2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（一）

寫作規(guī)范練(一)(限時：35分鐘)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。2019·長春市質(zhì)量監(jiān)測My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she cheered me up when I am down. I remember the day which I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road trembled under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while and there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, her heart melted. I gentle held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm bathe and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care for her every day.答案與解析：My close friend Sunny has curly yellow hair and she me up when I am down. I remember the day I first met her. It was snowing and freezing cold. I found a little dirty dog by the road under the bush. I stopped to wait for quite a while there was no sign of her owner. When she looked into my eyes, heart melted. I held her and took her back home. I gave her a warm and fed her some milk and soon she was recovered. Sunny is pleasant surprise for me and my family and I take good care her every day.cheered改為cheers考查時態(tài)。此處敘述作者當(dāng)前的情況，因此這里謂語動詞應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。which改為when考查關(guān)系詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處引導(dǎo)定語從句修飾名詞the day并在從句中作時間狀語，故應(yīng)該用when引導(dǎo)該從句。trembled改為trembling考查非謂語動詞。句中動詞tremble與謂語動詞之間沒有連詞，應(yīng)用其非謂語動詞形式，且該動詞與其邏輯主語a little dirty dog為主謂關(guān)系，故用其現(xiàn)在分詞形式。and改為but考查連詞?！拔摇蓖Ｏ聛淼攘撕么笠粫海菦]有她主人的影子。根據(jù)句意可知，這里應(yīng)該用并列連詞but表示轉(zhuǎn)折含義。her改為my考查代詞。根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示“我”看到這幕情景時的心情，應(yīng)該用my而不是her。gentle改為gently考查副詞。修飾動詞應(yīng)用副詞，故用gently。bathe改為bath考查名詞。根據(jù)該句中的“a warm”可知，這里應(yīng)該用名詞bath。刪除was考查語態(tài)。recover表示“痊愈，康復(fù)”，是不及物動詞，沒有被動語態(tài)，因此刪除was。pleasant前加a考查冠詞。根據(jù)語境可知，pleasant在這里用作可數(shù)名詞，表示“令某人愉快的事物”，且pleasant的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭，故用不定冠詞a。for改為of考查固定搭配。take care of“照顧”為固定搭配。第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)2019·衡水中學(xué)高三七調(diào)考試假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter的哥哥要到你所在的城市工作，計劃到你所在的小區(qū)居住，并向你詢問該小區(qū)的情況。請根據(jù)以下提示給他回封郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：1表示歡迎；2你所在的小區(qū)適宜居住的理由(至少三條)。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Peter，I am so pleased to receive your letter. _Yours sincerely，Li Hua 參考范文：Dear Peter，I am so pleased to receive your letter. I am even happier to hear that your brother will move to our neighborhood and stay here. I think that's his smartest choice. Firstly, it is a wonderful, peaceful and clean area with a lot of greenery and open spaces to play in. Secondly, people in my neighborhood are friendly and easy­going. Thirdly, the houses are beautiful and I hold the belief that your brother will find the house to his taste. Last but not least, it is convenient to travel from here to other areas of the city. He will definitely be happy here.Yours sincerely，Li Hua- 3 -