2022年高考英語復習 書面表達專練4

2022年高考英語復習 書面表達專練4第四節(jié)）描述物體（Describing Things）美文欣賞（Enjoy Reading）General ShermanYou are looking at the biggest tree in the world. Its name is “General Sherman”. General Sherman is growing on the slopes of the Rocky Mountains in the United States. General Sherman is about 11 metres across and about 35 metres round. During playtime join hands with 25 of your friends and make a circle. This will give you an idea of General Shermans size. General Sherman is also very tall. It is over 80 metres high. It began as a tiny seed many years ago. Imagine! It has been growing since about xx B.C. It has been growing for almost 4000 years and it is still growing! General Sherman is as old as the Pyramids. It may live for another xx years. What will the world be like in 4000 A.D.? General Sherman will know!General Sherman是誰？讀完本文后，你會發(fā)現：General Sherman原來是一棵樹，一棵巨大無比、年代久遠的樹！本文文筆清新，用詞簡潔；特別是時態(tài)的變換生動地描述了一棵樹的過去、現在與未來。文中采用擬人化的寫作手法，又給這棵樹賦予了生命的色彩。另外，還應注意學習描述物體的一些具體表達方法。讀至文末兩句，不由感慨：世間千般事，誰堪評說？唯我樹大將軍！推薦背誦文段常用表達法1.形狀（Shape）-What shape is it?-What does it look like?-Its square/round/oval/triangular /rectangular2.大?。⊿ize）-How big is it?-What size is it?-Whats it like?Its 32 centimeters wide and 2 meters long.Its 5 inches by 5 inches (by 5 inches).Its 45 centimetres in diameter.3.顏色（Colour）-What colo(u)r is it ?-Its red/blue/green/gray/black/purple/pink/yellow/orange/brown(in colour).-Its dark grey/light blue/bright green4.材料（Material）-What is it made of?-Its made of leather/cotton/nylon/denim;-Its made of metal/wood/plastic/glass;-Its made of brick/stone/bamboo5.特點（Something Special）-Can you describe it in detail ?-Is there anything special about it?Its a long black leather coat with a belt.There is a zip at the front and a pocket beside.Its an old brown Italian leather shoe with a hole in it.I like these old black Chinese wooden tables.特注：多個形容詞的排列順序： 當兩個以上形容詞修飾一個名詞時，形容詞該如何排列呢？一般情況下，我們可以借助opsha這個詞來幫助我們：op代表opinion，指表示人們觀點的形容詞，如beautiful, horrible, lovely, nice等;sh代表shape,指表示形狀的形容詞，如long, short, narrow, round等；a代表age,指表示年齡、時代的形容詞，如old, new, young等；c代表color,指表示顏色的形容詞，如red, black, orange等；o代表origin, 指表示國籍、地區(qū)等的形容詞，如British, Canadian, German等；m代表material, 指表示材料的形容詞，如plastic, metal, wooden等。冠詞、物主代詞、指示代詞等應放在最前面。請看下面幾例：a nice long new black British plastic penShe wears her beautiful brown leather jacket today.（她今天穿著她那件漂亮的褐色夾克。）It was a lovely old French song.（那是一首有趣的法國老歌。）I have seen this fantastic new British film.(我已看過這部新的英國幻想片了。)寫作練習請你給班級墻報寫一篇稿件，說明奧運會旗和聯合國旗的含義。內容包括：1. 奧運會旗：白色，中央有五個環(huán)連鎖在一起，表示友誼。五環(huán)的顏色為藍、黑、黃、綠、紅，世界上任何一面國旗至少含其中一種顏色。2. 聯合國旗：藍色。居中有一幅世界地圖，地圖每邊各有一條橄欖枝，象征和平。提示：連鎖在一起（are locked together）橄欖枝(an olive branch) 文段開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。要求約100詞。You know that every country has a flag. But do you know that some flags stand for many countries?習作點評You know that every country has a flag. But do you know that some flags stand for many countries?The flag of the Olympic Games and the flag of the United Nations are those flags that stand for many countries.First, the flag of the Olympic Games. It is mainly white and there are five circles locked together in the center. Each circle has its own colour. They are blue, black, yellow, green and red. The circles show the friendship among all the countries, for every national flag at least has one colour the same as those five circles.Second, the flag of the U.N. The background of which is blue. In the center there is a map of the world, and there is an alive branch around each side of the map to symbolize peace.本文第二段銜接過渡自然，馬上將文章引向了具體的描述對象。對兩面旗子描述清晰，給人以比較生動的“圖像”。值得一提的是：習作作者較為恰當地應用了所給詞匯，這一點常常為部分學習者所忽略。修改建議：1.第三段最后一句，應改為：for every national flag has ,at least ,the colour of one of the five circles.2.最后一段首句，應改為：Second, the flag of the U.N., the back- ground of which is blue. 參考范文You know that every country has a flag. But do you know that some flags stand for many countries?At the Olympic Games, you see the Olympic Flag. It is white and it has five rings in the middle. The rings are blue, yellow, black, green, and red. You can see at least one of these colours in every flag in the world. The rings are locked together to show the friendship of the people at the games.At the United Nations, you see another flag that stands for many countries. It is a flag for the people of many lands. It is a blue flag with a map of the world in the middle. On each side of the map is an olive branch. The olive branches stand for peace.