江蘇省2019高考英語(yǔ) 第三部分 寫(xiě)作層級(jí)訓(xùn)練 第二步 通覽全局寫(xiě)作分類突破 第三講 如何寫(xiě)議論文的主體課件.ppt

第三講如何寫(xiě)議論文的主體,一、題型特點(diǎn)二、寫(xiě)作技巧,議論性讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型作文指的是根據(jù)閱讀材料所描述的某一事件、現(xiàn)象、觀點(diǎn)或話題發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)、意見(jiàn)和建議的一類讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)，其實(shí)質(zhì)就是要求考生根據(jù)題目要求寫(xiě)議論文。英語(yǔ)議論文有其獨(dú)特的框架結(jié)構(gòu)，能讓讀者迅速捕捉作者的觀點(diǎn)和思路，值得考生模仿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)。,1.運(yùn)用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)進(jìn)行銜接過(guò)渡,2.采用多種論證方式進(jìn)行分析,議論文在寫(xiě)作手法上以議論為主，如通過(guò)對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)、闡述原因、列舉例子等，但有時(shí)也要運(yùn)用說(shuō)明、敘述、描寫(xiě)等手法。議論中的說(shuō)明常為議論的開(kāi)展創(chuàng)造條件或?yàn)樽h論作補(bǔ)充；敘述和描寫(xiě)應(yīng)是為論點(diǎn)提供依據(jù)，因此，敘述應(yīng)該是概括的，描寫(xiě)應(yīng)該是簡(jiǎn)要的。常用的句式有：,3.結(jié)尾總結(jié)升華，重申觀點(diǎn),在文中或文末，考生可以用不同的語(yǔ)言重申主題或提出解決問(wèn)題的建議，從而使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、主題鮮明。常用的句式有：(1)Tosumup/Inshort/Inconclusion/Onthewhole/Allinall.(2)Takingallthefactorsintoaccount,wecandrawaconclusionthat.(3)Fromthediscussionabove,itcanbesafelyconcludedthat.(4)Therefore,itisnecessaryforusto.(5)Tobebrief,weshouldbeawareoftheimportanceof.(6)Onlywhenwe/Onlyby.,canwe.,【典例示范】請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。,(2016江蘇卷)Inrecentyears，internetvotinghasbeeincreasingpopularinChina.Peoplenotonlycaston-linevotesthemselves，butalsourgeotherstovoteforpetitionslikethe“MostBeautifulTeacher”andthe“CutestBaby”.LiJiang，ahighschoolstudent，isinvitedtovoteinthe“BestPoliceOfficer”petition，organizedbythelocalgovernmenttoletthepublichaveabetterunderstandingofpoliceofficersdailywork.LiJiangvisitsthewebsiteandreadsallthestories.Heisdeeplymovedbytheirgloriousdeeds.Heisalreadythinkingofbeingapolicemanhimselfinthefuture.,SuHuaisinvitedbyhisuncletovoteforhiscousininthe“FutureSinger”petition.Hehasalreadyreceivedthreesimilarinvitationsthisweek.Hisuncletellshimthatifhiscousinwinsthepetition，thefamilywillwinanoverseastourforfree.SuHualikeshiscousinverymuch，buthefindsothersingersperformevenbetter.Tovote，ornottovote?Thisisaquestionthattroubleshimverymuch.,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文概要；2.用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用23個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。寫(xiě)作要求1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,參考范文Onlinevotingbeesincreasinglypopular,andmanypetitionsgetpeopleinvolvedinit.Itisbeneficialtosomepeople,whileitputsothersintoadilemmaoverwhethertovoteornot.Inmyopinion,onlinevotingisaninseparablepartofmodernlifeandshouldbeweled,sinceitisnomorethanawaytoparticipateinpubliclife.Itmakesnodifferencefromordinaryvotingevents,inwhichcandidatesgoaroundtoseeksupports.Inaddition,theInternetmakessurveyingandvotingeasyandconvenient,regardlessoftimeandspace.Furthermore，votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.,Tobehonest，voterssometimesfeelannoyed，notbecausetheyhatevoting，butbecausetheyaredividedbetweenemotionandfairness.Thingswillturnforthebetterifwecanworkoutsomeparticipationrulesforpeopletoobey.Therefore，Iholdapositiveattitudetowardsonlinevoting.,能力提升練1請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。(2018江蘇鎮(zhèn)江高三調(diào)研)The18-year-oldgirlfromLinyi,Shandongprovincescored568pointsonhercollegeentranceexamthisyearandwasadmittedtoNanjingUniversityofPostsandTelemunications.OnAug19,Xureceivedaphonecallfromanunknownpersontellingherthatshewasduetoreceivestudentfunding.Followingthecall,Xutransferreda9，900-yuan“activationfee”intothemansbankaccount,hopingthemoneywouldappearinherstudentaccount,butitneverdid.,Afterdiscoveringtheyhadbeencheated,thefamilyimmediatelyreportedtheincidenttothepolice,butXuwassaidtobefrustrated.Ontheirwayhome,shesuddenlyfaintedanddespitedoctorsbesteffortstorescueher,shepassedaway.ThedeathofXuyuyuimmediatelycausedanoutcryoverthesociety,andonceagain,itfiredapublicangertowardsthosewhomitheartlessfraud(欺詐).SohowwasXusprivateinformationleakedout?Reportershavediscoveredthattherearemanypeoplewhoopenlyselltheexamineesinformationonline.Theinformationincludestheexamineesname,school,phonenumber,andaddress.Thepersonalinformationofexamineehasbeethetargetoftheonlinefraudindustry.,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫(xiě)出上文概要；2.用約120個(gè)詞就“Personalinformationleakage”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺埽瑑?nèi)容包括：(1)簡(jiǎn)述個(gè)人信息泄露的危害及保護(hù)個(gè)人信息的重要性；(2)就如何保護(hù)個(gè)人信息提幾點(diǎn)建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。寫(xiě)作要求1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,參考范文AgirlfromShandong,whowouldsoonbeginheruniversitylife,wascheatedoutof9，900yuanduetopersonalinformationleakage.Theheavyblowclaimedherlife,whicharousedangerinsociety.Theleakageofpersonalinformationisofgreatharm.Notonlywillpeoplebefrequentlytroubledbyunwantedshortmessagesorcalls,butalsopeoplemaybecheatedoutofmoneyorbeputindanger.Thus,theprotectionofpersonalinformationisofvitalimportanceinorderformonpeopletomaintainapeacefulandsafelife,aswellastoprotectonesownfortune.,Herearethetipsonhowtoprotectonespersonalinformation.Neverclickanylinkonphonesorputersunlessitcanbeutterlytrusted.Also,avoidconnectingsmartphonestoanyuntrustedWiFiinpublicplaces.Apartfromtheeffortsofmonpeople,thegovernmentmustsparenoefforttofightagainstcriminalssellingotherspersonalinformation.,能力提升練2請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。(2018江蘇海安高級(jí)中學(xué)期中考試)FlorenceChadwickwasborninCaliforniain1918.Shegrewuponthebeachandbeganpetingasaswimmerattheageofsix,whenheruncleenteredherinarace.Forthenext19years,shecontinuedasapetitiveswimmer.,OnJuly4,1952,attheageof34,Chadwickattemptedtobeethefirstwomantoswim21milesacrosstheCatalinaChannel,fromaportontheCaliforniacoast.Thatdaytheoceanwasicecold,thefogwassothickthatshecouldhardlyseethesupportboatsthatfollowedher,andsharksswamaroundher.Severaltimes,hersupportcrewusedgunstodriveawaythesharks.WhileAmericanswatchedontelevisions,hermotherandhertrainer,whowereinoneofthesupportboats,encouragedhertokeepgoing.However,after15hoursand55minutes,withonlyahalfmiletogo,shefeltthatshecouldntgoon,andbeggedtobetakenoutofthewater.,Later,Chadwicktoldareporter,“Look,Imnotexcusingmyself,butifIhadseenlandIknow,Icouldhavemadeit.”Thefoghadmadeherunabletoseeherswimminggoal,anditmadeherfeelshewasgettingnowhere.Twomonthslater,shetriedagain.Althoughthefogwasstillheavy,yetthistimeshemadeitwiththegoalrootedinhermind.Sheknewbehindthefogwasthelandshepursued.,寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容以約120個(gè)詞就“GoalandSuccess”的主題談?wù)勀愕目捶?，?nèi)容包括：(1)分析Chadwick第一次失敗和第二次成功的原因；(2)Chadwick的故事對(duì)你有什么啟發(fā)；(3)結(jié)合實(shí)際談?wù)勅绾螌?shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)。寫(xiě)作要求1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。,參考范文GoalandSuccessAnAmericanwomanswimmerChadwicksucceededincrossingtheCatalinaChannelafterfailinginherfirstattempt.Itwasagoalinhermindthatenabledhertomakeit.Chadwickfailedinherfirstattemptbecauseshecouldntseethe“l(fā)and(goal)”duetothe“fog(difficulty)”.Butlater,shesucceededbecauseshehad“thegoalrootedinhermind”despitetheheavy“fog”.,Fromthestory,weknowweshouldunderstandtherelationbetweenthegoalandthedifficulty.Thegoalcanencourageustoworkhardtoachievesuccesswhilethedifficultymaypreventusfromreachingourgoal.However,wecanachieveourgoalbyoveringanypossibledifficulties.Asstudents,wemaymeetwithmanydifficultiesinourstudy,butwecansurelyoverethemifwehaveacleargoal.Iwishallofuscouldbreakthroughthe“fog”toreachthebeautiful“l(fā)and”.,