2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題五 短文改錯專練(一)
短文改錯專練(一)Test 12019·重慶市七校聯(lián)考This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, but I went up to him, introduced himself in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. In my surprise, he just stared at me, looking puzzling. I thought I had not made myself understand, so I repeated again what I had said. But he just said anything that I didn't understand. I suddenly realize he was not an English speaker! Not all foreigner speak English.答案與解析:This morning I happened to meet a foreigner when I was taking walk in the park. It was a good chance for me to practise my spoken English, I went up to him, introduced in English and expressed my wish to have a talk with him. my surprise, he just stared at me, looking . I thought I had not made myself , so I repeated what I had said. But he just said that I didn't understand. I suddenly he was not an English speaker! Not all speak English.taking后加a考查固定短語。take a walk固定短語“散步”可知,此處應(yīng)加不定冠詞a。but改為so考查連詞。根據(jù)語境可知,前后句存在邏輯上的因果關(guān)系,并非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用連詞so。himself改為myself考查代詞。與句子主語I呼應(yīng),故用反身代詞myself作動詞introduced的賓語。In改為To考查介詞。根據(jù)語境可知,此處表示“令我吃驚的是”。to one's surprise固定短語“使某人驚訝的是”可知,此處應(yīng)用介詞To。puzzling改為puzzled考查形容詞。puzzled“困惑的”形容人;puzzling“令人困惑的”往往修飾物,故把puzzling改為puzzled。understand改為understood考查非謂語動詞。make oneself understood“清楚表達自己的意思”,為固定用法。刪除again考查副詞。repeat“重復(fù),重說”本身就含有“再次”的含義,因此副詞again“再一次”多余,故刪除。anything改為something考查代詞。根據(jù)語境可知,此處表示一些東西,故用代詞something。realize改為realized考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上文中的時間狀語“This morning”可知,此處敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情,故用一般過去時。foreigner改為foreigners考查名詞。foreigner是可數(shù)名詞,其前有all修飾,故用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。Test 22019·邯鄲一模 I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are traveled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!答案與解析: I am very to have the opportunity to see so many , but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to that these countries the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is foreigners feel when they visit China!luckily改為lucky考查形容詞。be lucky to do sth.固定短語,意為“做某事很幸運”,be動詞后常跟形容詞作表語,故將luckily改為lucky。place改為places考查名詞。place為可數(shù)名詞,其前有many修飾,表示復(fù)數(shù)概念,應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式,故將place改為places。traveled改為traveling考查非謂語動詞。根據(jù)本句的時間狀語now可知,此處表示正在進行的動作,應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在進行時,且travel與主語Dad and I之間為主動關(guān)系,故將traveled改為traveling。thinking改為think考查非謂語動詞。used to do sth.固定短語“過去常常做某事”,故將thinking改為think。are改為were考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)前面的used to可知,此處敘述發(fā)生在過去的事情,應(yīng)用一般過去時,故將are改為were。刪除of考查介詞。根據(jù)后面的friendlier可知,此處應(yīng)用a bit修飾形容詞比較級,而a bit of修飾名詞,故刪除of。there改為here考查副詞。根據(jù)上下文可知,此文應(yīng)是“我”在北歐三國旅行時于當(dāng)?shù)貙懙?,表示近指,故將there改為here。在addition后加to考查介詞。in addition固定短語“此外,另外”,常用在句首,后跟逗號; in addition to.固定短語“除之外”,后常接名詞或動名詞。根據(jù)句意及語境可知,此處表示“除之外”,故在addition后加to。anyone改為everyone考查不定代詞。根據(jù)上下文可知,此處指每一個瑞典人似乎都長著金發(fā)碧眼,故將anyone改為everyone。that改為how考查表語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處引導(dǎo)表語從句,并在從句中作方式狀語,應(yīng)用how引導(dǎo)該從句,故將that改為how。Test 32019·山西六校測試 My hometown is a small city in Southwest China, that is surrounded by rolling green mountains. A river runs across it, with various kinds of trees lined both banks. In spring fruit trees all blossom at the same time, spreading sweetly fragrance all around the city. In summer smaller boats are floating on the river, and the sound of the running water accompanying the laughters of children can be heard from far away. Although it rains a lot, but the climate is very mild. People here were warmhearted and straightforward. It's good place to spend hot summer days. I love it from the bottom of her heart.答案與解析: My hometown is a small city in Southwest China, is surrounded by rolling green mountains. A river runs it, with various kinds of trees both banks. In spring fruit trees all blossom at the same time, spreading fragrance all around the city. In summer boats are floating on the river, and the sound of the running water accompanying the of children can be heard from far away. Although it rains a lot, / the climate is very mild. People here warmhearted and straightforward. It's good place to spend hot summer days. I love it from the bottom of heart.that改為which考查定語從句。逗號后是非限制性定語從句,修飾先行詞city,且定語從句中缺少主語,故用which。across改為through考查介詞。across常表示運動在物體的表面進行,through表示運動在某個空間內(nèi)進行。此處表示河流從城市內(nèi)部穿過,故用through。lined改為lining考查非謂語動詞。此處line是及物動詞,表示“沿形成行或排”,根據(jù)后面的both banks可知,此處表示樹沿著兩岸排成排,line與trees是邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系,應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語。sweetly改為sweet考查形容詞。fragrance是名詞,修飾名詞用形容詞。smaller改為small考查形容詞。本句中無比較的對象或范圍,故用原級。laughters改為laughter考查名詞。laughter“笑聲”只能作不可數(shù)名詞用。刪除the climate前面的but或者but改為still/yet考查連詞。Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,主句前不需要連詞,但是可以使用副詞still或yet。were改為are考查時態(tài)。文章的主體時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時,此處也應(yīng)保持時態(tài)一致,用一般現(xiàn)在時。在good前加a考查冠詞。place是可數(shù)名詞,此處表示泛指,需要在前面加不定冠詞,且place的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭,故用a。her改為my考查物主代詞。根據(jù)句意可知,“我從我的心底愛著它”,故將her改為my。Test 42019·蘭州診斷考試 Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to them when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books to donate. This box, I think, was of great significance. My mother buys for me a lot of clothes, and I grow so fast. Much clothes don't fit me any longer. I've got no idea about what to deal with the clothes which are real new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in needs. In a word, I do think it is a good idea that light up our life and makes the world better place to live in.答案與解析: Recently I found a donation box in my neighborhood. People come to when they have old clothes, bags, newspapers and books to donate. This box, I think, of great significance. My mother buys me a lot of clothes, I grow so fast. clothes don't fit me any longer. I've got no idea about to deal with the clothes which are new and still in good condition. However, with this donation box, I can help those people in . In a word, I do think it is a good idea that up our life and makes the world better place to live in.them改為it考查代詞。根據(jù)語境可知,此處指代上文提到的“a donation box”,是第三人稱單數(shù),故將them改為it。was改為is考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知,此處是一般性描述,應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時。刪除for考查介詞。buy sb. sth.固定短語“給某人購買某物”,故將for刪除。and改為but考查連詞。根據(jù)語境可知,母親給我買了許多衣物,但是我長得太快,很多衣服都不合身了,此處和上文構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故用連詞but。Much改為Many考查形容詞。句中的“clothes”是復(fù)數(shù)名詞,故將Much改為Many。what改為how考查連接詞。根據(jù)語境可知,此處表示“我不知道該如何處理這些衣物”,故用how。real改為really考查副詞。此處應(yīng)用副詞修飾形容詞new,故用really。needs改為need考查固定短語。in need固定短語“短缺,困窘”,符合語境。light改為lights考查主謂一致。此處的定語從句的先行詞為a good idea,為單數(shù)形式,故用lights。world后加a考查冠詞。place為可數(shù)名詞,其前無限定詞修飾,且此處作賓語補足語,better的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭,故用不定冠詞a。- 6 -