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1、Stop thief! 抓小偷抓小偷run after sb. 追趕某人追趕某人bench 板凳板凳umbrella 雨傘雨傘arrest sb. 逮捕某人逮捕某人praise sb. for sth. 因某事表揚某人因某事表揚某人contact sb. 聯系某人聯系某人instant messaging 即時信息即時信息surf the Internet 上網上網housing conditions 住房條件住房條件furniture 家具家具express ones sincere thanks to sb. 向某人表達真誠的謝意向某人表達真誠的謝意a meaningful activit
2、y 一個有意義的活動一個有意義的活動be decorated with . 用用裝飾著裝飾著colorful ribbons 彩帶彩帶blessing 祝福祝福in advance 預先預先burst into tears 哭起來哭起來take outdoor exercise 進行戶外活動進行戶外活動set out for . 出發(fā)去某地出發(fā)去某地in high spirits 情緒高漲地情緒高漲地beautiful scenery 美麗的風景美麗的風景fall behind 落后；掉隊落后；掉隊be bathed in sunshine 沐浴在陽光中沐浴在陽光中a thorough cle
3、aning 大清潔大清潔scatter 散落散落wipe the dust 掃灰塵掃灰塵mop the floor 拖地拖地satisfaction 滿足滿足1. How beautiful the environment is! 多么美麗的環(huán)境??！多么美麗的環(huán)境?。?. I had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today. 今天我和今天我和一些同學一起進行了一次愉快的出游。一些同學一起進行了一次愉快的出游。3. With the economy developing rapidly, Im glad to see our city
4、 is taking on a new look. 隨著經濟的快速發(fā)展，我非常高興地看到我們隨著經濟的快速發(fā)展，我非常高興地看到我們的城市呈現出新的面貌。的城市呈現出新的面貌。4. You can imagine how charming it used to be: fresh air, clean water, green grass, swimming fish, flying birds, and the golden sunshine. 你可你可以想象一下這里曾經是多么的迷人：新鮮的空氣，清澈的水面，嫩以想象一下這里曾經是多么的迷人：新鮮的空氣，清澈的水面，嫩綠的青草，暢游的小魚，飛
5、翔的小鳥，還有金色的陽光。綠的青草，暢游的小魚，飛翔的小鳥，還有金色的陽光。5. We caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. 我們看到了一條河流，河的兩岸都是綠草和漂亮的花。我們看到了一條河流，河的兩岸都是綠草和漂亮的花。6. I would like to give a general picture of . 我想給我想給一個總體的描一個總體的描述。述。7. Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have take
6、n place in our life. 過去的二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了重大的變化。過去的二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了重大的變化。8. We students specially organized a meaningful activity on Teachers Day. 在教師節(jié)，我們學生特別組織了一次有意義的活動。在教師節(jié)，我們學生特別組織了一次有意義的活動。9. The classroom was carefully decorated with balloons and colorful ribbons. 教室被大家用氣球和彩帶仔細地裝飾起來。教室被大家用氣球和彩帶仔細地裝飾起
7、來。10. Ms. Li was deeply moved, with tears filling her eyes. 李老師很受感李老師很受感動，眼里充滿了淚花。動，眼里充滿了淚花。11. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy. 盡管很累，我從沒有覺得這盡管很累，我從沒有覺得這么開心。么開心。1. He thanked me for having helped he out of trouble.1. he改為him2. They showed us around the farm, which we saw many kinds of plants.2
8、. which改為where3. Fortunate, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.3. Fortunate改為Fortunately4. The cause of the fire broke out in the office building last night is being investigated.4. fire后面加which/that，或broke改為breaking5. The blind man was out danger, but the young woman got injured
9、.5. out后面加of6. I arrived at the train station at 3:00 a.m., surrounding by people who did not speak my language.6. surrounding改為surrounded7. My friend was unhappy so his daddy was very strict with him.7. so改為because8. If you will come to Guilin, you will know how clear the water is and how green the
10、 hills are.8. 刪掉第一個will9. I was walking along the street that a terrible traffic accident happened.9. that改為when10. One day, anything unpleasant happened.10. anything改為something【20142014全國大綱卷：十年后的我全國大綱卷：十年后的我】一家英語報社向中學生征文，主一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是題是“十年后的我十年后的我”，請，請根據下列根據下列要點和你的想象完成短文。要點和你的想象完成短文。 1. 1. 家庭；家
11、庭； 2. 2. 工作；工作； 3. 3. 業(yè)余生活。業(yè)余生活。滿分佳作（一）滿分佳作（一）I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I would like to give a general picture of my future life in ten years.First of all, I will have a warm family where all family members will love each other and care about each other. As for me, sin
12、ce being a teacher is my dream, Im sure that this dream will come true then. I wish to teach foreign students traditional Chinese culture in a college at that time and I will certainly introduce China to the world. Time permitting, I expect to have more spare time to spend with my fiends so that we
13、can have a better relationship.Such will be my future life, the one I have been dreaming of.滿分賞析滿分賞析give a general picture of(作出總體的描述作出總體的描述)，很好地作為本文的，很好地作為本文的寫作總起句。寫作總起句。恰當用到了恰當用到了 where 作關系副詞的定語從句；考生要注意不要僅為作關系副詞的定語從句；考生要注意不要僅為了用從句而用從句，避免行文看起來生硬。了用從句而用從句，避免行文看起來生硬。用到用到being現在分詞短語和現在分詞短語和Im sure tha
14、t接賓語從句，使句式多接賓語從句，使句式多樣；另外樣；另外come true使用正確，其主語應該是使用正確，其主語應該是“夢想夢想”，切忌寫出，切忌寫出“I come true my dream”這樣錯誤的句子。這樣錯誤的句子。Time permitting屬于獨立主格結構，也就是屬于獨立主格結構，也就是“主語主語+分詞分詞”結構，結構，體現了作者的語法功底。體現了作者的語法功底。用到用到such開頭的倒裝句。開頭的倒裝句。滿分佳作（二）滿分佳作（二） I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my lif
15、e will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope Ill work in a computer company as a program designer. Ill enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Ill do a good job in whatever I do. In my fr
16、ee time, Ill continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, Ill travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. 滿分賞析滿分賞析本文結構清晰，第一句總起寫作內容。本文結構清晰，第一句總起寫作內容。從句從句whatever I do作作in的賓語。的賓語。用用In a word進行總結。進行總結。【2004遼寧
17、卷改編：路人幫助抓小偷遼寧卷改編：路人幫助抓小偷】作文翻譯作文翻譯 一個星期天早上，中山公園里人很多。一個星期天早上，中山公園里人很多。在一個貨攤前，一個女在一個貨攤前，一個女人正在買雪糕，這時她身后的一個年輕人搶走了她的手提包。她大人正在買雪糕，這時她身后的一個年輕人搶走了她的手提包。她大喊：喊：“抓小偷！他搶了我的包！抓小偷！他搶了我的包！”聽到這些話，一些人開始追趕他。聽到這些話，一些人開始追趕他。有一位老人靜靜地坐在附近的長凳上。當搶包者跑過他身邊時，老有一位老人靜靜地坐在附近的長凳上。當搶包者跑過他身邊時，老人快速地拿起他的雨傘，把它放在搶包者的兩腿間。那個年輕人狠人快速地拿起他的雨
18、傘，把它放在搶包者的兩腿間。那個年輕人狠狠地摔倒在地上。很快，兩個警察乘警車來了，把他抓住了。女人狠地摔倒在地上。很快，兩個警察乘警車來了，把他抓住了。女人感謝了老人，周圍的人都贊揚老人聰明。感謝了老人，周圍的人都贊揚老人聰明。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：貨攤貨攤stand (n.) ；搶奪搶奪 snatch (v.) ；逮捕逮捕 arrest (v.) One Sunday morning, there were many people in Zhongshan Park. At a stand, a woman was buying an ice-cream when a young man be
19、hind her snatched her handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! Hes snatched my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sitting quietly on a bench nearby. As the snatcher was running past him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatc
20、hers legs. The young man fell down on the ground hard. Soon two policemen came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.【2004北京春季卷改編：過去和現在生活的對比北京春季卷改編：過去和現在生活的對比】作文翻譯作文翻譯我們生活的改變我們生活的改變 過去的二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的改變。以我的家過去的
21、二十年左右，我們的生活發(fā)生了巨大的改變。以我的家庭為例。庭為例。過去，我父母主要通過寫信和別人聯系，但是現在我們發(fā)過去，我父母主要通過寫信和別人聯系，但是現在我們發(fā)郵件或者使用即時通訊。以前，我父母聽收音機和看電視來獲取新郵件或者使用即時通訊。以前，我父母聽收音機和看電視來獲取新聞和其他資訊，但是現在我們通過電腦或智能手機上網。另外一個聞和其他資訊，但是現在我們通過電腦或智能手機上網。另外一個巨大的改變是居住條件。當他們結婚時，我父母住在擠滿了家具的巨大的改變是居住條件。當他們結婚時，我父母住在擠滿了家具的一個小房間，但是現在我們搬進了一間新的三房套間。總之，過去一個小房間，但是現在我們搬進了
22、一間新的三房套間?？傊?，過去二十年生活的改善給我們帶來了舒適和方便。二十年生活的改善給我們帶來了舒適和方便。Changes In Our Life Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life. Take my family for example. My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we send emails or use instant messaging.
23、 And once my parents listened to the radio and watched TV for news and other information, but now we surf the Internet via computers or smart phones. Another big change is in the housing conditions. When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture
24、, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment. In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.【2012陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)】假定你是李華。教師節(jié)那天你們班組織了一次活動，請根據寫作要假定你是李華。教師節(jié)那天你們班組織了一次活動，請根據寫作要點，為校刊點，為?？坝⒄Z角英語角”版寫一篇短文。寫作要點：版寫一篇短文。寫作要點： 1. 活動的策劃；活動的策劃；
25、 2. 教室的布置；教室的布置； 3. 活動的內容；活動的內容； 4. 你的感想。你的感想。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.【20122012陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)陜西卷改編：慶祝教師節(jié)】 Ms. Li, our Engli
26、sh teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day. She did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. In order to express our sincere thanks to her, we students specially organized a meaningful activity on Teachers
27、Day. The classroom was carefully decorated with balloons and colorful ribbons, with our blessings written on the blackboard. Standing in rows, all of us kept silent before Ms. Li came in, and she received warm applause upon appearing at the door. Meanwhile, our monitor presented flowers well prepare
28、d in advance to her. Ms. Li was so surprised and happy that she burst into tears with excitement. Ms. Li was deeply moved, with tears filling her eyes. Through this activity, not only do I know the teachers kindness but realize a simple greeting from us is the best gift for our teachers.【20132013江西卷
29、改編：登山活動江西卷改編：登山活動】星光中學（星光中學（XingguangXingguang High School High School）近期舉行了）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內容包括：報道此次活動。內容包括：1. 1. 時間與地點：時間與地點：4 4月月1010日，大青山（日，大青山（DaqingDaqing MountainMountain）；）；2. 2. 活動的過程；活動的過程；3. 3. 你對于這次活動的評論。你對于這次活動的評論。【20132013江西卷改編：登山活動江西卷改編
30、：登山活動】 In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singin
31、g and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give
32、 us relaxation, it also promoted the friendship among us.【20132013陜西卷改編：做家務陜西卷改編：做家務】假定你是李華。請根據寫作要點用英語寫一篇周假定你是李華。請根據寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經歷。記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經歷。寫作要點：寫作要點： 1. 1. 做家務的理由；做家務的理由；2. 2. 做家務的過程；做家務的過程；3. 3. 你的感受。你的感受。I am an 18-year-old middle school student I am an 18-year-old midd
33、le school student 【20132013陜西卷改編：做家務陜西卷改編：做家務】 Im an 18-year old middle school student.Im an 18-year old middle school student. I have been I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry, I
34、begin to think about housework. Feeling quite sorry, I begin to think about what to do to help.what to do to help. Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough suddenly got an idea: why not
35、 give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furnitur
36、e. After place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floor.that, I swept and mopped the floor. At this very moment, my parents came back and were At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised. My mother gave me a hug and I could see quite surprised. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.happy.
廣東省南海桂城中學高三英語二輪復習 第二篇 分類寫作10 記敘描寫課件
