高三英語二輪復習 第二篇 分類寫作10 記敘描寫課件.ppt

,分類寫作,十、記敘描寫,Stop thief! 抓小偷 run after sb. 追趕某人 bench 板凳 umbrella 雨傘 arrest sb. 逮捕某人 praise sb. for sth. 因某事表揚某人 contact sb. 聯(lián)系某人 instant messaging 即時信息 surf the Internet 上網(wǎng) housing conditions 住房條件 furniture 家具 express ones sincere thanks to sb. 向某人表達真誠的謝意 a meaningful activity 一個有意義的活動 be decorated with . 用裝飾著 colorful ribbons 彩帶,【必備詞語】,blessing 祝福 in advance 預先 burst into tears 哭起來 take outdoor exercise 進行戶外活動 set out for . 出發(fā)去某地 in high spirits 情緒高漲地 beautiful scenery 美麗的風景 fall behind 落后；掉隊 be bathed in sunshine 沐浴在陽光中 a thorough cleaning 大清潔 scatter 散落 wipe the dust 掃灰塵 mop the floor 拖地 satisfaction 滿足,【必備詞語】,1. How beautiful the environment is! 多么美麗的環(huán)境?。?2. I had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today. 今天我和一些同學一起進行了一次愉快的出游。 3. With the economy developing rapidly, Im glad to see our city is taking on a new look. 隨著經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展，我非常高興地看到我們的城市呈現(xiàn)出新的面貌。 4. You can imagine how charming it used to be: fresh air, clean water, green grass, swimming fish, flying birds, and the golden sunshine. 你可以想象一下這里曾經(jīng)是多么的迷人：新鮮的空氣，清澈的水面，嫩綠的青草，暢游的小魚，飛翔的小鳥，還有金色的陽光。 5. We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. 我們看到了一條河流，河的兩岸都是綠草和漂亮的花。,【好句朗誦】,6. I would like to give a general picture of . 我想給一個總體的描述。 7. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. 過去的二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了重大的變化。 8. We students specially organized a meaningful activity on Teachers Day. 在教師節(jié)，我們學生特別組織了一次有意義的活動。 9. The classroom was carefully decorated with balloons and colorful ribbons. 教室被大家用氣球和彩帶仔細地裝飾起來。 10. Ms. Li was deeply moved, with tears filling her eyes. 李老師很受感動，眼里充滿了淚花。 11. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 盡管很累，我從沒有覺得這么開心。,【好句朗誦】,1. He thanked me for having helped he out of trouble.,1. he改為him,2. They showed us around the farm, which we saw many kinds of plants.,2. which改為where,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,3. Fortunate, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.,3. Fortunate改為Fortunately,4. The cause of the fire broke out in the office building last night is being investigated.,4. fire后面加which/that，或broke改為breaking,5. The blind man was out danger, but the young woman got injured.,5. out后面加of,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,6. I arrived at the train station at 3:00 a.m., surrounding by people who did not speak my language.,6. surrounding改為surrounded,7. My friend was unhappy so his daddy was very strict with him.,7. so改為because,8. If you will come to Guilin, you will know how clear the water is and how green the hills are.,8. 刪掉第一個will,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,9. I was walking along the street that a terrible traffic accident happened.,9. that改為when,10. One day, anything unpleasant happened.,10. anything改為something,【單句改錯】 每句只有一個錯誤,【2014全國大綱卷：十年后的我】 一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”，請根據(jù)下列要點和你的想象完成短文。 1. 家庭； 2. 工作； 3. 業(yè)余生活。,【真題滿分佳作賞析】,滿分佳作（一） I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I would like to give a general picture of my future life in ten years. First of all, I will have a warm family where all family members will love each other and care about each other. As for me, since being a teacher is my dream, Im sure that this dream will come true then. I wish to teach foreign students traditional Chinese culture in a college at that time and I will certainly introduce China to the world. Time permitting, I expect to have more spare time to spend with my fiends so that we can have a better relationship. Such will be my future life, the one I have been dreaming of.,滿分賞析 give a general picture of(作出總體的描述)，很好地作為本文的寫作總起句。 恰當用到了 where 作關(guān)系副詞的定語從句；考生要注意不要僅為了用從句而用從句，避免行文看起來生硬。 用到being現(xiàn)在分詞短語和Im sure that接賓語從句，使句式多樣；另外come true使用正確，其主語應該是“夢想”，切忌寫出“I come true my dream”這樣錯誤的句子。 Time permitting屬于獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，也就是“主語+分詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，體現(xiàn)了作者的語法功底。 用到such開頭的倒裝句。,滿分佳作（二） I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer. Ill enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Ill do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, Ill continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, Ill travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.,滿分賞析 本文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，第一句總起寫作內(nèi)容。 從句whatever I do作in的賓語。 用In a word進行總結(jié)。,【2004遼寧卷改編：路人幫助抓小偷】 作文翻譯 一個星期天早上，中山公園里人很多。在一個貨攤前，一個女人正在買雪糕，這時她身后的一個年輕人搶走了她的手提包。她大喊：“抓小偷！他搶了我的包！”聽到這些話，一些人開始追趕他。有一位老人靜靜地坐在附近的長凳上。當搶包者跑過他身邊時，老人快速地拿起他的雨傘，把它放在搶包者的兩腿間。那個年輕人狠狠地摔倒在地上。很快，兩個警察乘警車來了，把他抓住了。女人感謝了老人，周圍的人都贊揚老人聰明。 參考詞匯： 貨攤stand (n.) ； 搶奪 snatch (v.) ； 逮捕 arrest (v.),【模仿翻譯】,One Sunday morning, there were many people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man behind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! Hes snatched my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatchers legs. The young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.,【2004北京春季卷改編：過去和現(xiàn)在生活的對比】 作文翻譯 我們生活的改變 過去的二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的改變。以我的家庭為例。過去，我父母主要通過寫信和別人聯(lián)系，但是現(xiàn)在我們發(fā)郵件或者使用即時通訊。以前，我父母聽收音機和看電視來獲取新聞和其他資訊，但是現(xiàn)在我們通過電腦或智能手機上網(wǎng)。另外一個巨大的改變是居住條件。當他們結(jié)婚時，我父母住在擠滿了家具的一個小房間，但是現(xiàn)在我們搬進了一間新的三房套間?？傊^去二十年生活的改善給我們帶來了舒適和方便。,Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we send emails or use instant messaging. And once my parents listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information, but now we surf the Internet via computers or smart phones. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.,【2012陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)】 假定你是李華。教師節(jié)那天你們班組織了一次活動，請根據(jù)寫作要點，為?？坝⒄Z角”版寫一篇短文。寫作要點： 1. 活動的策劃； 2. 教室的布置； 3. 活動的內(nèi)容； 4. 你的感想。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.,【全真考場】,【2012陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)】 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. In order to express our sincere thanks to her, we students specially organized a meaningful activity on Teachers Day. The classroom was carefully decorated with balloons and colorful ribbons, with our blessings written on the blackboard. Standing in rows, all of us kept silent before Ms. Li came in, and she received warm applause upon appearing at the door. Meanwhile, our monitor presented flowers well prepared in advance to her. Ms. Li was so surprised and happy that she burst into tears with excitement. Ms. Li was deeply moved, with tears filling her eyes. Through this activity, not only do I know the teachers kindness but realize a simple greeting from us is the best gift for our teachers.,【2013江西卷改編：登山活動】 星光中學（Xingguang High School）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 時間與地點：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）； 2. 活動的過程； 3. 你對于這次活動的評論。,【2013江西卷改編：登山活動】 In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation, it also promoted the friendship among us.,【2013陜西卷改編：做家務】 假定你是李華。請根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經(jīng)歷。 寫作要點： 1. 做家務的理由； 2. 做家務的過程； 3. 你的感受。 I am an 18-year-old middle school student ,【2013陜西卷改編：做家務】 Im an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry, I begin to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floor. At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.,Thank You!,