2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題五 短文改錯專練（四）

短文改錯專練(四)Test 12019·濟(jì)南高三模擬Dear Mr. Brown， We have learned that you were going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our thank for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party which will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will possible last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of a whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and singing some English songs. In the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly making by ourselves. I believe you will have a good time together. Looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely， Frank答案與解析：Dear Mr. Brown， We have learned that you going back to America for the summer vacation. To express our for your excellent teaching in our school, we have decided have a party for you. The party will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall. It will last an hour. To start with, our monitor will give a speech on behalf of whole class. Then we would like to invite you to join us and some English songs. the end of the party, we will present you with some gifts and cards, mostly by ourselves. I believe will have a good time together. Looking forward to your coming. Yours sincerely， Frankwere改為are考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)主從句時態(tài)一致的原則，并結(jié)合語境可知，對方回美國是將來要發(fā)生的事情，故用are, be going back to.表示“將要回到”。thank改為thanks考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的“our”并結(jié)合語境可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞，故用名詞thanks“謝意”。decided后加to考查固定搭配。decide to do sth.固定短語“決定做某事”，故在decided后加to。刪除which考查關(guān)系詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，本句是一個簡單句，不是一個主從復(fù)合句，句中的“will start”作謂語，which多余，故刪除。possible改為possibly考查副詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，本句中的last是動詞，表示“持續(xù)”，故用副詞possibly修飾動詞last，在句子中作狀語。a改為the/our考查限定詞。此處表示“代表整個班級/我們整個班級”，故用定冠詞the或形容詞性物主代詞our修飾。singing改為sing考查非謂語動詞。根據(jù)and可知，此處和前面的join并列，應(yīng)用動詞原形。In改為At考查介詞。at the end of.固定短語“在結(jié)束時”，符合語境；in the end意為“最后”，單獨(dú)使用，后不跟介詞of。making改為made考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，動詞make和其邏輯主語some gifts and cards構(gòu)成動賓關(guān)系，且和介詞by呼應(yīng)，故用過去分詞作后置定語。you改為we考查代詞。根據(jù)句中的together和語境可知，此處表示“我們”，故把you改為we。Test 22019·合肥市質(zhì)量檢測 Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which run through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my disappoint, I found the river was serious polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, under my teacher's help, I used the equipments from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. But then, I used the data I had collected it to analyze the pollution of the river. Finally, I write a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make changes to protect our water resources.答案與解析： Last month our class organized a hike along the Chaobai River, which through Hebei, Beijing and Tianjin. Much to my ， I found the river was polluted. At that moment, I was determined to do what I could protect it. First, my teacher's help, I used the from the school lab to test the quality of the river water. then, I used the data I had collected to analyze the pollution of the river. Finally, I a report on the pollution of the river to the local government. I also gave a presentation in class where I suggested that we must make changes to protect our water resources.run改為runs考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。此處描述的是客觀事實，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，which引導(dǎo)定語從句，指代先行詞the Chaobai River，是第三人稱單數(shù)，故把run改為runs。disappoint改為disappointment考查名詞。much to one's disappointment固定短語“使某人大失所望的是”，故將disappoint改為disappointment。serious改為seriously考查副詞。修飾動詞polluted應(yīng)用副詞，所以將形容詞serious改為副詞seriously。protect前加to考查非謂語動詞。句中do what I could為do what I could do的省略；根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示目的，故在protect前加to。under改為with考查介詞。with one's help固定短語“在某人的幫助下”，故將under改為with。equipments改為equipment考查名詞。equipment是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以將equipments改為equipment。But改為And考查連詞。根據(jù)上文中的First和下文中的Finally可知，此處是作者保護(hù)河流的第二條措施，所以應(yīng)是順承關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將But改為And。刪除it考查代詞。該句含有定語從句I had collected，修飾先行詞the data，關(guān)系代詞作從句謂語had collected的賓語而被省略，所以代詞it多余，故刪除。write改為wrote考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)第一句中的時間狀語“Last month”可知，該文描述的是發(fā)生在過去的事，故用一般過去時。must改為should或刪除must考查虛擬語氣。此處that引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句，且主句謂語動詞為suggest，意為“建議”，that從句的謂語只能用“should動詞原形”結(jié)構(gòu)，且should可以省略，故可將must改為should或刪除must。Test 32019·長沙一模 Welcome to the Great Wall. Measured more than 6,000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the long wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. That is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is main made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. Though it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along with the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall will become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no wonderful that the Great Wall attract hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.答案與解析： Welcome to the Great Wall. more than 6, 000 kilometers in length, the Great Wall is known as the wall in the world. It has a long history of more than 2,000 years. is amazing about the Great Wall is that it is made of stones and bricks, and all the construction was done by hand. it was used to protect the country from foreign invaders, every few hundred meters along the Great Wall, there was a watchtower. Now, as symbol of China, the Great Wall become one of the most famous tourist attractions in the world. It is no that the Great Wall hundreds of thousands of foreign tourists every year.Measured改為Measuring考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，動詞measure和其邏輯主語the Great Wall構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用其現(xiàn)在分詞形式。long改為longest考查形容詞。根據(jù)該句中的“the”“in the world”并結(jié)合常識可知，長城是世界上最長的城墻，故用形容詞的最高級。That改為What考查主語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處引導(dǎo)主語從句，連接詞在從句中作主語，故用What來引導(dǎo)該主語從句。main改為mainly考查副詞。修飾動詞應(yīng)用副詞，故把main改為mainly。Though改為As/Since/Because考查連詞。根據(jù)前后句的句意可知，此處表示原因，故用連詞As/Since/Because。刪除with考查介詞。along the Great Wall表示“沿著長城”， with多余，故刪除。as后加a考查冠詞。symbol為可數(shù)名詞，此處泛指“中國的一個象征”，且symbol的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭，故在as后加a。will改為has考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示長城已經(jīng)成為全世界最著名的風(fēng)景名勝之一，故應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在完成時。wonderful改為wonder考查固定用法。It is no wonder that.固定短語“不足為奇”。attract改為attracts考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。此處描述的是一般的情況，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；句子主語為the Great Wall，是第三人稱單數(shù)，故把a(bǔ)ttract改為attracts。Test 42019·山西八校聯(lián)考 Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday the next month? If you hadn't arranged anything, come to the concert to be holding by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the ticket of the concert are sold very well. The only problem is when the performance starts quite lately at nine pm. We can take a bus there, so there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask your dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.答案與解析： Hi, Mike. How are you going to celebrate your birthday next month? If you arranged anything, come to the concert to be by my favorite band in the city stadium. I'm sure you will not regret it. The concert will be Sunday. Clearly it will be a hit, because the of the concert are very well. The only problem is the performance starts quite at nine pm. We can take a bus there, there will be no bus when the concert is over. I will ask dad to pick us up and you can stay in my home for the night.刪除next前的the考查冠詞。next month表示從現(xiàn)在算起的下一個月。the next month表示從過去或?qū)砟硶r算起的下個月。從全文看，作者現(xiàn)在在詢問對方下個月如何慶祝他的生日，顯然是指從現(xiàn)在算起的下個月。hadn't改為haven't考查時態(tài)。如果你還沒有安排任何生日慶?；顒?，請來看我最喜歡的樂隊在市體育場舉行的演唱會吧。表示“你還沒有安排”，應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在完成時，而非過去完成時，因為這里不存在“過去之過去”。holding改為held考查非謂語動詞。此處作后置定語，hold與被修飾詞之間是邏輯上的動賓關(guān)系且表將來故用不定式的被動式。be后加on考查介詞。如果沒有介詞，表示“演唱會是一個周日”，不符合邏輯。加上介詞后，表示“這個演唱會在周日舉行”，符合上下文意思。ticket改為tickets考查名詞。本句謂語是are，再根據(jù)上下文，演唱會的票應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)，故用tickets。sold改為selling考查語態(tài)。sell在此表示“有銷路”，sth. sell well/badly固定短語“某物暢銷/不暢銷”，不用于被動語態(tài)。when改為that考查表語從句。根據(jù)句意和分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，表語從句成分及意思完整，是在說明“演唱會開始的時間很晚”這一情況，故用that引導(dǎo)該表語從句。lately改為late考查副詞。late表示“晚，遲”，但lately表示“最近”，與上下文意思不符，故lately改為late。so改為but考查連詞。此處表示“我們?nèi)サ臅r候可以坐公交車，但是演唱會結(jié)束時就沒有公交車了”，前后分句為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but。your改為my考查代詞。根據(jù)下文的“你可以在我家過夜”可知，此處應(yīng)是“我會讓我爸爸來接我們”，故用my。- 6 -