高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 第二部分 題型突破 專題五 書(shū)面表達(dá)課件.ppt

專題五 書(shū)面表達(dá),專題五 書(shū)面表達(dá),專題五 書(shū)面表達(dá),(2015·高考浙江卷)在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說(shuō)服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)？請(qǐng)你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100120個(gè)詞的短文。要求如下： 1從以上兩種做法中選擇一種； 2以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。,When I Have a Different Opinion _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,論說(shuō)文,當(dāng)我有不同意見(jiàn)時(shí),一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),第一人稱,1詞匯 在某方面有不同意見(jiàn) _ 用不同的方法處理_ 不但而且_ 勸告某人做某事_ 值得做某事_,have different opinions in doing sth.,have various ways to deal with.,not only.but also.,persuade sb.into doing sth.,be worth doing sth.,2句式 當(dāng)我們組織班級(jí)活動(dòng)時(shí)我們可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)不同的意見(jiàn)。 一般表達(dá)：When we organize class activities，we may have different opinions. 高級(jí)表達(dá)：(用簡(jiǎn)單句改寫(xiě)上面的句子) _,We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.,我的同學(xué)大多數(shù)想去公園，而我卻有去更好地方的想法。 一般表達(dá)：The majority of my classmates wanted to go to a park.But I wanted to go to a nicer place. 高級(jí)表達(dá)：(用狀語(yǔ)從句改寫(xiě)上面的句子) _,Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.,One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.We may have various ways to deal with such a situation.When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it.By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly. Once we were discussing where to go for an outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place.I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea.We did have a good time that day.Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.,An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.When I have a different opinion，I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.,The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism，I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum.I would love to go to a museum，but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic.Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.,本文屬于觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)類作文，該話題貼近學(xué)生生活，既考查了學(xué)生對(duì)生活的關(guān)注，又考查了學(xué)生在生活中處理事情的能力，是一道設(shè)置合理的作文題目。 一篇優(yōu)秀的范文一般要符合以下幾點(diǎn)要求： 1符合寫(xiě)作要求，本文要求在兩種做法中選擇一種，所以不要在一篇文章中既表達(dá)堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)，又表達(dá)尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)。以上兩篇范文分別選擇了堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)和尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)，符合寫(xiě)作要求。,2覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，本文要求以具體事例闡述選擇的理由，所以寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要舉出具體的事例。第一篇范文給出了一次討論外出活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)的事例，在大多數(shù)同學(xué)想去公園而自己有更好的去處時(shí)，堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)服大家接受自己的想法。表達(dá)了堅(jiān)持自己觀點(diǎn)的原因：Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.。第二篇范文給出了一次班級(jí)討論是去公園野餐還是去博物館的事例，在自己想去博物館而大多數(shù)同學(xué)想去野餐時(shí)，自己毫不猶豫地選擇尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)。表達(dá)了自己這樣選擇的原因：.I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.。兩篇范文都涵蓋了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，且觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)明確。,3運(yùn)用較多復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)的詞匯，第一篇范文中單詞如situation，express，manage，benefit，短語(yǔ)deal with，stick to，句式not only.but also，persuade sb.into doing sth.，be worth doing sth.以及“where動(dòng)詞不定式”作賓語(yǔ)的使用顯示了考生較高的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。第二篇范文中單詞respect，sacrifice，hesitation，短語(yǔ)give up，bring up，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)emphasizing collectivism作后置定語(yǔ)，以及whether.or.作賓語(yǔ)的使用也顯示了考生較高的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。 兩篇范文語(yǔ)句間的銜接都比較順暢，全文結(jié)構(gòu)也較緊湊，都是較好的寫(xiě)作范文，值得學(xué)習(xí)借鑒。,書(shū)面表達(dá)題主要考查考生用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己思想的能力，即考查考生是否能用所學(xué)的英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，用合乎英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣的表達(dá)方式傳遞信息，進(jìn)行思想交流。這種測(cè)試既符合英語(yǔ)教學(xué)總目標(biāo)的要求，又與日常生活和社會(huì)交往密切相連，尤其突出了語(yǔ)言交際功能的特點(diǎn)。其解題方法如下：,2審人稱：弄清書(shū)面表達(dá)要求用何種人稱，然后以合適的身份、語(yǔ)氣，從適當(dāng)?shù)慕嵌冗M(jìn)行表達(dá)。,3審時(shí)態(tài)：考生容易出錯(cuò)的就是時(shí)態(tài)。首先應(yīng)確定文章的主體時(shí)態(tài)。例如：日記一般使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，說(shuō)明文一般使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)等。當(dāng)然，為滿足寫(xiě)作的需要，我們還要把其他時(shí)態(tài)與主體時(shí)態(tài)交叉使用。 4審要求：考生要特別關(guān)注書(shū)面表達(dá)題中的“注意”一項(xiàng)，這是命題人對(duì)考生提出的具體答題要求，因此對(duì)于題目所提供的說(shuō)明，無(wú)論是英語(yǔ)還是漢語(yǔ)，都應(yīng)該認(rèn)真分析，反復(fù)推敲，做到寫(xiě)作時(shí)沒(méi)有偏差。,1提綱作文：命題人通過(guò)漢語(yǔ)、英語(yǔ)給定寫(xiě)作提綱，要求考生根據(jù)給出的提綱，確定文章的中心，然后緊緊圍繞中心表達(dá)提綱的主旨?？忌?xì)讀提示，認(rèn)真審題，在定好體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、明確信息全面、要點(diǎn)清晰的基礎(chǔ)上，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)和重點(diǎn)詞匯的句法功能、句子的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則，按照提示或說(shuō)明中所提供的事實(shí)和情節(jié)發(fā)展的順序選詞造句，然后將零散的句子排列成主謂一致、時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)、脈絡(luò)分明、合乎邏輯、內(nèi)容完整的短文。,2看圖作文：這種類型的書(shū)面表達(dá)最容易遺漏要點(diǎn)。無(wú)論是單幅、雙幅還是多幅圖畫(huà)，考生一定要認(rèn)真研究圖畫(huà)中的每一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)或信息，這些都要在文章中有所體現(xiàn)。注意有些題目還會(huì)要求考生發(fā)表對(duì)該圖畫(huà)的看法，考生一定要根據(jù)題目要求和圖畫(huà)寓意表達(dá)出來(lái)。 3(半)開(kāi)放作文：這種類型的書(shū)面表達(dá)往往分為兩種。一種是題目給出一段漢字，一種是給出一幅(組)漫畫(huà)，讓考生發(fā)表看法。這時(shí)，考生要緊扣文章提示，先對(duì)該現(xiàn)象或圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單扼要的描述或介紹，然后再據(jù)此發(fā)表議論。,1開(kāi)頭出彩，結(jié)尾精妙：一般說(shuō)來(lái)，短文應(yīng)由三部分構(gòu)成開(kāi)頭、正文、結(jié)尾。好的開(kāi)始是成功的一半，開(kāi)好頭、起好步對(duì)書(shū)面表達(dá)至關(guān)重要，好的開(kāi)頭會(huì)讓閱卷老師的眼睛為之一“亮”。開(kāi)頭常見(jiàn)的方式包括開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山、以俗語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)或直接引語(yǔ)引出等，當(dāng)然也可以以疑問(wèn)句、套語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭。文章能否得高分，關(guān)鍵還要看結(jié)尾，好的結(jié)尾能起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。文章的結(jié)尾應(yīng)根據(jù)不同體裁而定，或總結(jié)全文，或表明對(duì)所敘述的人或事的態(tài)度，適可而止，但千萬(wàn)不能草草收?qǐng)?，結(jié)尾一定要顯得水到渠成。,常用開(kāi)頭句式(黑體部分)： First，I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship. First of all，we must make full use of every 45­minute lesson. Nowadays/Recently，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. In the first place，she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute. To begin with，smoking should be banned in public areas. Generally speaking，the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English.,As the proverb says/As the saying goes，“Time is money.” As can be seen from the table，nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China. With the development of the Internet，computers play an important role in peoples life. It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours. There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. It is believed that health is above wealth. It is well known that an elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.,Im excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine. Im glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student. As is known to all，shoes play an important role in our life，for it can protect our feet from being hurt.,常用結(jié)尾句式(黑體部分)： All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. In conclusion，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because its the mother of success. To sum up，environmental protection is of great importance，which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.,On the whole，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle. Id appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible. It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted. Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown take on a new look in the near future. We can，therefore，come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world.,From what has discussed above，we may draw the conclusion that you must have self­confidence if you want to achieve something. In short，not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese，it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people. In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful. Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.,2表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞高級(jí)：高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中所說(shuō)的“應(yīng)用了較多的詞匯”，是指詞匯使用的多樣性，如詞性的多樣性、高級(jí)詞匯的使用、同義詞與反義詞的使用、短語(yǔ)的使用等。由此可知，運(yùn)用較高級(jí)詞匯對(duì)提高書(shū)面表達(dá)的得分檔次至關(guān)重要。使用高級(jí)詞匯的4 大原則：,(1) 具體性原則 在具備一定詞匯量的條件下，具體的表達(dá)比泛泛而談的內(nèi)容更能引起讀者的共鳴。例如：當(dāng)描述一個(gè)具體事物或人時(shí)，類似a nice/good man的表達(dá)讓人感覺(jué)很空洞，我們可以用有個(gè)性的、具體的詞描繪一個(gè)人，如kind­hearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easy­going(隨和的)等。 I will have my own family probably with a lovely child. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.,(2)新穎性原則 寫(xiě)作時(shí)恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用高中學(xué)過(guò)的、別人可能想不到的詞匯，會(huì)給閱卷人耳目一新的感覺(jué)。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗詞，又要避開(kāi)冷僻詞匯。 In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult. In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging. So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are sure to achieve success. So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are bound to achieve success.,(3)短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則 多使用詞組、習(xí)語(yǔ)來(lái)代替一些單詞，以增加文采。 Developing a good habit is also important. Developing a good habit is also of importance. As the number of English learners is increasing，its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. As the number of English learners is on the rise，its not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts.,I was going to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly.,(4)避免重復(fù)原則 盡量避免過(guò)多地使用某一個(gè)單詞，必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組來(lái)代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be. Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set up a library where the old playground used to be.,常見(jiàn)高級(jí)寫(xiě)作詞匯必備 1第一firstto begin/start with 2第二secondin addition/whats more 3最后finallylast but not least 4總之in a wordto sum up/in conclusion/in summary 5但是buthowever 6機(jī)會(huì)chanceopportunity 7選擇choicealternative 8考慮considertake into account/consideration 9充足enoughadequate 10影響effectinfluence,11最終finallyeventually 12勤奮hardworkingdiligent 13幫助helpassist 14后果resultconsequence 15應(yīng)該shouldbe supposed to 16缺點(diǎn)shortcomingdrawback 17理解understandmake sense of/figure out 18可用usefulavailable 19使用useemploy/make use of 20種類繁多all kinds ofa wide range of 21也；和as well asin addition to/apart from 22反對(duì)be againstobject to,23厭煩be bored withbe fed up with 24忙于be busy in/withbe occupied in/with 25發(fā)生happenoccur/come about 26幾乎不hardlybarely 27提高improvepromote 28重要importantvital 29立即immediatelyin a flash 30不可能impossibleout of the question 31有趣interestingabsorbing/striking/appealing 32參加joinparticipate 33幸運(yùn)luckyfortunate,34巨大largeenormous 35許多manya large quantity of 36明顯obviousapparent 37豐富richabundant 38小心謹(jǐn)慎be carefulbe cautious 39與不同be different fromdiffer/vary from 40渴望做be eager to dobe dying to do/long to do 41因?yàn)閎ecause ofon account of 42聞名be famous forhave a reputation for 43正在建設(shè) being builtunder construction 44感到舒心feel comfortablefeel at ease,45在我看來(lái)in my opinionas far as I am concerned 46美化學(xué)校make our school beautifulbeautify our school 47故意on purposedeliberately/by design 48置若罔聞refuse to listen toturn a deaf ear to 49成功做某事succeed in doing sth.make it 50無(wú)法描述的美麗too beautiful to describebeauty beyond description 51一個(gè)表現(xiàn)好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper waya well­behaved child,52節(jié)能的房子a house which saves energyan energy­saving house 53一位受到良好教育的婦女a(chǎn) woman who has received good educationa well­educated woman 54精心組織的活動(dòng)an activity that is organized wella well­organized activity 55一個(gè)愛(ài)好和平的人a person who loves peacea peace­loving person,3句式多變，結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜：高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中提出“較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)”就是指句式結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性。毋庸置疑，單調(diào)的句式和結(jié)構(gòu)、長(zhǎng)度相近的句子會(huì)使文章呆板單調(diào)，缺乏生氣和活力，而靈活多變的句式則使行文豐富多彩，生動(dòng)、自然、流暢。感嘆句、倒裝句、復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型、定語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)等語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的正確使用，可以使文章的語(yǔ)言充滿層次感，從而較好地反映出作者的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。常見(jiàn)的滿分句型：,(1)合并句子(豐富結(jié)構(gòu)) (高考山東卷)Not only can I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western countries. (高考江西卷)For one thing，they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons.For another，they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. (2)改變語(yǔ)態(tài)(避免單調(diào)) (高考重慶卷)Besides，I am a book­lover and the books are so well kept that they are as good as new. (3)使用省略(達(dá)到言簡(jiǎn)意賅的效果) (高考全國(guó)卷)If so，please keep quiet about it because we want to give him a surprise.,(4)使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型(突出語(yǔ)意) (高考福建卷)It is overprotection and too much care that affect the childrens healthy development. (5)使用倒裝句(增強(qiáng)說(shuō)服力) (高考江蘇卷)Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. (6)使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣(提出建議，委婉表達(dá)，易于接受) (高考陜西卷)She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. (7)使用with結(jié)構(gòu)(豐富句式) (高考福建卷)The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring，with the sun shining and birds singing.,(8)使用狀語(yǔ)從句(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語(yǔ)或句子) (高考湖北卷)Whenever I had difficulties，they were always available. (9)使用定語(yǔ)從句(表意豐富) (高考山東卷)However，I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time，which was of vital importance for me. (10)使用名詞性從句(體現(xiàn)扎實(shí)的語(yǔ)言功底) (高考福建卷)It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents.,(11)使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞(不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞、過(guò)去分詞以及動(dòng)名詞的使用，可使句式多樣化) (高考福建卷)Whats worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. (高考安徽卷)These days，breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon，causing serious harm to life and the environment.,(12)適當(dāng)使用名言警句 在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，根據(jù)實(shí)際情況恰當(dāng)?shù)赜蒙弦粌删涿跃鋪?lái)點(diǎn)綴文章，不僅使文章顯得有深度，而且會(huì)提升文章的得分檔次。寫(xiě)作中常用的名言警句有： As a popular saying goes，“Every coin has two sides.” 常言道，“事物都有兩面性。” As a proverb says，“Rome was not built in a day.” 常言道，“偉業(yè)非一日之功?！?Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者事竟成。 As a popular saying goes，“Facts speak louder than words.”正如格言所說(shuō)，“事實(shí)勝于雄辯?！?As is known to all，“No pains，no gains.” 眾所周知，“不勞則無(wú)獲。” Its no use crying over the spilt milk.覆水難收。 Look before you leap.三思而后行。 He who laughs last laughs best. 誰(shuí)笑到最后，誰(shuí)就笑得最好。 As is known to all，“Easier said than done.” 眾所周知，“說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難?！?One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，謬以千里。,A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行，始于足下。 Well begun is half done.良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半。 A life without a friend is like a life without sun. 人生沒(méi)有了朋友，猶如生活沒(méi)有了陽(yáng)光。 A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見(jiàn)真情。 Time and tide wait for no man.歲月不待人。,4過(guò)渡自然，行文流暢：明確了文章的主題和中心后，我們就應(yīng)該用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞、恰當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)、合適的句型將要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句，進(jìn)而導(dǎo)向文章。高考書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)指出，書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)該注意“上下文的連貫性”，并能“有效地使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊”。此處所說(shuō)的連貫性，是指段與段、句與句之間以一種明晰的、合乎邏輯的順序組織與安排，做到在文意與結(jié)構(gòu)上層次分明，條理清楚，連貫流暢。因此，為了增加文章的連貫性、邏輯性和可讀性，大家在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要根據(jù)行文的需要，恰當(dāng)使用各類過(guò)渡詞、過(guò)渡句甚至過(guò)渡段來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)詞與詞、句與句、段與段之間的有效連接。,常用的過(guò)渡句式(黑體部分)： Also，do let me know if you need more information. Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions. Obviously，a good learning habit can help us to speed up to reach our destinations. Whats more，good books can help us to develop good characters. I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse/what is worse，it became dark.,In addition，we shouldnt neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. Meanwhile/At the same time，I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy. Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world. What is more serious is that we dont cherish wildlife. As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity. Besides，I wish there wouldnt be too many students in a class.,Moreover，it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others. Worse still，I took many falls off the bike. Second，go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. However，not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser. On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages.,On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth. Contrary to what I had originally said，the trip turned out to be fun. However，what amazes you most is the following new function. Otherwise well have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. But now because my left foot was injured，I cannot go with you as planned.,1格式、人稱是否正確。 2內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否齊全。遺漏要點(diǎn)是要扣分的。因此，我們應(yīng)該重視每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。,3語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)是否出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。這也是我們檢查的主要方面之一。復(fù)查點(diǎn)主要包括：主謂是否一致；名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的形式、介詞的使用是否正確；冠詞是否遺漏；形容詞及副詞是否使用得當(dāng)；句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整；標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、單詞的大小寫(xiě)是否正確；單詞拼寫(xiě)是否正確；詞數(shù)是否嚴(yán)重不足或者超出太多等等。檢查時(shí)，我們還應(yīng)該遵循如下原則：盡可能只對(duì)文章做小方面的改動(dòng)，對(duì)文章的構(gòu)思、寫(xiě)作順序等大的方面盡量不要改動(dòng)。,