2020版高考英語大二輪復(fù)習(xí) 專題五 短文改錯(cuò)專練（二）

短文改錯(cuò)專練(二)Test 12019·成都第三次診斷 Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.答案與解析： Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my and the voluntary work I done. After the online admission process, I took a deep and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn from the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me.achievement改為achievements考查名詞。根據(jù)該句中的“all of”可知，這里表示不止一項(xiàng)成就，故要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。have改為had考查動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)本句中的“l(fā)isted”可知，這里講述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，此處表示截止到過去這個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)我已經(jīng)做的志愿者工作，故要用過去完成時(shí)。complete改為completing考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。介詞After后面要用動(dòng)名詞，故應(yīng)改為completing。breathe改為breath考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的冠詞a和形容詞deep可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞，take a deep breath固定短語“深吸一口氣”。except后加an/the考查冠詞。offer為可數(shù)名詞，故前面要用限定詞修飾；此處可表泛指，且offer的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。total改為totally考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞got要用副詞形式。but改為and考查連詞?！拔覍⒆约烘i在房間里”和“思考我所做的一切”之間不存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是順承關(guān)系，故要用and。nothing改為something考查代詞。根據(jù)句中的“even though”并結(jié)合語境可知，雖然之前被拒絕讓“我”很傷心，但是“我”也從中學(xué)到了一些東西，故要用something。刪除made前的were考查語態(tài)。此處表示那些拒絕讓我傷心，應(yīng)用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。For改為With考查介詞。此處表示“帶著這樣一種態(tài)度”，故應(yīng)用介詞With。Test 22019·鄭州高三第一次質(zhì)量預(yù)測(cè) This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply. Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best­known attraction, where water seem to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are several museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful.What attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!答案與解析： This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply. Being capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best­known attraction, where water to melt into the sky the distance. Besides, there are several museums in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, they are working hard make the city more beautiful. attractive and inviting Hangzhou is!刪除had考查時(shí)態(tài)。had done為過去完成時(shí)，表示“過去的過去”。但在此句中，visited先發(fā)生，impressed后發(fā)生，因此用一般過去時(shí)，had多余，故刪除。a改為the考查冠詞。杭州為浙江省的省會(huì)，此處表示特指，故把a(bǔ)改為the。place改為places考查名詞。place為可數(shù)名詞，且根據(jù)該句中的“a lot of”可知，此處應(yīng)用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。seem改為seems考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。根據(jù)該句中的“is”可知，此處敘述一般的情況，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；該從句的主語是water，是不可數(shù)名詞，故用seems。by改為in考查介詞。in the distance固定短語“在遠(yuǎn)處，在遠(yuǎn)方”，故把by改為in。locating改為located考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。be located in固定短語“位于”，此處省略了be動(dòng)詞，故用過去分詞短語作后置定語。deliciously改為delicious考查形容詞。根據(jù)語境及該句中的“l(fā)ocal food”，可知此處應(yīng)用形容詞delicious。but改為and考查連詞。此處前面意為“這里的人友好、善良”，此處后面意為“他們正在努力工作以使這座城市更美麗”，根據(jù)句意可知，前后句之間為并列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，因此把but改為and。hard后加to考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。參見上題解析。此處應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語，故在hard后加to。What改為How考查感嘆句。根據(jù)該句中的“attractive and inviting”以及“Howadj.主語謂語”結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處應(yīng)用How來引導(dǎo)該感嘆句。Test 32019·福建省質(zhì)量檢查 As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young meet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.答案與解析： As everybody ， parents are worried too much about their ， especially when the young meet with challenges. So my parents. They are even more nervous than I when important test is coming. I have been thinking about to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve . When they are that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us . I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents.know改為knows考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。句意：眾所周知，父母太擔(dān)心他們的孩子了，尤其是當(dāng)孩子遇到挑戰(zhàn)的時(shí)候。該句陳述的是客觀情況，故用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；主語為everybody，為第三人稱單數(shù)，故謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。child改為children考查名詞。該處表示“他們的孩子”， child為可數(shù)名詞，由該句中的“parents”和“their”可知，該處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式children。do改為are考查倒裝句。句意：我的父母也是如此。此處表示前一句話中的謂語所說明的情況也適用于本句主語；根據(jù)前一句中的“are worried”可知，該處應(yīng)用are。a改為an考查冠詞。該處泛指“一場(chǎng)重要的考試”，故用不定冠詞；important的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故用不定冠詞an。talked改為talking考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。about為介詞，后接動(dòng)名詞talking作賓語。them改為it考查代詞。句意：“我”會(huì)讓他們知道“我”有一個(gè)目標(biāo)并且會(huì)努力地去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。此處代指前面的“a goal”，為單數(shù)，故用it。convincing改為convinced考查固定用法。句意：當(dāng)他們確信“我”會(huì)對(duì)“我”應(yīng)該做的事情負(fù)責(zé)時(shí)，他們想必不會(huì)感到擔(dān)心。be convinced that.固定短語“確信”。刪除that考查賓語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，該處為賓語從句，作介詞for的賓語，連接詞what在從句中作do的賓語，句子成分完整，that多余，故刪除。unconditional改為unconditionally考查副詞。一般用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，此處修飾動(dòng)詞love，故用副詞形式unconditionally。dealing后加with考查介詞。句意：我希望我的想法能對(duì)你處理與父母之間的關(guān)系有所幫助。deal with固定短語“處理，應(yīng)付”。Test 42019·昆明質(zhì)量檢測(cè) Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.答案與解析： Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students to work as either cashiers in a store waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed skills which are necessary for to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned to improve myself I get my dream job.choose改為chose考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上文中的“l(fā)ast vacation”可知，此處描述的情況發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。and改為or考查連詞。句意：一些學(xué)生選擇當(dāng)商店的收銀員或者餐館的服務(wù)員。either. or.固定短語“或者或者”。student改為students考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的“one of the 500”可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。decided后加to考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。decide to do sth.固定短語“決定做某事”。刪除of考查連詞。此處應(yīng)用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，故刪除of。because of是介詞短語，后一般跟名詞、代詞等。a改為an考查冠詞。advanced的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，所以用冠詞an。practically改為practical考查形容詞。名詞前面應(yīng)用形容詞修飾，故用practical。them改為me考查代詞。句意：我也培養(yǎng)了一些實(shí)用的技能，這些技能對(duì)我面對(duì)未來的挑戰(zhàn)來說是必要的。根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)把them改為me。are改為is考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。此處為一般性描述，且主語The most important thing為第三人稱單數(shù)，故將are改為is。after改為before/until考查狀語從句。此處表示在“我”找到理想的工作之前/直到“我”找到理想的工作。根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)將after改為before/until。- 7 -