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1、英語英語第43講書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是思湘,你的美國筆友艾米來信想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日端午節(jié)。請根據(jù)如下提示用英語寫一篇80詞以上的回信給她。注意:1.信中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息;2信的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3參考詞匯:端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival;為了紀(jì)念in memory ofOne possible version:Dear Amy,I learn from your letter that you want to know something about Chinese traditional festivalThe Dragon Boat
2、 Festival.The festival has a history of more than 2000 years.It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.On that day,people watch exciting dragonboat races and make delicious Zongzi,a kind of special food with sticky rice,meat etc.wrapped in bamboo leaves.The
3、se two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan,a great poet in history.In a word,we all love the festival because its a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family.I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.Best wishes!Si_Xiang書面表達(dá)題主要考查學(xué)
4、生在特定的語境中綜合運(yùn)用語言進(jìn)行表達(dá)的能力;同時,還考查學(xué)生英文書寫的規(guī)范性、美觀性等。一、常見的書面表達(dá)題型1根據(jù)文體歸類:日記、書信、通知、便條、啟事、賀卡、發(fā)言稿、調(diào)查報(bào)告、記敘文、說明文及議論文等。然而許多試題都將記敘、議論、說明等表達(dá)方式融為一體,形成復(fù)合型的寫作。2根據(jù)所提供的材料形式歸類:圖畫作文、圖表作文、提綱作文及命題作文等。這樣的測試形式既有一定的控制性,又有一定的開放性,為考生展示其寫作能力提供了發(fā)揮的空間。二、如何寫出優(yōu)美的文章1選準(zhǔn)詞語。語言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎習(xí)慣的詞語,切忌使用生僻的詞匯。選詞要達(dá)意,英語中有許多同義但用法不同的詞匯或短語,切忌混淆用法
5、。用詞要簡明扼要,在不確定的情況下,寧可用常用詞簡單明了地表達(dá)信息。2寫好句子。運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯、短語,結(jié)合一定的語法知識,按照句子的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn),直接用英語寫出相應(yīng)的句子。運(yùn)用固定句式表達(dá)信息,把比較復(fù)雜的句子分成兩個或兩個以上的簡單句子,減少寫錯句的幾率。把兩個簡單句用一個復(fù)合句或較復(fù)雜的簡單句表達(dá)出來,這樣可提高文章的可讀性,但在沒有把握的情況下慎用。遇見生詞或不熟悉的表達(dá)時,可以在保持原意的基礎(chǔ)上,用不同的表達(dá)方式寫出來。3設(shè)計(jì)段落。一個完整的段落要有主題句、拓展句及結(jié)尾句。正確運(yùn)用連接詞使語言銜接自然、行文流暢。4書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔。三、如何提升寫作1熟悉五種基本句式及一些使用頻率較高的句式
6、。2收集優(yōu)秀范文并大聲朗讀來擴(kuò)展思路及培養(yǎng)語感。3堅(jiān)持常規(guī)練習(xí)。即:詞詞組句子段落篇章。切記:簡單句是主菜,要做到運(yùn)用自如;復(fù)雜句是佐料,有之增色,缺之乏味,但不可舍本逐末,以免弄巧成拙。4仔細(xì)審題,要點(diǎn)齊全,人稱及時態(tài)運(yùn)用正確?!纠?】 假設(shè)你和朋友將在今年暑假參加以“擁抱大自然”為主題的戶外拓展夏令營,其中包括小組自由活動。請你為你們小組設(shè)計(jì)一個活動方案。(2016,襄陽模擬)提示詞語:climb mountains;go fishing;pick fruits;have a campfire (篝火晚會)要求:1.寫明你們組計(jì)劃要做的具體活動,并給出理由;2提示詞語僅供參考,可增減內(nèi)容;
7、3詞數(shù)80100。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名與地名。We are going for a camp this summer.Im glad to make a plan for our group. _ 解析:第一步:認(rèn)真仔細(xì)地閱讀提示,思考所提供的信息,計(jì)劃文章大致內(nèi)容。第二步:根據(jù)信息要求遣詞造句,連句成文。第三步:通讀全文,糾正錯誤,書寫整潔。寫作要點(diǎn):1.具體的活動要豐富多彩。2.寫出安排這些活動的理由。注意:此文是計(jì)劃打算,應(yīng)用將來時態(tài)。切忌寫成流水賬。【參考范文】We_are_going_for_a_camp_this_summer.Im_glad_t
8、o_make_a_plan_for_our_group.First of all,we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that,well have a fruitpicking competition between boys and girls,which will help us know each other better.Whats more,there will be a campfire.We can en
9、joy ourselves by singing,dancing and telling stories.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?We are looking forward to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school,and I believe well have a wonderful time together.精彩再現(xiàn):文章內(nèi)容完整,敘述清楚,要點(diǎn)一目了然。使用了first of all,after
10、that,whats more表順序的副詞來使文章條理更清晰,更流暢。經(jīng)典句型:we plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.Wont it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends?I believe well have a wonderful time together.【例2】 由于父母的溺愛,現(xiàn)在許多孩子基本不做學(xué)習(xí)以外的事情,導(dǎo)致獨(dú)立生活能力不強(qiáng)。請你根據(jù)下面表格
11、中的內(nèi)容,按要求用英語寫一篇短文,談?wù)勛鳛橹袑W(xué)生,我們應(yīng)該如何培養(yǎng)自己的獨(dú)立性。要求:1.語句通順,意思連貫,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;2必須包括表格中所有內(nèi)容,并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;3行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名;4詞數(shù)70左右。(短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))WaysThings we can dobegin with our own thingsclean our own rooms,.help with houseworkcook,.learn activelylearn by ourselves,.think about things by ourselves.As middle s
12、chool students,its very important for us to be independent.What should we do to make us independent?First,_I think if we keep on doing these,well become more and more independent.解析:第一步:認(rèn)真閱讀題目要求,仔細(xì)觀察表格中的內(nèi)容。第二步:根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,把握好文章的中心,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。選用合適的表順序的副詞使文章條理清晰。第三步:通讀全文,檢查要點(diǎn)是否遺漏,糾正錯誤,書寫要整潔。注意:表達(dá)培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立性的方法時,多用祈使句;
13、描述可以做的事情時,可用到can,should,need等情態(tài)動詞;寫作時,時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時,人稱采用第一人稱,給出的要點(diǎn)不能遺漏,并且注意詞數(shù)要求。【參考范文】As_middle_school_students,its_very_important_for_us_to_be_independent.What_should_we_do_to_make_us_independent?First,lets begin with our own things.Its our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds.Second,help with
14、housework.We can help cook or clean the house in our free time.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.Third,learn actively.We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time.Finally,think about things by ourselves.We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone.Dont alwa
15、ys depend on others.I_think_if_we_keep_on_doing_these,well_become_more_and_more_independent.精彩再現(xiàn):整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,內(nèi)容詳盡,要點(diǎn)明確。層次清晰。先表明自己的觀點(diǎn),后用first,second,third,finally等表順序的副詞把觀點(diǎn)一一陳列,清楚明了,條理分明。經(jīng)典句型:Its our job to.Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves.Dont always depend on others.假如你是李華,你的好朋友L
16、isa不久前參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰了, 她為這次失敗所困擾,無心學(xué)習(xí)。請你給她寫一封電子郵件,建議她正確地看待達(dá)人秀節(jié)目,享受參與的過程而不必太在意結(jié)果;提醒她實(shí)現(xiàn)理想的途徑有很多,只有努力才能獲得成功;鼓勵她好好學(xué)習(xí),也不放棄個人愛好,開心地度過每一天。要求:(1)包含以上所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(2)詞數(shù):6080詞(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(3)信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校名和地名。One possible version:To:Subject:To think about talent shows in a proper wayDear Lisa,Im s
17、orry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. Id like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.Yes,talent shows may change ones future.They offer the opportunity to show ones talents,and give people a way to make their dreams come true.Since only some people
18、 are truly talented,there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.In addition,there are many ways to success,and only by working hard can you achieve your goals.As a teenager,you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time,which,without doubt,will enrich your future life.Hope youll be happy every day.Yours,Li Hua