2019-2020年高三英語上學(xué)期開學(xué)測試題分類匯編 六 書面表達(dá).doc

2019-2020年高三英語上學(xué)期開學(xué)測試題分類匯編 六 書面表達(dá)（一）隨著科技的發(fā)展，iPad已經(jīng)成為學(xué)生的新寵。用iPad既可以聽音樂、閱讀電子書，又可以玩電子游戲。請(qǐng)你用英語給你校長寫一封信，談?wù)勀銓?duì)你校學(xué)生使用iPad的情況。信的內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：1使用iPad對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)產(chǎn)生的好處。2使用iPad對(duì)學(xué)生產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響。3提出自己的建議并簡要說明理由。注意：詞數(shù)120詞左右。Dear Sir，My name is Li HuaI am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students_Yours，Li Hua【答案】 Dear Sir，My_name_is_Li_HuaI_am_writing_to_show_my_concern_about_the_effects_of_modern_media_on_us_studentsNowadays，iPads are very popular in our schoolMany students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashionThere is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so onIn other words，its helpful to our studies，especially our English learningHowever，each coin has two sidesSome students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphereWhats worse，some even waste their precious time playing gamesIn my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroomI hope you will take my suggestions into considerationI am looking forward to your early replyYours，Li_Hua【解析】 試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息說明本校學(xué)生使用iPad的情況。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：使用iPad對(duì)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)產(chǎn)生的好處和產(chǎn)生的負(fù)面影響以及自己對(duì)此事的看法。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion 和There is no doubt that.運(yùn)用了同位語從句，以及which 和where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量習(xí)語和短語，如each coin has two sides, in other words, focus our attention on, take .into consideration等。插入語whats worse，以及副詞However的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。【難度】一般（二）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Life isnt about waiting for the storm to passIt is about learning to dance in the rain注意：無須寫標(biāo)題；除詩歌外，文體不限；不能透露個(gè)人信息和學(xué)校名稱；字?jǐn)?shù)120左右?！敬鸢浮縄n our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troublesSome people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer themPersonally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overe themMy memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school studentAt that time, I had great trouble studying EnglishFirst of all, I felt it hard to memorize English wordsBesides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answersWhat annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantlyI was about to give up when my English teacher found problemHe encouraged me and gave me some good adviceInspired by him, I was determined to defeat itFollowing his advice, I made progress graduallyFrom my experience, I can draw aconclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave enoughSo keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have anyNever wait for the storm to pass; instead, learn to dance in the rain【解析】試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：take action采取行動(dòng)，encourage to do 鼓勵(lì)某人做什么How I wished I could swim like them! 這句話用了虛擬語氣， It frightened me just to think of being alone in the water. 這句話用了it做形式主語， Nobody is born knowing how to swim.” 這句話用了伴隨狀語， there was nothing to be afraid of. 這句話用了there be句型。This experience has also taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.這句話用了賓語從句和條件狀語從句。【難度】一般【答案】Looking back to the National English Speaking petition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.Firstly, I feel really delighted that I have won the first prize in the petition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”. Besides ,I have established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I have learned a lot. More importantly, taking this petition has enabled me to overe my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldnt have done such an excellent job.To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.【解析】試題分析：分析要求可知，假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生Tom。前不久，你參加了全國英語演講比賽并獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)用英語給?？瘜懸黄恼拢?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。內(nèi)容主要包括：1付出才有回報(bào)；2收獲自信和友誼；3感激之情。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。要求寫約100個(gè)詞，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】 文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語和句式。如： which引導(dǎo)的定語從句、taking 非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)、Additionally, To sum up等都很不錯(cuò)?！倦y度】一般（四）請(qǐng)就以下話題，按要求用英文寫作。Dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning and night, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial(引起爭議的) because of the noise pollution it creates. Guangzhou is the first city in China to have drafted a rule on the creation of silent zones in areas of parks that are close to schools, hospitals, offices and residential quarters.請(qǐng)就此內(nèi)容寫一篇短文并發(fā)表自己的看法。要求：(1) 就此材料發(fā)表你的感想；(2) 應(yīng)緊扣材料、有明確觀點(diǎn)；(3) 詞數(shù)不少于60字(4) 在答題卡上作答。_【答案】【范文】Dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial because of the noise pollution it creates.Some citizens hold the view that the loud noise is unbearable, thus disturbing the normal life of the people living near the squares and they also hope that the groups can keep the volume down to create a quiet environment. However, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring. Besides they have their own right to dance on the square as it is also one of the recreational activities like playing chess or playing cards.In my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social(make more new friends who share the same hobby with them, and build up their body as well). However, whatever their choice of entertainment, its important not to neglect the public order and affect other peoples lives. So its time for the government to draft regulations which include details such as the restrictions on the volume, the areas and musical equipment. Only in this way can we see harmonious scene.【解析】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語dozens of 很多；turn on 打開；because of 因?yàn)?；in ones opinion 在某人看來；However, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring.這個(gè)句子中without which引導(dǎo)定語從句；In my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social這個(gè)句子用到固定句型there is no denying that 不可否認(rèn)；Only in this way can we see harmonious scene這個(gè)句子only+狀語+部分倒裝；【難度】一般（五）Bookcrossing. 是一個(gè)面向全球的圖書分享網(wǎng)站。該網(wǎng)站組織的分享活動(dòng)有兩種參與方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把書放在指定地點(diǎn)，由其他參與者自由獲??；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接傳遞給另一位參與者。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)用英文寫信申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：表明寫信目的選擇一種分享方式簡述作出該選擇的理由希望了解更多信息注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于80； （2）在答題卡上做答 （3）書信格式及開頭已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）【答案】Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books. Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡潔，不拖拉，使用短語：apply for申請(qǐng)；Looking forward to盼望著；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.這句話運(yùn)用learning做伴隨狀語，reason后面跟著一個(gè)同位語從句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.這個(gè)句子not only but also連接兩個(gè)句子，第一個(gè)句子需要用部分倒裝；【難度】一般（六）學(xué)校計(jì)劃舉行英語作文競賽，主題為“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇100-120詞的作文：你遇到了困難或問題，不知該怎么辦。你去請(qǐng)教一位長輩，后來問題得到了解決。要求寫清楚下面三點(diǎn)：1 當(dāng)時(shí)面臨的困難或問題是什么？2 你獲得的指教是什么？3 結(jié)果如何？注意：不能在作文中出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和本人姓名?！敬鸢浮?One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practising English. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. We cant judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to stick to working hard for a long time to check my results.I took my grandpas advice and have been doing it as he told me to since then. Now my English is much better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.【解析】 試題分析：本文的主題是我們需要來自老一輩的建議，本文貼近生活，比較有話說。對(duì)于此類文章，要注意一下幾點(diǎn)：1、首先，要根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際生活經(jīng)歷來描寫你因?yàn)榕c問題而去請(qǐng)教一位長輩，后來問題得到了解決的實(shí)踐；2、其次，描述事件的原因、過程、結(jié)果時(shí)，可以多用一些連接詞來使文章順暢；3、最后，要注意點(diǎn)出文章的主題，文章的主題要與所寫內(nèi)容有關(guān)；4、注意單詞、詞組、句式的運(yùn)用來給文章增色?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，要善于使用不同的句型。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換。文章按照時(shí)間順序來寫，使用了One year ago，since then，Now 這樣的時(shí)間副詞來連接文章。學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)也要注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，本文運(yùn)用了in great trouble處于巨大的困難中，devoted all my spare time to付出了我全部的課余時(shí)間，stick to堅(jiān)持等短語。本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. 運(yùn)用了非謂語形式，這樣文章才能寫出新意。最后的結(jié)尾From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.點(diǎn)出了文章的主題?！倦y度】一般（七）1請(qǐng)你給外教Jeff寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 告訴他你在學(xué)校演講比賽中獲得了第一名；2. 感謝他在口語及演講技巧上給予的幫助。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50。2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jeff,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Jeff,I cant wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest. I know that without your help, I could have gone nowhere. Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive. With your great help, I faced the challenge confidently. I really appreciate what youve done for me. Thank you very much!Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：分析要求可知，請(qǐng)你給外教Jeff寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 告訴他你在學(xué)校演講比賽中獲得了第一名；2.感謝他在口語及演講技巧上給予的幫助。 詞數(shù)不少于50。多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，句子結(jié)構(gòu)要準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容必須完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫性強(qiáng)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】 文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語和句式。如：I cant wait to tell you 、could have gone nowhere 、what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句等都很不錯(cuò)?！倦y度】一般（八）假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹在“傳統(tǒng)文化進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)中，向人藝術(shù)家學(xué)習(xí)捏面人的過程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”為題，給?？坝⒄Z角”寫一篇英文稿件。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60.提示詞：一個(gè)面團(tuán)a piece of dough 面人dough figurine【答案】 Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【解析】試題分析：本題考查的細(xì)節(jié)是手工藝人教大家如何去做這個(gè)東西，學(xué)生認(rèn)真聆聽，是教育學(xué)。第二幅圖最重要的點(diǎn)就是學(xué)生能不能找到學(xué)生認(rèn)真聆聽這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，因?yàn)槔蠋熃桃欢芸吹贸鰜?，但是學(xué)生能不能寫到學(xué)生在聽，這應(yīng)該是一個(gè)得分點(diǎn)。第三幅圖是一個(gè)指導(dǎo)。所以，重點(diǎn)在于一對(duì)一這樣對(duì)應(yīng)的指導(dǎo)關(guān)系。最后一幅圖是我們?cè)谏险n的時(shí)候會(huì)重點(diǎn)講的照相，大家很歡樂，做成一個(gè)作品。 所以，除了四幅圖的要點(diǎn)之外，所以，重點(diǎn)在于一對(duì)一這樣對(duì)應(yīng)的指導(dǎo)關(guān)系。所以寫好這樣的作文一定要抓住細(xì)節(jié)，才能得分。還需要注意時(shí)態(tài)，詞匯不要拼寫錯(cuò)誤，多用復(fù)合句式才能體現(xiàn)出亮點(diǎn)?？忌屑稍谖恼麻_篇犯低級(jí)的語法錯(cuò)誤，尤其注意時(shí)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)及冠詞的正確使用。相比于實(shí)用性強(qiáng)的應(yīng)用文來說，情景作文可以在保證要點(diǎn)齊全的前提下適當(dāng)增加長難句的使用，如對(duì)非謂語、三大從句及連詞進(jìn)行靈活運(yùn)用。關(guān)注句式的多樣性及用詞的準(zhǔn)確性對(duì)取得該板塊的高分會(huì)有更大的保障。【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等來銜接句子和段落，表示事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間順序，使作文更有條理，做到了行文連貫。全文適用的是一般過去時(shí)，注意了文章上下文時(shí)態(tài)保持一致的原則。范文使用了一些重要的語法知識(shí)：非謂語動(dòng)詞Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定語從句we put the figurines we made on the table；時(shí)間狀語從句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with the tool box. 語法知識(shí)使用得當(dāng)，敘事清晰?！倦y度】一般 (九)請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表,并按照要求用英語寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章.We often hear people plain about lack of opportunity. In fact, this world does not lack opportunity. But it does make a difference if we are able to grasp it.For example, lets suppose that Harvard University is recruiting(招收) students in China, and the requirement is that students must score above 640 for the Test of English as a Foreign Language(TOEFL) and 2,200 for the Graduate Record Examination(GRE) for admission to the university. Have you scored those scores? If you havent, you may feel regret, “I would have worked harder if I had known the requirements.”When opportunity knocks, make sure your door isnt locked. An able man will find opportunity everywhere, while a weak one will be left with only one opportunity, and that is to plain of having to prove what he is worth in this world.【寫作內(nèi)容】1、以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；2、以約120個(gè)詞就“機(jī)遇”這一話題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：(1) 你如何看待機(jī)遇？(2) 我們?cè)鯓硬拍茏プC(jī)遇？【寫作要求】1. 可以發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，但必須提供理由或論據(jù)；2. 闡述觀點(diǎn)或提供論據(jù)時(shí)，不能直接引用原文語句；3. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4. 不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。_【答案】 The author seems to believe we dont lack opportunity in our lives. He informs us through an example that what need most is the courage and ability to grasp opportunity. (30 words)Needless to say, opportunity plays a very important part in our lives when it es to achieving success. To some extent, almost every success involves an element of opportunity. Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something. But opportunity doesnt often e our way.From my point of view, all that it takes is good preparation. As a popular saying goes, opportunity favors those who are prepared. Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the ing challenges, which are golden opportunities. However, if we dont work hard, we can do nothing but regretfully let opportunity slip off our fingers.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于談看法的書面表達(dá)，根據(jù)提示信息的具體情況來行文。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，簡要概括短文，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、分析文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something.描寫了一句中國諺語；Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the ing challenges, which are golden opportunities.采用非限制性定語從句；此外，文章還使用了大量短語plays a very important part，F(xiàn)rom my point of view等。使用連詞Needless to say，However使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。【難度】一般 (十）高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。體育課已成為難得的放松時(shí)間, 可目前你們體育課內(nèi)容單一，有時(shí)甚至被其他學(xué)科占用。請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文，給校報(bào)投稿, 詞數(shù)120左右。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 目前體育課的現(xiàn)狀2. 你對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法3. 提出一些合理的建議Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near,_Yours Sincerely，【答案】 Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.Not only can PE class build our body but it also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of petition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.【解析】 試題分析：這是半開放性作文，給出了一個(gè)話題，關(guān)于體育課內(nèi)容單一, 有時(shí)甚至被占用的問題，并有部分的文字提示。要求談?wù)勀銓?duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法,并提出一些合理的建議。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】所給范文的一大亮點(diǎn)是句式多變： To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. 這句話用了不定式做目的狀語，However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.這句話用了it做形式主語， Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. 這句話用了倒裝句， Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. 這句話用了同位語從句，Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. 這句話用了非限制性定語從句?！倦y度】一般（十一）假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡航班號(hào)：CA985到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,How are you doing?_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】 試題分析：本題是一篇書信類作文，信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡，航班號(hào)：CA985，到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30，需要注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。亮點(diǎn)說明：本題是一篇書信類作文，作者寫出了文章所需要的信息，用了do one a favor表示需要幫一個(gè)忙。用了Would you please句式委婉的說出了自己的想法。時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)寫的都比較明確，My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue