2020版高考英語大二輪復習 專題六 寫作規(guī)范練（三）

寫作規(guī)范練(三)(限時：35分鐘)寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分35分)第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。2019·濰坊高考模擬I'm delight to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. You'll be surprised that a various of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant place is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and that you'll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. There's information board about the plants and animals and the Common is accessibly 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which was noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small, but if there were people around every day, many of the wildlife would keep away. Have a good time here!答案與解析：I'm to welcome you to our Wildlife Club. You'll be surprised that a of plants and creatures are living here. Here are the most visited tourist sites. One of the pleasant is Holland Common. This has been public land for two hundred of years, and you'll find interesting is that the River Ouse has its source in the Common. There's information board about the plants and animals and the Common is 24 hours a day. Then there is Holl Island which noted for its great range of trees. It is open only from Friday to Sunday because it's quite small, if there were people around every day, of the wildlife would keep away. Have a good time here!delight改為delighted此處形容主語I的感受，修飾人應(yīng)該用­ed形式的形容詞delighted，故將delight改為delighted。various改為varietya variety ofvarious，意為“各種各樣的”，修飾名詞plants，故將various改為variety。place改為places“one of the可數(shù)名詞復數(shù)”為固定搭配，表示“之一”，故將place改為places。刪除ofhundred, thousand, million等前有基數(shù)詞限定時，不用介詞of，故刪除of。that改為what分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處引導主語從句，從句中缺少find的賓語，應(yīng)用what來引導，故將that改為what。在information前加anboard意為“公告板”，為可數(shù)名詞，此處泛指“一個信息公告板”，應(yīng)用不定冠詞修飾，且information的發(fā)音是以元音音素開頭，故在information前加an。accessibly改為accessible此處作系動詞is的表語，表示主語的狀態(tài)或特征，應(yīng)用形容詞，故將accessibly改為accessible。was改為is根據(jù)語境和全文時態(tài)可知，此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，故將was改為is。but改為and前面提到“因為它很小，所以它只有星期五至星期日開放”，后面提到“如果每天都有人在附近的話，很多野生生物將會離開”。前后都表示限制開放時間的原因，所以兩個分句之間應(yīng)為順承關(guān)系，并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。many改為muchwildlife是不可數(shù)名詞，不能用many修飾，可用much修飾，故將many改為much。第二節(jié)書面表達(滿分25分)2019·黑龍江六校協(xié)作體一模假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter下個月要來你校進行短期游學，因此他發(fā)郵件詢問你該如何準備。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1.表示歡迎； 2.從衣、食、住、行四個方面給出建議。注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Dear Peter， I'm happy to learn that you will come to my school to study Chinese next month. I'd like to express my sincere welcome. Here're some suggestions. First, it is neither too hot nor too cold in the city where I live at that time. Bringing some light summer clothes will do. As for eating, people here are used to using chopsticks when they have a meal. It will be helpful if you have some practice ahead of time. Besides, to have a better knowledge of Chinese culture, I strongly recommend you to live with a Chinese family. Finally, it is convenient to use public transport in this city. Don't worry about it. I'm looking forward to your arrival.Yours，Li Hua- 3 -