又首次出現(xiàn)了這種題型。任務(wù)型寫作要求考生閱讀一篇短文，然后完成兩項(xiàng)任務(wù)：使用約30個(gè)詞概括要點(diǎn)；使用約120個(gè)詞寫一篇符合要求的短文。這一題型旨在考查考生“用英語獲取信息、處理信息、傳達(dá)信息的能力，分析問題、解決問題的能力以及用英語進(jìn)行表達(dá)的能力”，即“綜合語言運(yùn)用能力”。因此，本篇寫作有下列重點(diǎn)需要考生認(rèn)真思考，加以解決： 1.概括短文內(nèi)容：瀏覽全文，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，這篇新聞報(bào)道的主要內(nèi)容是：根據(jù)揚(yáng)子晚報(bào)報(bào)道，江蘇人花在讀書上的時(shí)間在過去二十年中下降了。人們普遍認(rèn)為，對(duì)于江蘇這樣一個(gè)教育、經(jīng)濟(jì)、建筑業(yè)的大省來說，這是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題。2.就新聞中所報(bào)道的主要內(nèi)容談自己的看法；3.如何結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷或體會(huì)，列舉讀書的益處；4.如何建議人們閱讀什么類型的書。【參考答案】According to a recently released report in Yangzi Evening Paper, the time of reading spent by people in Jiangsu has dropped over the past 20 years, which is considered to be a serious problem to a big province of education, economy and building industry.There is no denying the fact that people in Jiangsu read fewer books nowadays. Why, For one thing, the Internet is taking up most of peoples free time. For another, people are much busier than before, which makes people in Jiangsu can hardly find time to do reading.Reading benefits everyone in many ways. First of all, one can acquire much knowledge by reading. The knowledge one gains from books can change his way of life. Secondly, reading can enrich ones mind. With out books, our soul would be like a desert. Whenever I am upset, I would read my favorite book The Little Prince and I feel inspired at once. Thirdly, reading makes ones life more colorful and pleasant. Reading offers us one of the best pastimes and few pleasures can pare with that of reading a good book.In my opinion, classical works of literature and bestselling books by excellent contemporary writers are the best choices. Lets read as many good books as we can. The more we read, the more we will learn.2.接著用一句主從復(fù)合句“There is no denying the fact that people in Jiangsu read fewer books nowadays. (there be denying the fact that.是經(jīng)典句型)”和盤托出對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法；然后結(jié)合原文所提供的事實(shí)給自己的看法提供論據(jù)，使結(jié)論更具有說理性；3.第三段結(jié)合自身的體會(huì)列舉讀書的益處。范文用過渡句“Reading benefits everyone in many ways.”引出話題。然后用“First of all, Secondly, Thirdly” 分三點(diǎn)向讀者闡述了讀書的益處，條理非常清楚。4.用過度詞語“In my opinion”引出了“建議人們閱讀什么類型的書”，使得上下文渾然一體。最后一句“The more we read, the more we will learn”為全文畫龍點(diǎn)睛。