湖北省2020年中考英語(yǔ)真題分類匯編 專題08 書面表達(dá)（含解析）

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1、專題08書面表達(dá) 目錄 一、 黃岡 二、 黃石 三、 隨州 四、 武漢 五、 咸寧 六、 襄陽(yáng) 七、 宜昌 八、 鄂州 九、 荊門 十、 孝感 一、 黃岡 七、書面表達(dá) 62.同學(xué)們，在初中三年的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中，我們從課本中學(xué)習(xí)了有關(guān) “Family”、 “Be polite to sb.”、“Protecting the environmment”、 “Volunteering”等話題和功能。假定你是李磊，請(qǐng)參考這些話題和功能，依據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇題為 “I’m Proud of My Family”的英語(yǔ)短文，向校報(bào)投稿，講述你的家庭

2、故事。 要點(diǎn)提示： 1、家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作； 2、鄰里和睦，禮貌待人； 3、愛護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起： 寫作要求 l、詞數(shù)90左有（短文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）； 2、根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3、短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。 參考詞匯：Work hard; be friendly to each other, get on well with; protect the environment； be volunteers I’m Proud of My Family My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. Th

3、ere are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.

4、 【答案】My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I. My family love each other. (My parents love us and we love our parents.) My parents both work hard. My sister and

5、I study hard at school, too. My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other. My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking

6、the bus to work. I never order takeaway food. My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. (My sister helps in the school library twice a week.) Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people. What a happy family! I’m proud of my family! 【解析】

7、 這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息講述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了題目：I’m Proud of My Family。主要從1、家人相親相愛，努力學(xué)習(xí)、工作；2、鄰里和睦，禮貌待人；3、愛護(hù)環(huán)境，從我做起：這三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。 【高分句型一】 My family try our best to

8、 protect the environment in our daily life. 我的家人盡力保護(hù)我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械沫h(huán)境。 該句話運(yùn)用了：try one’s best to do sth. 盡力做某事。protect the environment：保護(hù)環(huán)境。 【高分句型二】 My father is used to taking the bus to work. 我父親習(xí)慣乘公共汽車上班。 這句話運(yùn)用了：be used to doing sth. 習(xí)慣于做某事。 總之，本文運(yùn)用了大量的簡(jiǎn)單句，雖然沒有復(fù)合句，但是這寫簡(jiǎn)單句把作者的一家人的生活描寫的入情入理，就像是發(fā)生在我們的眼

9、前一樣。 二、 黃石 66.第二節(jié)書面表達(dá) 假如你是國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生李華，你的同學(xué)Tom寫了一封郵件詢問你暑假的安排，請(qǐng)給 Tom回封郵件，告知你的計(jì)劃，并邀請(qǐng)他來黃石游玩。 內(nèi)容包括：1、讀幾本好書； 2、參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)； 3、幫父母做家務(wù)； 4、和朋友一起鍛煉； 5、邀請(qǐng)Tom。 注意： 1、詞數(shù)80左右； 2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3、文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)信息； 4、開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞忙：有意義的 meaningful 經(jīng)典文學(xué)作品classic literature works 社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)soc

10、ial practice activities Dear Tom， I'm very happy to hear from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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12、______________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Tom， I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take p

13、art in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to me

14、et you. How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 本文屬于材料作文，寫信告訴湯姆你的暑假計(jì)劃并邀請(qǐng)湯姆來黃石玩。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。 亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, tak

15、e part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 三、 隨州 61.書面表達(dá) 茶是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)飲食文化的組成部分，是生活中不可或缺的飲品。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)了解茶并傳播茶文化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 要點(diǎn)提示：1.歷史悠久

16、，約5000年前神農(nóng)首次發(fā)現(xiàn)茶可以飲用； 2.種植廣泛，安溪和杭州尤以茶聞名： 3.喝茶有很多好處：有利健康，醒腦提神等； 4.世界各地許多人喜歡喝茶并收集茶具。 寫作要求：1.文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫； 2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。 China is famous for tea. 【答案】One possible version：China is famous for tea

17、.Chinese tea has a long history.It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5，000 years ago.Tea is produced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea. There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make yo

18、u relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea scts. As middle schol students，we should kmow about tea culture and spread it around the world. 【解析】 茶是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)飲食文化的組成部分，是生活中不可或缺的飲品。作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)了解茶并傳播茶文化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的

19、就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱單數(shù)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。這篇短文是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，文中用到了一些好的句型：There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of ca can make you relaxed and fresh.It seems that many people all over the world

20、love drinking tea and collecting tea scts.這些給文章增色不少。 四、 武漢 七、書面表達(dá) 61.學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正在組織題為“My Family”的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi) 容提示用英語(yǔ)完成征文。 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： 1.三口之家，家庭幸福，鄰里和睦； 2.父母為教師，在校深受歡迎； 3.分擔(dān)家務(wù)，周末戶外活動(dòng)； 4.相互陪伴，經(jīng)常交流，良好家規(guī)助我成長(zhǎng)： 5.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充說明一至兩點(diǎn)與家庭相關(guān)的情況。 注意： 1．文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 2．詞數(shù)：60 - 80; 3．內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯； 4．標(biāo)題和

21、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： popular adj.受歡迎的 activity n.．活動(dòng)rule n．規(guī)矩 My Family I’m Li Ming.

22、 【答案】I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbo

23、rs. At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place. 【解析】 本文屬于材料作文，介紹我的家

24、庭。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。 亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get along well with, try one’s best to do, accompany with, communicate with, help sb do以及grow up，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。 五、 咸寧 九、短文寫作 53.運(yùn)動(dòng)塑造健康，團(tuán)結(jié)凝聚力量。5月10 日，學(xué)校舉辦了春季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。你和班上的許多同

25、學(xué)參加了比賽項(xiàng)目，戰(zhàn)績(jī)顯著。其他同學(xué)觀看了比賽，并為選手們加油喝彩。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面四幅圖片的提示，寫一篇日記，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動(dòng)感受。 寫作要求： 1．文章中勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名； 2．文章須包含圖片所提供的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文連貫，條理清晰； 3．詞數(shù)80~100個(gè)，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。 參考詞匯：teamwork Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterda

26、y. Our school held a spring sports meet. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

27、__________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter rela

28、y race. Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in t

29、he boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day. Meanwhile, teamw

30、ork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life. 【解析】 這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)內(nèi)容介紹一下運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動(dòng)感受。所提供的卡片中列舉了跳遠(yuǎn)、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要從同學(xué)們的參加情況和自己的活動(dòng)感受這個(gè)方面去寫。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意日記中必須包含圖片上

31、的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。 【高分句型一】 Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我們班的每個(gè)人都很興奮，因?yàn)槲覀內(nèi)〉昧艘粋€(gè)很好的成績(jī)。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。 【高分句型二】 My class

32、mates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同學(xué)袁穎和方丹輕松地獲得了女子跳遠(yuǎn)和跳高的冠軍。我也參加了男子100米賽跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒裝句。 六、 襄陽(yáng) 七、書面表達(dá) 61.據(jù)了解，為了進(jìn)一步引導(dǎo)中學(xué)生積極參加體育鍛煉，提高身體素質(zhì)，襄陽(yáng)市教育主管部門正在研究制定有關(guān)“中考”體育考試的改革方案

33、( the plan)，考慮在原有項(xiàng)目的基礎(chǔ)上增加籃球、排球或足球，總分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作為一名參加過體育“中考”的學(xué)生，你對(duì)這樣的改革持什么樣的態(tài)度。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文表述你的觀點(diǎn)。 1．要點(diǎn)提示： (l)觀點(diǎn)明確（要么贊成，要么反對(duì)）： (2)理由充分（可針對(duì)增加考試的項(xiàng)目和調(diào)整的分值，也可只選其一。限三條理由）； (3)給出建議（圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)提出一條合理化建議）。 2．注意事項(xiàng)： (l)字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右： (2)行文應(yīng)連貫流暢； (3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。 ___________________________

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36、_______________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】In my poinion,I agree with the reform plan of“high school entrance examination”physical education examination. It is reported that most young people are getting unhealthy.Without regular exercise, s

37、tudents are getting weaker and weaker.If the total score of "high school entrance examination" sports is increased,Both teachers and students will undoubtedly attach great importance to physical education,and it’s easy to imagine the phenomenon that PE is always taken away will never be seen.Student

38、s will be healthier and more energetic in their study.It is helpful to improve students' comprehensive ability and quality. I think every school should make a plan to cultivate students' interest in sports so as to improve students' physical quality. 【解析】 這是一篇給材料作文。襄陽(yáng)市教育主管部門正在研究制定有關(guān)“中考”體育考試的改革

39、方案，考慮在原有項(xiàng)目的基礎(chǔ)上增加籃球、排球或足球，總分(the score)也由30分增加至50分。作為一名參加過體育“中考”的學(xué)生，你對(duì)這樣的改革持什么樣的態(tài)度。要求根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文表述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。 七、 宜昌 61.書面表達(dá)：

40、 假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Mike得知你們開展了“做生態(tài)小公民，建設(shè)美麗家鄉(xiāng)”的活動(dòng)，他來信表示很感興趣并想了解具體細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)給Mike寫一封回信向他描述你（們）曾經(jīng)做過的一件事或參與的一次活動(dòng)。 要求： (1) 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括活動(dòng)或事件的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、過程和你的感受： (2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名：詞數(shù)80~100。開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Milk, I’m glad to hear that you are interessted in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological e

41、itizen(生態(tài)公民)，we did a good job. Last

42、

43、 Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours． LiHua 【答案】Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an ecological citizen, we did a good iob. Last Sund

44、ay,I went to our community with my friends to give the people there a speech. It was about how to protect our environment. After the speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution. To cut down waste pollution, they should take bags to go shopping

45、. And they alsoknew to put litter in different bins. Finally, we called them up/called on them to make a difference to our environment together. We were tired but happy that day. Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my hometown one day. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 這篇短文使用

46、了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be glad to do，be interested in，ecological citizen，give a speech，how to do，take a bus，ride a bike，instead of，cut down，go shopping，call them up，make a difference，become better and better等。而I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities./ After th

47、e speech, they knew they should take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving to cut down air pollution.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。 八、 鄂州 VII . 書面表達(dá) 58.現(xiàn)在越來越多的學(xué)生使用“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)APP 來搜查他們不會(huì)做的題目。對(duì)此，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下文字的提示，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。 優(yōu)點(diǎn) 1

48、.及時(shí)幫助學(xué)生解決在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難； 2.在家就能學(xué)習(xí)，簡(jiǎn)單，方便； 3.可以選擇自己喜歡的老師，學(xué)習(xí)興趣更濃。 缺點(diǎn) 1.有的學(xué)生假裝學(xué)習(xí)，事實(shí)上在玩游戲； 2.有的學(xué)生不想獨(dú)立思考，直接照抄答案，他們根本不關(guān)心自己的學(xué)習(xí)，只是虛度光陰。 你的建議 聯(lián)系實(shí)際，給出自己合理的建議。 要求： 1. 80－100 詞。（開頭的首句已給出，不計(jì)算在詞數(shù)內(nèi)） 2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其他相關(guān)信息，否則，不予評(píng)分。 參考詞匯：convenient 方便的，便利的 pretend to do… 假裝做… think ind

49、ependently 獨(dú)立思考 Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

50、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

51、___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Today, more

52、 and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. Some people think it’s useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It’s easy and convenient for them. They can study at home. They can choose their own te

53、achers they like, and they will be more interested in studying. However, others don’t think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don’t want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don’t care about their studying at all. It’s a waste of tim

54、e. I think it’s good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don’t want to study, it’s very bad. 【解析】 這篇作文要求我們對(duì)介紹不同人對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的看法，并聯(lián)系實(shí)際，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。題目中利用表格的形式，列出了寫作的主要內(nèi)容，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下幾個(gè)部分：作業(yè)幫的優(yōu)點(diǎn)、缺點(diǎn)以及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)?？梢苑譃槿畏謩e進(jìn)行敘述，各自的理由在表格中都已呈現(xiàn)，學(xué)生們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。最后一部分

55、內(nèi)容則需要學(xué)生們聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，發(fā)揮想象力，自己來補(bǔ)充適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容。文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要將題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容都包括在作文中，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。可以根據(jù)表達(dá)需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容更加充實(shí)、完整，但需要注意合理性，要緊貼題目要求和文章主旨。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不能逐詞翻譯表格內(nèi)容，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)為基礎(chǔ)，穿插并列句、復(fù)合句以及其他復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，提升作文檔次。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使行文連貫、自然。這是一篇優(yōu)秀是作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，把人們對(duì)“作業(yè)幫”這個(gè)應(yīng)用軟件的不同看法進(jìn)行了

56、介紹，并在最后發(fā)表了自己的觀點(diǎn)。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)。各部分內(nèi)容之間層次清晰，敘述有條理，三段式的作文，一目了然，每一段的主題也很明確。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言得體。句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。除簡(jiǎn)單句結(jié)構(gòu)外，短文里還使用了and連接的并列句、賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，以及動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)名詞等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)。短文中較好的句型有The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in ti

57、me.、They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.、They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games.、I think it’s good for students who are hard-working等等。 九、 荊門 第三節(jié) 書面表達(dá) 57.為弘揚(yáng)中華傳統(tǒng)文化，你校舉辦了一次“戲曲進(jìn)校園”展演活動(dòng)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你將活動(dòng)的相關(guān)情況寫信告知

58、你的英國(guó)筆友John。 要點(diǎn)： 1. 時(shí)間：5月16日下午2:30; 2. 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng); 3. 內(nèi)容：校長(zhǎng)在開幕式上致辭；戲曲知識(shí)競(jìng)賽；師生戲曲表演等； 4. 感受：對(duì)傳統(tǒng)文化有了進(jìn)一步的了解…… 要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名或地名； 2. 語(yǔ)言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 3. 要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 4. 詞數(shù)：80—100 (開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 參考詞匯：戲曲 opera (n.) 開幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辭 make a speech Dear J

59、ohn, How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

60、 Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear John， How is everything going? I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.

61、 The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful

62、opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own. Best wishes

63、! Yours Li Hua 【解析】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this ac

64、tivity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。 十、 孝感 八、書面表達(dá) 61.隨著年

65、齡的增長(zhǎng)，你周圍的事物也發(fā)生了很大變化。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“Great changes around me”為題，寫一篇短文。 寫作要點(diǎn)： 1. 過去, 道路狹窄(narrow), 房展老舊, 空氣…河水… 2.現(xiàn)在。路面潔凈、寬闊, 交通便利；高樓林立；藍(lán)天白云, 滿城綠樹鮮花, 小鳥歌唱；人們… 3.感受, … 寫作要求： 1.要點(diǎn)齊全, 省略號(hào)處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮, 但不要逐句翻譯； 2. 語(yǔ)句連貫, 條理清晰, 詳略得當(dāng), 書寫工整； 3文中不得出現(xiàn)任何賓實(shí)的信息（地名、校名和人名等）； 4.100詞左右, 短文的翅目和開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Great Chang

66、es around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes around Me In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me